After I Was Reborn, I Slapped the Entire Division in the Face

Heroine: If you are not decisive enough, you will continue to be confused by it. The sect had already treated her like this, but she didn't even think about getting out as soon as possible, but instead gave her trump card resources to the sect. Thinking about the problem is also a mistake, especially if the princess (who is an ordinary person) takes away the sword, it is a mistake that a monk should not make. I am also less defensive, which is a big taboo. Negotiating transactions with others is too unassertive. After all, what you hold in your hands is the lifeline of the other party (a very important thing), and it is too revealing of your trump card (although it is a bit realistic, after all, rebirth does not mean that your IQ has become higher) The overall impression of the heroine is: not sharp enough, she can hit the nail on the head when she grasps the vitality. The heroine and junior sister: There is only one at the moment, too kind and cowardly (emphasis on cowardice) This kind of temper is also easy to bully. I hope the heroine can help change it. Growth is painful, but if you don't grow, you will die. The male protagonist (no mistake, it should be this demon king): emm I don't think there's any problem with the male protagonist. Compared to being kind and caring about the world, I like his decisive and will-kill character. It's not that he likes to kill innocent people indiscriminately, it's just that this kind of protagonist is more likable when he's not sloppy. Let's briefly discuss the male protagonist's purpose: Personally, I hope that the lower three realms will be treated equally, but this will inevitably lead to killing, so I support half of them and reserve my opinion on the other half. The scumbag and the scumbag's sister: Very humble! So hurry up and log off Sister is a standard vicious female villain The scumbag is not only soft-hearted but also greedy Well, speaking from common sense, if you stay offline for a long time, you can write more. (Look at the big one, I can actually still read it) I just think it's time to cut it off Even if the sect is broken, it should be ended as soon as possible The heart of this book: Well, a very common type of immortality writing They claim to be from an upright family, but in reality they are not as upright as the demons. Moral kidnapping is easy to come by, regardless of merit, you can kill with random swords. (May be overturned) Personal thoughts: Thank you! Please let the heroine be beautiful alone, away from the sect and scumbags (you can bring the male protagonist, but there is no need to get too entangled with the sect's scumbags), I really like the male protagonist design Another note: I don't really care about the writing, but to be fair, except for some minor errors (typos and the like), the writing is actually quite good (the plot may have some flaws), so this score is actually for encouragement, and there are some good comments in it.

Emmmm Three stars is neither good nor bad. I plan to take a look first and then give it again to leave a mark (and, as a reminder, I really passed the 180-degree bow🌚)