
There Are so Many Charming Red Buildings
About This Novel
"Before I came, this place was full of beauty and sorrow. If it is still full of beauty and sorrow after I come, wouldn't it be in vain for me to come!!" In the spring of the third year in Shaoning, Li Ying secretly formulated a plan...
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Official(9)Scraped 7d ago
If you really don't know what you want to write, writing never needs to be incomprehensible. It's a lot of mess and vagueness, which is called prose.
The writing is messy and it looks like chewing chaff.
The plot seems scattered, but the characters gradually become more fleshed out, and the overall story is good.
At first I thought it was very messy and had no main line, but as I read it I realized that the author's writing is very powerful and I finished reading it unconsciously. It was just too little and not satisfying.
To put it nicely, it's called literary youth; to put it worse, it's called pretentiousness.
After reading about ten chapters, it seems to say something, but also seems to say nothing at all. There is no plan. It seems too scattered, with one sentence here and there.
The biggest problem with this book is that the main plot is not clear. The protagonist cannot understand what he wants to do. If there is no imperial examination, where will the power come from in the future? Can he make money? By what status? Slow pace
The writing is good, but the plot is not eye-catching.
I've read roughly four or five chapters, but I can't stand it anymore. I'm so exhausted!
There is no facial expression in the characterization. To achieve the fullness of character through things. Jia Zhen's offline arrangement is the best in the Red Mansion novel. The story progresses slowly. The fact that there are too few gardens in the Red Mansion is a flaw. I hope to increase the heroine's role in the future.
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Official(9)Scraped 7d ago
If you really don't know what you want to write, writing never needs to be incomprehensible. It's a lot of mess and vagueness, which is called prose.
The writing is messy and it looks like chewing chaff.
The plot seems scattered, but the characters gradually become more fleshed out, and the overall story is good.
At first I thought it was very messy and had no main line, but as I read it I realized that the author's writing is very powerful and I finished reading it unconsciously. It was just too little and not satisfying.
To put it nicely, it's called literary youth; to put it worse, it's called pretentiousness.
After reading about ten chapters, it seems to say something, but also seems to say nothing at all. There is no plan. It seems too scattered, with one sentence here and there.
The biggest problem with this book is that the main plot is not clear. The protagonist cannot understand what he wants to do. If there is no imperial examination, where will the power come from in the future? Can he make money? By what status? Slow pace
The writing is good, but the plot is not eye-catching.
I've read roughly four or five chapters, but I can't stand it anymore. I'm so exhausted!
There is no facial expression in the characterization. To achieve the fullness of character through things. Jia Zhen's offline arrangement is the best in the Red Mansion novel. The story progresses slowly. The fact that there are too few gardens in the Red Mansion is a flaw. I hope to increase the heroine's role in the future.









