Gift Pack of All Heavens: Start with One Punch Man

First of all, let me talk about this novel. The direction is very good. The writing is just like that. The plot is summarized in a few sentences. The male protagonist has everything going smoothly. The female protagonist falls in love at first sight. The male protagonist pretends to be cool and slaps her in the face. The female protagonist is determined. If the male protagonist is handsome, that's it. The plot is poisonous, but that's it. The system is in hand. The hero saves the beauty at the beginning. All the female protagonists fall in love with the male protagonist inexplicably. The stallion begins. The male protagonist: I will walk. Supporting role: Are you worthy? Male protagonist: Slap me in the face. Then supporting character: I was wrong. Accept me as your disciple. Male protagonist: No. Supporting character: Kneel if you don't accept me. Male protagonist: Okay. Then the male protagonist can make the closest relatives turn against each other by just saying a few words. Everyone has zero IQ in front of the male protagonist. For example, Jiraiya successfully became a villain after all, in order to accept Tsunade. In order to be slapped in the face, Danzo licked the male protagonist and successfully became a decent person. Male protagonist: No one can hurt my woman. Female protagonist: Yes, no. The person who becomes your woman rarely appears in novels. How did you make me hurt? Waist: Oh, I want to take a vacation. That's about it. This is the main plot. It doesn't have any sense of the second dimension. It's just a body. It's just a novel about urban pretentiousness and slap in the face wrapped in the skin of a second dimension. Classic moments Black Widow: Oh, the male protagonist is so handsome. Male protagonist: I am heartless. A car falls from the sky. Male protagonist: This little scene makes me eat pot stickers. Black Widow: I love it so much. Classic moments: Jiraiya: This boy must die. Male protagonist: Oh? Jiraiya: It's so embarrassing. Then he targets the male protagonist. Tsunade: Disappointed. Jiraiya is not as good as the male protagonist. He is shy. Male protagonist: I'll just slap him in the face. Classic moments: Tatsumaki: I am a sister-controller, let you cool off. Male protagonist: Oh, I will spank you. Tatsumaki: I love the male protagonist to death. They are just sisters. Classic moments: Female protagonist: Am I going to die? Male protagonist: That's it. Female protagonist: Lin Bei! ! ! So handsome

It's really speechless to have a dog barking in front of me despite my TM strength. The more I look at it, the more irritated I am.

The subject matter is still very good, it is a good anime unlimited flow, it is written as a forced urban pretentious slap in the face, and the character creation is not good enough. He obviously has strong strength, but he likes others to jump in front of him. There are a lot of unnecessary things, and it also makes the characters in the book too stupid. Sometimes it is okay, but often it is boring. For people who like unlimited animation, many people are addicted after reading about 100 chapters. A world that can be written in about 50 chapters has been written for more than 100 chapters just because of some confusing plots. If the pretense and slap-in-the-face plots could be removed, people who like to watch unlimited anime would probably like this book. Also, for female characters, it's okay to have a harem. After all, whoever travels to the anime world and has great strength doesn't want to have a harem, but this inexplicably captures the heroine and greatly destroys the character's prototype. My personal opinion is that I don't agree with Kuo Yue's comments.

I'm really convinced. I wrote an article about urban pretense. When buying a house, you will meet a rich girl. Some people look down on it and get together and make a bet and get slapped in the face. Then they get entangled with the rich girl. Later, they go to a party together. At the party, you will meet a rich girl's suitor, and then she is pretending to be slapped in the face.

I hope that the ideas are innovative, the gameplay is interesting, and the senses are a bit repetitive. Come on.

There are 2 flaws 1: Unlimited flow of Japanese comprehensive comics, you write it as a pretentious fantasy flow, because anyone who has watched Japanese anime will find that the animation is almost a flow of daily life and improving strength, and there is very little pretentiousness. 2: Inner narration; it is clearly the protagonist's inner thoughts and inner narration, but he does not say it out loud. The supporting characters seem to have the ability to read minds, and they can actually talk to and respond to the protagonist's inner narration and inner thoughts without any obstacles. 3: It is also the most important shortcoming, and it can also be said to be a shortcoming that runs through the entire novel, because when the book is written about Japanese animation as a whole, there is no Japanese style at all, and the Japanese style is written in a fantasy style.

Doesn't anyone think there's something wrong with the protagonist's name? 😘😘😘

The dance at the beginning is too poisonous Chapter 2 starts with really recruiting disciples Chapters 1~65 are simply awesome What kind of opening is this? The opening of Urban Long Aotian in 2005 was really awkward. Is this the Urban Dragon King? I still have a fiancée, Tatsumaki, who was forcibly married. A phone call called 3,000 brave men, and the army from the three realms came to pick her up🤐 This kind of small advertisement has been poisoned too much In the end, I still read this book in the same way. About 15 years ago, this genre was quite popular, then it was about tomb robbers, and then it was about King of Soldiers🤐 This routine is really difficult to reverse in the second dimension.

I didn't read the comments below. One Punch Man is full of weirdos, but there is even an ordinary person like a wealthy lady who fights against superpowers. How did she survive? This kind of character would have died long ago in this dangerous world.

Rubbish, rubbish, rubbish, rubbish, rubbish