The Doctor Who Walked Out of the Elf Shop

Ibrahimovic is so cute! ! ! (*/∇＼*) Of course you have to work hard (´-ω-`)

Guess who this is and what he is doing

It's so frustrating. Once there are good eggs, I will give them away. The plot is too exaggerated and cannot be connected, and the protagonist is described as a grassroots, hovering on the edge of appearing to be powerful and unable to cultivate elves, and the writing and details are too poor.

The author writes about female elves. Is he a (pseudo) believer in Tragedy like the one below?

(｡ò ∀ ó｡) (๑>؂<๑) Come on, The future is promising, Ibrahimovic will not give up

Did I remember it wrong? The coy bag evolves Rose Redo? ? ?

Qualified pet eggs are sold for money. There are also problems with the description of Ibrahimovic's character. Many things are caused by himself and are still pretended. The rating is still 7.7. It is one of the worst elf novels I have seen this year.

The first is the rating. I have read quite a lot of elf books. I started reading them probably in 2016, and I must have read more than a hundred or two hundred of them. This book is considered to be of average or above-average quality among the books I have read. If I were to rate it, I would give it almost four stars. But I wanted to encourage the author so I gave it five stars. There are some who are mindless in the comments, and there are also some who are more pertinent and put forward certain opinions. It is true that the author's writing style is relatively immature. Maybe he has less accumulated experience and is still a little behind in some details. But it's much better than those so-called fan authors who write mindlessly just to make up the word count. It can be seen that care was taken. Then there is the most unacceptable setting for many people, which is selling some good elf eggs. In fact, I think this is okay. The protagonist is essentially a pet egg seller. This is his job and the main source of income in the early stage. If you don't sell elf eggs, where will you get the money to cultivate them? And the most basic function of the system is to deliver elf eggs. If you don't sell them, do you have to cultivate them all by yourself? The protagonist has traveled to this world for half a year, not counting the eggs given out for completing the mission and the eggs obtained from outside. The system's delivery speed is more than 60 per three days. Do you have to support them all by yourself? Where do you get so much money? It's not Dr. Oak's backyard. There are also people who don't like the place where the Round Shark is sold. To be honest, the Round Shark is indeed a little masterpiece, but personally I don't like the same Lucario Earth Dragon Masuda Fire Dragon in every book. There is also talk of pairing up a team with quasi-gods. Does a team with quasi-gods have to be strong? Go and look at the top ten quasi-gods in singles and doubles on the ladder? Race value means everything? Doesn't the white devil look handsome in the world championship? Putting aside the game, it is as strong as Sakaki, red, green and green. Do you think their signature is a quasi-god? Or is it still the same sentence that only the weakest trainers do not have the weakest Pokémon? If you blindly give one star and abandon the game just because of these settings, I think it's not worth it. Then there are some suggestions for the author. Some of the foreshadowing laid in the early stage can be taken away. In the setting, the protagonist's parents are just traveling, but there is no news at all in the next few hundred chapters. Is it possible to add some plot about the parents later? There are also some elven eggs sold by the protagonist, can they be used as supporting roles later (Mimosaurus, Overweight Bulbasaur, Round Land Shark). There are some other suggestions that I haven't thought about yet, but I still hope that the author will write well. Be sure to work hard and don't finish it. Also, take care of yourself and update while ensuring health and quality. I hope this book will get better and better Finally, let me put one of my little Eevee

I feel that this long street in Yuzhou is indeed quite deserted. I've been here for 4.5 Days and there's still no one there. Alas, is there something weird about this long street? Or is there something weird in Yu Zhou's shop?

Elvish writing is not suitable for you, so cut it off as soon as possible.