
About This Novel
The protagonist Jerry, who has just entered the society, can't sleep at night. He lies in bed and reads a book. When he wakes up, he travels through Douluo. I originally thought that as a time traveler, I would have a golden finger, understand the plot, and then overthrow the two empires, defeat the Wuhun Palace, defeat the Haotian Sect, defeat the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect, and defeat the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex family... Grabbing the fairy grass and tricking Tang San... Be at ease! As a result, the idea was naive and the reality was cruel. Awakening of the martial soul: The ancestral carrot martial soul has half-level innate soul power and no golden finger yet. If not, then there won't be! As a modern person, can I still be stumped? Modern knowledge and vision are golden fingers! Since it can't be spectacular, it will just grow insignificantly, and sooner or later it will be at the top of the world. Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie... [The author is a newbie, writing for the first time, with passion, all based on preference. If you like it, support it and vote for it. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I wish readers, everything goes well, lots of money, and never a book shortage! ]
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Official(86)Scraped 4d ago
I feel like my IQ is being rubbed on the ground by the author, saying that there is no hacking or system, but the result is even more embarrassing than having a system. Upgrading to more than ten levels in half a year? Is this half a fucking innate level? You're born at level 90, right, and then you can grow a plant that's over 400 years old in half a year? Even if you are in a superior situation, you might as well be cheating. At least it makes sense. Otherwise, the cheater won't explain, and the result is that under normal circumstances, you can grow a plant that is more than 400 years old in half a year? Upgrade to more than ten levels in half a year. Large sects need resources and talents. You can only reach level 2-3 in a year. ***Half-level innate soul power is better than innate level 20. You might as well start directly with full innate soul power.
A protagonist like this who is almost as talented as a master
If the protagonist wasn't 100% handsome, spoke nicely, jumped up and down in front of others and acted weirdly, he would have been killed long ago. Either he was caught by a woman and trained to be a licker, or he was caught by a man and his face was slashed with thousands of knives. If the protagonist had an ordinary face and a garbage talent, and said a few more words, he would be immediately humanely destroyed. You would allow an ugly dog to bark once in front of you and never allow it to bark a second time. This author is the real loser who counterattacked Bai Fumei and became the master of the family and became the emperor's dream achiever. He is as naive as a child who talks about being a scientist. Haha, the principal of the elementary school will not look down on your rotten fairy tale, and does not consider the age of the readers. He has never been beaten by society, watched TV series, and was ignored by relatives and neighbors at home. Why do you let others look up to you? Why do you laugh at others? Try to do something. I hate people who do nothing the most.
The fishing part really embarrassed me.
It's outrageous that everyone doesn't know what fishing is. The funniest thing is that they even drew a picture for Tang San to make a fishhook. Even Tang Hao didn't know about fishing with a fishing rod. Then the first 30-power soul beast fell out, a little brat who didn't even have two martial souls yet. What was he thinking? Think about how Huo Gua was beaten miserably by a monkey when he was at level 10.
I feel like my IQ is being pressed to the ground and rubbed (I suspect there are trolls trying to gain points)
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. There are too many flaws. Inference used: There is a paragraph in Chapters 5 and 6 about Yu Xiaogang stealing other people's martial soul research, which proves that there are martial soul researchers in this world, and the level of the researchers is not low. Slott 1: So you said that you relied on your half-level soul power carrot martial soul to absorb fertilizer to upgrade (then my animal martial soul can be upgraded by eating meat or plants containing soul power, right)? Haven't those researchers done any research? Do you think those researchers are just for free? (It can be said here that your martial soul is special, so what about Slot 2) Slot 2: Plant soul beasts can be upgraded by absorbing fertilizer (this is possible) But when the protagonist is not even a soul master, he cultivates ordinary plant seeds into ten or century-old soul beasts. You are not even a soul master, and you are just a civilian background, relying on the few resources you have access to? If point 1 proves that the researchers are just for nothing, then point 2 proves that the researchers are fools (as long as you are careful, plant soul beasts can easily be found in nature by absorbing fertilizers to upgrade). According to what the author writes, other soul beasts and people should not live at all. If plant soul beasts directly dominate the world, what else will happen next? Not to mention how many flaws there are in combination with the introduction.
This is one of the most awesome Douluo fanfics I have ever read without cheats. Come on, author.
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Official(86)Scraped 4d ago
I feel like my IQ is being rubbed on the ground by the author, saying that there is no hacking or system, but the result is even more embarrassing than having a system. Upgrading to more than ten levels in half a year? Is this half a fucking innate level? You're born at level 90, right, and then you can grow a plant that's over 400 years old in half a year? Even if you are in a superior situation, you might as well be cheating. At least it makes sense. Otherwise, the cheater won't explain, and the result is that under normal circumstances, you can grow a plant that is more than 400 years old in half a year? Upgrade to more than ten levels in half a year. Large sects need resources and talents. You can only reach level 2-3 in a year. ***Half-level innate soul power is better than innate level 20. You might as well start directly with full innate soul power.
A protagonist like this who is almost as talented as a master
If the protagonist wasn't 100% handsome, spoke nicely, jumped up and down in front of others and acted weirdly, he would have been killed long ago. Either he was caught by a woman and trained to be a licker, or he was caught by a man and his face was slashed with thousands of knives. If the protagonist had an ordinary face and a garbage talent, and said a few more words, he would be immediately humanely destroyed. You would allow an ugly dog to bark once in front of you and never allow it to bark a second time. This author is the real loser who counterattacked Bai Fumei and became the master of the family and became the emperor's dream achiever. He is as naive as a child who talks about being a scientist. Haha, the principal of the elementary school will not look down on your rotten fairy tale, and does not consider the age of the readers. He has never been beaten by society, watched TV series, and was ignored by relatives and neighbors at home. Why do you let others look up to you? Why do you laugh at others? Try to do something. I hate people who do nothing the most.
The fishing part really embarrassed me.
It's outrageous that everyone doesn't know what fishing is. The funniest thing is that they even drew a picture for Tang San to make a fishhook. Even Tang Hao didn't know about fishing with a fishing rod. Then the first 30-power soul beast fell out, a little brat who didn't even have two martial souls yet. What was he thinking? Think about how Huo Gua was beaten miserably by a monkey when he was at level 10.
I feel like my IQ is being pressed to the ground and rubbed (I suspect there are trolls trying to gain points)
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. There are too many flaws. Inference used: There is a paragraph in Chapters 5 and 6 about Yu Xiaogang stealing other people's martial soul research, which proves that there are martial soul researchers in this world, and the level of the researchers is not low. Slott 1: So you said that you relied on your half-level soul power carrot martial soul to absorb fertilizer to upgrade (then my animal martial soul can be upgraded by eating meat or plants containing soul power, right)? Haven't those researchers done any research? Do you think those researchers are just for free? (It can be said here that your martial soul is special, so what about Slot 2) Slot 2: Plant soul beasts can be upgraded by absorbing fertilizer (this is possible) But when the protagonist is not even a soul master, he cultivates ordinary plant seeds into ten or century-old soul beasts. You are not even a soul master, and you are just a civilian background, relying on the few resources you have access to? If point 1 proves that the researchers are just for nothing, then point 2 proves that the researchers are fools (as long as you are careful, plant soul beasts can easily be found in nature by absorbing fertilizers to upgrade). According to what the author writes, other soul beasts and people should not live at all. If plant soul beasts directly dominate the world, what else will happen next? Not to mention how many flaws there are in combination with the introduction.
This is one of the most awesome Douluo fanfics I have ever read without cheats. Come on, author.






















