The Little Cutie Became Long Aotian's Golden Finger
by Mi Qinghai
About This Novel
Yu Qianzhu, the little princess of Jiutian Divine Realm, was involved in the mysterious whirlpool because she stole her father's Thousand-Jiji Mirror. She was transported to Qingyun Continent and became the "weapon spirit" of the Ming Ring contracted by Jun Jiuchen. Xiao Qianzhu's divine power was blocked and he could not contact the divine realm. In order to go home, Xiao Qianzhu can only follow the boy to travel across the mainland and grow together! Jun Jiuchen, the genius prince of the Yuan Kingdom, was destroyed by his father, his Dantian, his muscles and veins, and his cultivation. When he fell into the cliff, he inadvertently contracted the artifact Ming Ring, and met Yu Qianzhu, the little princess of the divine domain. Let's see how the two of them work together to stir up troubles!
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Official(8)Scraped 5d ago
Five points are given to the subject matter
I think the subject matter of this book is very good. So far, I have only read two or three books with similar themes. Let me mainly talk about the shortcomings of this book: the character creation is not good. It doesn't seem to have any particularly distinctive characteristics, and it feels like the character only has one aspect to his personality. The character of the male protagonist was not successfully portrayed, but the character of the female protagonist gave me a feeling that it was deliberately portrayed. I still need more practice in plot description. After I finished reading a chapter, I didn't even know what the plot was about. There is no plot that focuses on description, which is a big taboo in writing novels! I have read two or three chapters so far, but the first few chapters are difficult to attract readers to continue reading. I hope the author can greatly improve which parts of the character description and plot are detailed and which parts are sketched out.
Thank you for your advice. This is indeed my first time writing, and my writing style is not good. We will pay attention to the issues pointed out by everyone in the future.
Thank you for correcting the errors. I will correct them when I get back. Thank you all.
What's going on
I just saw that article the day before yesterday, but today I was told that it is still the same chapter after the update?
Check in, check in, check in, check in
It's not bad. The author still needs to practice his writing skills.
Is there a male protagonist? Is there a male protagonist?
Is this a female video book?
I remember that I should have found this book from a female channel. Why does this book have a strong flavor of a male channel? What is the general sense of an ordinary boy traveling to another world and getting a golden finger? After reading this book, I feel that I have learned from those novels where the female protagonist travels into the novel and beats the male protagonist and likes the villain. I don't think this book is bad. I just feel that the author seems to be a male channel writer who mistakenly sent it to the female channel.
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Official(8)Scraped 5d ago
Five points are given to the subject matter
I think the subject matter of this book is very good. So far, I have only read two or three books with similar themes. Let me mainly talk about the shortcomings of this book: the character creation is not good. It doesn't seem to have any particularly distinctive characteristics, and it feels like the character only has one aspect to his personality. The character of the male protagonist was not successfully portrayed, but the character of the female protagonist gave me a feeling that it was deliberately portrayed. I still need more practice in plot description. After I finished reading a chapter, I didn't even know what the plot was about. There is no plot that focuses on description, which is a big taboo in writing novels! I have read two or three chapters so far, but the first few chapters are difficult to attract readers to continue reading. I hope the author can greatly improve which parts of the character description and plot are detailed and which parts are sketched out.
Thank you for your advice. This is indeed my first time writing, and my writing style is not good. We will pay attention to the issues pointed out by everyone in the future.
Thank you for correcting the errors. I will correct them when I get back. Thank you all.
What's going on
I just saw that article the day before yesterday, but today I was told that it is still the same chapter after the update?
Check in, check in, check in, check in
It's not bad. The author still needs to practice his writing skills.
Is there a male protagonist? Is there a male protagonist?
Is this a female video book?
I remember that I should have found this book from a female channel. Why does this book have a strong flavor of a male channel? What is the general sense of an ordinary boy traveling to another world and getting a golden finger? After reading this book, I feel that I have learned from those novels where the female protagonist travels into the novel and beats the male protagonist and likes the villain. I don't think this book is bad. I just feel that the author seems to be a male channel writer who mistakenly sent it to the female channel.
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