Stumble into a Mysterious Recovery

I read my novel over and over again, and to put it bluntly, I was almost drugged to death. It's a fast-paced story. It's all about the main plot and no subplots at all. No wonder it's written so slowly. Does any reader know how to write a branch line?

Directly control Gui Hua, and the air will fly in seconds, and Gui Hua seems to be a beautiful woman

Dear book friends, I sincerely hope that you can give your opinions. If there are any chapters that are not well written, you can point them out so that I can improve them over time. Your eyes are much brighter than mine. Finally, thank you for your support.

I looked confused, what are these?

I remember when I was just starting my junior year in college, I was very interested in learning, and I suddenly wanted to write a novel. I didn't pay attention in class, and I didn't read after class, and then I had to do experiments... I had the final exam next week, and I didn't want to fail the class, because I had never failed the class before... Okay, the above is my excuse for my laziness.

I spent the whole night changing last night and was a little delirious by the end. When I wake up, I will continue to change.

Personally I think it looks better, I hope the author will work hard!