
The God and the Demon
by Mirror Four
About This Novel
What is God, what is devil, the vast world in the ups and downs of the world of mortals.
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Official(9)Scraped 18d ago
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Two hundred and seventy thousand words and over two hundred chapters, is this serious? 🤗
emmm... let me say it first, I'm here to give my opinion😂😂
How to say it? Hmm... It lacks a sense of immersion. I don't know how the article is at the moment. After all, I've only read a few pages, but it's a bit boring. To be honest, if you ask me to read this, I'd rather read the news. But one thing is true, I can't watch it without a sense of immersion. There is also the introduction. Are you using these few words to make up the word count? If you write like this, who would know what you mean and who would be interested in reading it? For example, if you write something sad, you can write a sad short fragment in the introduction. In this way, people will know at a glance, ah, what you wrote is sad, I like it, so I read it. This is better because readers can know what you are writing at a glance. One thing is, I want to ask the author, how much information have you read? If not, I suggest you check it out to improve the quality of your writing.
Thanks for the big red envelope, come on
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It's so well written and I highly recommend it, please keep updating.
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If you can't get it on Dadu. Com, can you send me some chapter red envelopes?
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Official(9)Scraped 18d ago
? ? ? word count
Two hundred and seventy thousand words and over two hundred chapters, is this serious? 🤗
emmm... let me say it first, I'm here to give my opinion😂😂
How to say it? Hmm... It lacks a sense of immersion. I don't know how the article is at the moment. After all, I've only read a few pages, but it's a bit boring. To be honest, if you ask me to read this, I'd rather read the news. But one thing is true, I can't watch it without a sense of immersion. There is also the introduction. Are you using these few words to make up the word count? If you write like this, who would know what you mean and who would be interested in reading it? For example, if you write something sad, you can write a sad short fragment in the introduction. In this way, people will know at a glance, ah, what you wrote is sad, I like it, so I read it. This is better because readers can know what you are writing at a glance. One thing is, I want to ask the author, how much information have you read? If not, I suggest you check it out to improve the quality of your writing.
Thanks for the big red envelope, come on
Come on (?2?5 ?6?1?0?6_?6?1?0?7)?2?5
Come on (25 6106_6107) 25
Come on (25 6106_6107) 25
It's so well written and I highly recommend it, please keep updating.
Come on (?2?5 ?6?1?0?6_?6?1?0?7)?2?5
If you can't get it on Dadu. Com, can you send me some chapter red envelopes?






