Dou Po Zhi Topped the Lin Xiu Yahao

I can barely accept what the author wrote about Canaan Academy, but later on you described the protagonist as a fool. Not to mention the part where Qing Lin was kidnapped, and the part where the protagonist of Life and Death Sect changed his training system, you already made a big mistake. I think This book is for the Dou Po system, not the Immortal Cultivation system. In addition to what was explained in the Gate of Life and Death, you have to go to the upper world to participate in some kind of competition among the heavens. Hasn't this changed to the All Heavens System? Three styles have been changed at once. What do people think of you?

Someone else's original work was gentle and elegant, but you wrote it like this, and it's not funny at all. It feels very stupid. It's very well written. Don't write it next time.

The protagonist's behavior and behavior are very stupid, as if he has a serious brain disease, and he has no desire to watch it.

You're a poisonous author. He can't write very long. The front part is too poisonous.

I have nothing to say, why am I going off topic while practicing. .

There must be some shortcomings, but why is it so bad?

Who are the heroines? Is there Xun'er?

The author has no introduction about Zi Yan in the chapter list. Have you forgotten about him?

The Earth's Core Tempering Body Milk was discovered in the inner courtyard

It sucks. I suggest you stop reading after chapter 50.