I Am Xiao Feng in Dou Po

It made me laugh. I didn't even understand the setting of the original novel but I still like popular science. Are you sure it's not you? First of all, the Xiao clan has been destroyed for thousands of years. This is mentioned in the original book. The Pure Lotus Demon Fire only appears once in a thousand years. It takes hundreds of years for you, right? ? Secondly, Xiao Xuan arranged for the Xiao tribe to flee to the northwest. Otherwise, how could the original work bring out the ancient jade? ? You arranged with Xiao Xuan to back up the Northwest Continent and still pull out the original Xiao family. I'm really speechless... Also, only Gu Yuan knows about the Xiao family in the Northwest Continent. Because the original work was entrusted by Xiao Xuan to Gu Yuan's care, so the loneliness of the Xiao family in the Northwest Continent is entirely caused by the ancient clan. I'm sorry to say it openly but can only cover it secretly. The high combat power was killed, and the high-level martial arts and fighting skills of the Kung Fu Pavilion were also stolen. The Soul Palace was originally created by the bird protector here in Yunshan. The Xiao family only found out because of the break-up of the engagement. You assassinated the Xiao family and became the Soul Clan... Can Gu Yuan, who really wants the Soul Clan, leave his daughter in the Xiao family and only have a Dou Huang as a bodyguard? ? ? The most outrageous thing is that the Xiao family moved to Wutan City for thirty years. Can you tell this? ? Have you read the original work? Xiao Yan's engagement was made by Xiao Lin, which means that the Xiao family was still in the imperial capital at that time. The Xiao family did not come to Wutan City until Xiao Lin died, so the time they spent in Wutan City was not even as long as Xiao Yan's age. What's even more outrageous is what's the use of traveling through time in advance? I am still waiting for the plot line of the original work. I have watched 3 movies with this theme and all of them kept some tribesmen and waited for Xiao Yan... Can't you do something else in these thousand years? ? Can I get Fallen Heart Flame? After all, Canaan College has not been established yet, can Zi Yan find it? Zi Yan has been wandering for thousands of years, and she ate the transformation grass before she was picked up by Su Qian and brought back to the academy. The protagonist traveled so early and couldn't he take it home in advance? ? ? If I have a strange fire Medusa, can I contact it in advance to help evolve? ? After all, Medusa is hundreds of years old. Wouldn't it be nice to be a wife? ? Can Yun Yun be cut off in advance before she enters Yunlan Sect? ? Is it difficult to do these things when you are so powerful? ? After Qinglin is born, if his family is gone, can he be taken away in advance? ? Can the little medical fairy be taken away in advance? ? ? Everything is waiting for the plot of the original work, are you sure you can write a novel? ? ? ? ? ?

Come on, I like this book very much, but the main character's role is a bit lacking.

The writing is good, but a bit wordy and explains too much.

He's hundreds of years old, but he still pretends to be young, takes Xiao Yan's wife, and hears Xun'er calling him big brother. It's poisonous.

The author writes very well, I like it very much.

It's too long-winded and always carries out unnecessary science popularization. Half of the whole book is nonsense. It's one part about fighting and another part about science. The science part is very boring. I was quite interested in reading it at first, but now I don't want to read it anymore😐😐😐

You are so good at defeating the Pure Lotus Demon Fire that you managed to defeat it in six or seven chapters, and you even opened a few separate chapters to write explanations. You, an eight-star fighting saint, cannot defeat a five-star peak demon fire. How funny.

Was the following one written by a primary school student? It's very different from the previous one.

Basically, Xiao Yan's opportunity was taken away, and his confidante was also taken away. Author, can you be more serious? If Xiao Yan was born so early, wouldn't you have set his own opportunity and wife for him? You have to grab it. This kind of book of yours is a fighting genre. Don't mess with the heroine who is fighting.

There are too many nonsense descriptions. Just to make up for the number of words, wouldn't it be enough to just write about Taixu Ancient Dragon in which chapter? Need to talk so much nonsense? There are so many words next to it, it feels like I am introducing the book Dou Po Sang Qiong. Do you need to introduce it? Do you need to introduce whether to read the original work directly? Who has read the fanfic without first reading the original work? Need an introduction?