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The indigenous protagonist, who doesn't know the plot, casts a time traveler as a supporting character, and also wants to dig up a lot of foreshadowing (pits) and secondary settings. Can you tell me which of these is not extremely poisonous?

It's both water and ink. It took me half a chapter to describe Wang Ai, and almost ten chapters to beat Wang Bin. If I write like this, no one will read it later.

The writing is so catchy that it can't be compared with the previous one.

It's a bit on the water side😕 I haven't read the original plot yet, but I feel like the writing is pretty average 😂 I won't mention the typos, I just adapted the manga to add daily nonsense and wrote several chapters in one chapter 😒 In fact, it could be more streamlined, it's very tiring to read, so delete this book for useless daily life If you streamline it by half, the rating should be much higher. The most important thing is that the writing style is too weak. It doesn't feel very humorous, and there is nothing very passionate or sensational. The mediocre plot is just a cliché (it is recommended to study more and the knowledge reserve and writing power are not enough, and there is not much desire to read)

How should I put it? Personally, I can't relate to indigenous fan fiction. When I read fan fiction, I just want to see the predictions and changes after time travel. I find indigenous fan fiction boring.

Damn it, Chapter 47 didn't allow you to enter the Luotian Dajiao and you still had to pay for it. I'm looking down on it, but I've seen enough for free. It's not bad.

It's pretty good, but I give it three stars because there are too many typos and bad sentences.

The first part was okay, it was a decent fanfic, not exciting but still enjoyable to watch. Things started to go wrong later on, such as letting the indigenous protagonist beat up the time traveler supporting character, and creating a bunch of secondary settings. Later on, it can be said that it was just a skinning of one person. According to the author, this time traveler can be called by any name and can be replaced at will. The names of everyone in his later novels can be replaced at will, so OOC that almost only the names are original.

The further you get to the back, the more water you get. You might as well kill all the Japs by yourself.

The combat power is unclear. My friend, a martial arts master was defeated by a protagonist who just came out of the novice village. The gold content of the master is a bit low. If he goes further, he will be a grand master, at the level of Zhang Sanfeng.