The Homeless Man of Teyvat

I'm a SB. Really, I found the plot before the protagonist's dream was quite interesting, so I bought 50 chapters at once. However, the protagonist's dream immediately made me feel that the book was boring and I couldn't read it anymore. It was equivalent to wasting all my money. I really regret it, woo woo woo. In fact, the author's writing is pretty good, but I think it's too boring. It's just my personal opinion. Woohoo, I'm really being taken advantage of. Woooooooo.

One is the toxicity of the blood of the protagonist. Do you need to add the setting of slowly disappearing from the body, otherwise it will not be easy to be exploited. The second is the main world line. At the beginning, you should find an empty space first. You will have a sense of urgency. It would be better to make minor repairs. The most important thing is the ambiguity between the protagonist and the heroine, which feels like there is a little lack of foreshadowing.

A very good book, I highly appreciate the author's writing skills! I know very little about the protagonist's setting, background, and even wishes. I don't even know what the protagonist's purpose of "living" is. Qiqi even lives just to "live". What about the protagonist? Don't talk about the death of the protagonist's body, soul, or god. What is the protagonist's purpose? The beginning is messy, and the ending is also inexplicable. If the protagonist wants to revive the Holy Spirit World, wouldn't it be okay to just find a planet? The same goes for other planets - that's not the point. The point is, if the protagonist wants to revive the Holy Spirit World, wouldn't the people in the Holy Spirit World become a joke? The God they believe in only wants His world and no longer wants His people? If the protagonist doesn't want to revive the Holy Spirit World, wouldn't the "death" on the protagonist become a joke? The protagonist doesn't want to resurrect the Holy Spirit World, so why is the world still binding him? All in all, the writing is very good, but the plot is a mess. There is no so-called main plot from beginning to end, and the main theme is arbitrary. All people and gods become clowns, only the protagonist wins them all.

How to say it? More than 100 chapters have become unreadable since entering the dream. The first part was okay, but some of the settings that were suddenly added didn't look good. The emotional scenes were written rather rigidly, so there was no need to forcefully add them.

Author, don't give up! Hey, how many chapters do you owe! ! ! ! It's all given to you! Two chapters a day is too little! ! !

What Liyue wrote earlier is really good. When Mondstadt starts to go downhill, it feels like the protagonist has been led by the nose and behaved like a tool. When he fights the dragon, he becomes more and more unable to do it. When he gets to Dreaming, he just looks stupid.

The main character has played Genshin Impact and knows the plot, but he still acts like a fool. I'm really convinced. It's outrageous.

Rubbish book, after seeing the protagonist you wrote kill that fool. I knew this book was going to be useless.

It has always been good before, but starting from Orobas, assuming that the protagonist replaces him, I don't want to watch it. Although Madoka comes back in the end, this is not the case, but the plot is too long, which is very unpleasant, and I don't want to watch it anymore.

I originally wanted to give it four and a half stars, because there were only two of them every day, and I didn't enjoy watching it enough. I wanted to keep it up, but I couldn't control it and just watched the updates, so I had no choice but to obey myself and give it five stars. It's very interesting and the writing is pretty good. You can watch it with confidence. After watching it, you will be addicted and you will never be able to extricate yourself from it.