Zhutian Film and Television Sign-in Starts from Qinman Siheyuan
About This Novel
Xiao Yan obtained the Zhutian Film and Television Time Travel System. The courtyard is full of birds at the beginning, so that Shazhu's life is no longer full of regrets; In the big era world, prepare several crabs headed by Ding Crab; Recommended "Siheyuan: Take refuge in Foolish Pillar at the beginning".
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Official(11)Scraped 1mo ago
The timeline doesn't match up
The timeline doesn't match up, but the rest is okay!
My name is Qin Huairu, not Qin Zhunru
Just make do with it
I can only say it to pass the time. If you have a brain, you can't read even one chapter. The chronicle must have a basic logic. If it can't be self-consistent, just work in a studio and work full time.
It was messy, the timeline jumped around, and I was confused even after reading a few chapters.
Straighten up the timeline, jump here and there, and write the time in random order
The bull's head is wrong, the horse's mouth is wrong, a hammer is here and a hoe is here, pieced together here and there, and the chapters are broken and cannot be connected.
not good
The conversation is awkward! The writing is a flaw~
The author fucks
The dialogue is stilted. It was like a conversation between an emotionless robot. Then it was written about Lou Xiao'e when she was young. The chicken-stealing plot must be forcibly inserted. Either don't write it that way, or write your age more realistically. The dialogue aspect is really a flaw, there is no emotional line at all.
When I saw the first picture, I wanted to complain.
The conversation between the protagonist and Mrs. Lou. Why are you talking like this? Sorry.
You should check the information carefully before writing, don't just write blindly when your brain gets hot.
Isn't it a steel rolling mill? Why did it become a steel mill?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 1mo ago
The timeline doesn't match up
The timeline doesn't match up, but the rest is okay!
My name is Qin Huairu, not Qin Zhunru
Just make do with it
I can only say it to pass the time. If you have a brain, you can't read even one chapter. The chronicle must have a basic logic. If it can't be self-consistent, just work in a studio and work full time.
It was messy, the timeline jumped around, and I was confused even after reading a few chapters.
Straighten up the timeline, jump here and there, and write the time in random order
The bull's head is wrong, the horse's mouth is wrong, a hammer is here and a hoe is here, pieced together here and there, and the chapters are broken and cannot be connected.
not good
The conversation is awkward! The writing is a flaw~
The author fucks
The dialogue is stilted. It was like a conversation between an emotionless robot. Then it was written about Lou Xiao'e when she was young. The chicken-stealing plot must be forcibly inserted. Either don't write it that way, or write your age more realistically. The dialogue aspect is really a flaw, there is no emotional line at all.
When I saw the first picture, I wanted to complain.
The conversation between the protagonist and Mrs. Lou. Why are you talking like this? Sorry.
You should check the information carefully before writing, don't just write blindly when your brain gets hot.
Isn't it a steel rolling mill? Why did it become a steel mill?
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