
My Son Has Become a Villain and a Licking Dog
by Uncle Keimu
About This Novel
When Chen Feifan traveled through time and became the sixty-year-old richest man, he discovered that his son had become a villain and a dog licker. He gave away the group's funds and channels one by one for a woman, causing huge problems in the company. What's even more frightening is that this woman is the heroine in a novel. She was reborn just to destroy their family and avenge her previous life. How stupidly did her son, a bitchy son, join in? "Dad, sign another six billion contract for me. I promise, this is the last one!" "Get out!" "Dad, please, let brother Tongwen come over and be the general manager!" "Get out!" "Dad,..." "Get out!" "Wucao, do you still have my son in your eyes? I am your only heir!" [Ding! You and Chen Yi break away from the father-son relationship, and the reward group's income will increase by 200%, and your age will be reduced by 5! ] Ps: For those who have read the new books, you can read the old books "Activating the Background System at the Start" and "Landing into the Ancient World Twenty Thousand Years Ahead of Time". Book club group: 921507559
Official Sources
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(410)Scraped 2mo ago
What is your level, gentlemen?
One year as a calligrapher, two years as a calligrapher, three years as a calligrapher, four years as a great calligrapher, five years as a calligrapher, five years as a calligrapher, six years as a calligrapher, seven years as a calligrapher, eight years as a calligrapher, ten years as a calligrapher, ten years as a calligrapher, twenty years as a golden immortal, and thirty years as an immortal calligrapher.
i have an idea
The protagonist can become younger and give birth to a boy. Do you think the expression of the unfilial son before will be wonderful? Isn't it because he is an only child? Give him another little brother
Motivation at the age of 60 - comment on my son becoming a villain and a licker
What does it feel like to wear a 60-year-old man and still become the richest man. As we all know, the length of a person's life varies. The age of sixty is called the age of sixty or the age of hearing. This age represents the last period of life. At his age, most people choose to live in peace and quiet, have filial children, and then wait to be swallowed by death, let alone the richest man. Why doesn't he want to live this kind of life? Rather than working endlessly when they get old, some people want to live a comfortable life. He could have chosen this kind of life, but he couldn't bear to see the country he conquered being taken away by others, and he couldn't bear to see his son destroy it completely. The dissatisfied heart opened up in his heart, and he successfully opened the path to the system. He had the power to increase his age and live longer in this world without others noticing. The son in the original work made him feel heartbroken. He was deceived by a woman and allowed her to control the entire group. His son and daughter did not have a good life. For the sake of a stable life in the future and for the independence of future generations, Chen Feifan could only get up step by step and take control of the company with his old bones. A kid from a rich family who lives among the rich, a good young master is not good enough and must go to the end of his life. In this world, a lot of people are like this. They are obviously born many points higher than others. How many people would envy such a family, but they don't know how to cherish it, lose their ambition in playing with things, and even spend money just to make one person happy, or just to get an item, and in the end it harms others and themselves. Everyone will pay the due price for their mistakes, and this price is fatal. Chen Feifan wanted him to understand that he was not the only successor. Use his own abilities to put the group on a stronger path and create better conditions to educate future generations.
The topic selection is OK, but the ability is slightly low
Judging from the 30 chapters I have read, this book has a lot of problems. Age reduction, system selection, and Ye Qing are all problems. Each of them is a poisonous point. Let's analyze them one by one. The first one to reduce the age may be that the author still wants to pick up the heroine in the future. This is a poisonous point. Since you choose to travel through time and become an old man, you should start from the perspective of the old man. No matter what novel or TV series, the protagonist of a good work must be highly consistent with the setting (you can increase your life span to write a business war novel, but unfortunately the author still wants to write a simple and brainless pretentious article) The problem with the second system is that the system tells you what to do instead of giving you a choice. How can such a straightforward display option reflect the protagonist's ability? The author keeps repeating that the protagonist is very capable, but I only saw a puppet. This is also a problem of the author's ability. Ye Qing won't talk about the issue of the third villain. The author's intention is to create a villain who can always fight against the protagonist. However, the author's arrangement is as straightforward as a primary school student writing an essay. Even the crooked God of War knows that he cannot stop himself from saying how awesome he is. Author, you don't I know that the character should always be expressed through a plot that fits the character's setting, rather than telling the reader directly. As for Tongwen, there is no explanation of the causes and consequences. The summary is that the villain is too RZ. The author must know that the character can be made into a face, but it cannot be just a face. After reading the summary of 30 chapters, I found that the author is not capable enough and the narrative ability is low. In these 30 chapters, you can actually add the story of Tongwen and the land purchase game to about 150 chapters. Moreover, this increase will increase the reader's viewing experience. A story with cause and effect is better than a headless fly. There are too many. The system can also be changed to reward the protagonist through his actions. As for Ye Qing, delete it. It has nothing to do with advancing the plot. The pretentious and cool novel must be reasonable and reasonable. Today's readers are not like before. If it was ten years ago, maybe the author would have had the opportunity to write this book into a hit, but now I guess it can only be a slap in the face.
When I was in first grade, I occasionally helped my family look after the store during the summer vacation. A strange young aunt came over to buy something. Seeing that I was a child looking after the store, she stuck her head in and asked, "Where are your adults?" "My mother is not here, so you can tell me what you want to buy." I was a little disgusted with her contemptuous tone, frowned, and replied with a tone that seemed a bit sophisticated and impatient. She looked at me seriously for a few seconds, burst into laughter, and stretched out her hand to rub my hair, "I can't tell you the difference with your child, forget it, I'll take care of your business next time, little boss." After that, she turned around and left. I felt insulted. I didn't think I had been visiting the store for more than a day or two, and I hadn't seen anyone. What else can there be that I am embarrassed to say? "Wait a minute." I stopped her, turned around and took out a pack of sanitary napkins from the cardboard box, and also pulled out a black plastic bag. "Is it this? Well, use this to pretend that others can't see it." The aunt seemed to be trembling with fright, "Why do you kid know everything?" Then she walked out the door with a blushing face. I kicked him out and said, "Then do you still want this?" I shook the pad in my hand at her. Auntie walked even more hastily, "No, no, no, why are you chasing me out?" Passers-by grinned and said, "Children are so awesome these days, hahahaha." I looked at her fleeing back and muttered angrily, "I'm wasting a plastic bag." The next day, my friends and I piled sand and went home. When I returned to the store, I saw the strange aunt from yesterday chatting with my mother and holding a pretty little girl. I felt a little guilty. It couldn't be that she made a fool of herself two days ago. She would be taking revenge on me now. The strange thing is that my aunt didn't seem to see me, and she was chatting lively with my mother. I sat on the bench and listened to their chat, and then I realized that they came to Wuhan to visit relatives and were living in the residential building behind us these days. Suddenly my aunt locked her eyes on me, as if she had just discovered that I was back. "Hey, this is your son. He's so handsome." My mother was very happy, pretending to be humble, and called me over and touched the back of my head. "What's so delicate about him? He's very bad, hahaha. He's so delicate just because he looks like me." The aunt also smiled and said, "What's wrong? She looks pretty good." After saying that, she pulled the little girl next to her and said, "Yaya, call me brother." I took a closer look at this little girl. She had braids, a floral skirt, white socks, and little red leather shoes. It is indeed different from our little girls with runny noses and slippers who dare to stand and pee with us. She called me "brother" in a childish voice, and hid behind her aunt, refusing to say anything more. I wanted to touch her hair, but I just came back from sanding and my hands were too dirty. I turned and ran. "Hey, my son is still shy, hahaha." I went to the back and washed my hands and wiped them clean. He ran back and took the little girl's hand to the counter. "Whatever you want to eat, I'll open it for you." The joyful laughter of our parents came from the store. "What's wrong with this? You look like a little grown-up." In the next few days, Auntie often brought Yaya over to play. They chat as adults. I just stole a handful of snacks in my pocket and took Yaya out to eat. "Guess what the flavor of today's lollipop is. If you guess it right, I'll give it to you." "Banana" "Yes, you guessed it right again, here it is." "Why am I always right?" "Because you are awesome" I didn't tell her that I had all the flavors of lollipops with me, so she had no chance of guessing wrong. A few days later, Yaya and I were building a castle with bricks. Auntie walked out of my shop and shouted from a distance: Yaya, let's go back to have lunch. Yaya was a little reluctant to leave, the castle was half full. I said it doesn't matter, we will pile it up next time. Auntie came over and asked me with a smile: Do you like Yaya? I stared at my toes and whispered, I like them. "But we leave the day after tomorrow, what should we do?" I looked at Yaya and then at Auntie, and suddenly I felt like crying, and my throat was so blocked that I couldn't say anything. Auntie squatted down and said to me: Let me tell you a secret. After hearing this, I shuddered and held back my tears. After pushing to the half-finished castle, he ran straight home. I never take a nap, so I lay down until it was time for dinner. I feebly asked my mother, who was dragging me out of bed to eat, to verify the authenticity of what my aunt said. My mother nodded, "Yes, yes, you never knew?" Only then did I burst into tears. "How many snacks did you eat from me? Why didn't you tell me earlier?" I just want to say to that aunt. Why are you dressing your son up like a little girl? ! ! Is there something wrong! ! ! ! ! ! I also gave him a nickname Yaya! ! ! ! ! Is that a nickname for boys? ! ! ! Looking back many years later, I realized that I might have invited revenge from my aunt.
Becoming the richest man in his 60s is actually not scary, but what is scary is that his family fortune is about to be wiped out, but he will be ruined by his unsatisfactory son, and he is also a villain who is so good at licking the dog. I can only say that I can stop the loss right there and start educating my son!
I don't know what to say
Now the protagonist is too smart, and now in these 20 chapters, before his brain hurts, he said that Ye has no brain. I feel that the protagonist has become wise. A company has taken all the funds and directly killed the stock market. If there is no funds to save the market, the company should just suspend the market. If a dangerous person appears in the capital and is so arrogant, it's not too poisonous. Nowadays, no city has a large taxpayer, and this kind of enterprise has special privileges. You wrote it so convincingly. At first I thought the protagonist was a big boss from Jiangsu, Zhejiang and Shanghai, but I didn't expect it to be anything but.
Not bad
This is similar to the book I saw on the female channel before. The male channel actually imitated the female channel, which is ridiculous.
The author! The latest update is pretty quick though. But the quality has dropped a little bit.
I hope that the cool points of future works will not be too single. Also, I hope. The protagonist continues to struggle just as he does now. It is precisely because he struggled like this. The battle with the Son of Destiny. It makes me feel more like us living. In addition, Chen Feifan's character design. Have you ever thought about making the protagonist a little deeper or more complex? Character complexity deepens. A good novel. Either be close to reality. Or too mysterious. Since it is based on reality, there should be setbacks. It's not the most fun to keep winning.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(410)Scraped 2mo ago
What is your level, gentlemen?
One year as a calligrapher, two years as a calligrapher, three years as a calligrapher, four years as a great calligrapher, five years as a calligrapher, five years as a calligrapher, six years as a calligrapher, seven years as a calligrapher, eight years as a calligrapher, ten years as a calligrapher, ten years as a calligrapher, twenty years as a golden immortal, and thirty years as an immortal calligrapher.
i have an idea
The protagonist can become younger and give birth to a boy. Do you think the expression of the unfilial son before will be wonderful? Isn't it because he is an only child? Give him another little brother
Motivation at the age of 60 - comment on my son becoming a villain and a licker
What does it feel like to wear a 60-year-old man and still become the richest man. As we all know, the length of a person's life varies. The age of sixty is called the age of sixty or the age of hearing. This age represents the last period of life. At his age, most people choose to live in peace and quiet, have filial children, and then wait to be swallowed by death, let alone the richest man. Why doesn't he want to live this kind of life? Rather than working endlessly when they get old, some people want to live a comfortable life. He could have chosen this kind of life, but he couldn't bear to see the country he conquered being taken away by others, and he couldn't bear to see his son destroy it completely. The dissatisfied heart opened up in his heart, and he successfully opened the path to the system. He had the power to increase his age and live longer in this world without others noticing. The son in the original work made him feel heartbroken. He was deceived by a woman and allowed her to control the entire group. His son and daughter did not have a good life. For the sake of a stable life in the future and for the independence of future generations, Chen Feifan could only get up step by step and take control of the company with his old bones. A kid from a rich family who lives among the rich, a good young master is not good enough and must go to the end of his life. In this world, a lot of people are like this. They are obviously born many points higher than others. How many people would envy such a family, but they don't know how to cherish it, lose their ambition in playing with things, and even spend money just to make one person happy, or just to get an item, and in the end it harms others and themselves. Everyone will pay the due price for their mistakes, and this price is fatal. Chen Feifan wanted him to understand that he was not the only successor. Use his own abilities to put the group on a stronger path and create better conditions to educate future generations.
The topic selection is OK, but the ability is slightly low
Judging from the 30 chapters I have read, this book has a lot of problems. Age reduction, system selection, and Ye Qing are all problems. Each of them is a poisonous point. Let's analyze them one by one. The first one to reduce the age may be that the author still wants to pick up the heroine in the future. This is a poisonous point. Since you choose to travel through time and become an old man, you should start from the perspective of the old man. No matter what novel or TV series, the protagonist of a good work must be highly consistent with the setting (you can increase your life span to write a business war novel, but unfortunately the author still wants to write a simple and brainless pretentious article) The problem with the second system is that the system tells you what to do instead of giving you a choice. How can such a straightforward display option reflect the protagonist's ability? The author keeps repeating that the protagonist is very capable, but I only saw a puppet. This is also a problem of the author's ability. Ye Qing won't talk about the issue of the third villain. The author's intention is to create a villain who can always fight against the protagonist. However, the author's arrangement is as straightforward as a primary school student writing an essay. Even the crooked God of War knows that he cannot stop himself from saying how awesome he is. Author, you don't I know that the character should always be expressed through a plot that fits the character's setting, rather than telling the reader directly. As for Tongwen, there is no explanation of the causes and consequences. The summary is that the villain is too RZ. The author must know that the character can be made into a face, but it cannot be just a face. After reading the summary of 30 chapters, I found that the author is not capable enough and the narrative ability is low. In these 30 chapters, you can actually add the story of Tongwen and the land purchase game to about 150 chapters. Moreover, this increase will increase the reader's viewing experience. A story with cause and effect is better than a headless fly. There are too many. The system can also be changed to reward the protagonist through his actions. As for Ye Qing, delete it. It has nothing to do with advancing the plot. The pretentious and cool novel must be reasonable and reasonable. Today's readers are not like before. If it was ten years ago, maybe the author would have had the opportunity to write this book into a hit, but now I guess it can only be a slap in the face.
When I was in first grade, I occasionally helped my family look after the store during the summer vacation. A strange young aunt came over to buy something. Seeing that I was a child looking after the store, she stuck her head in and asked, "Where are your adults?" "My mother is not here, so you can tell me what you want to buy." I was a little disgusted with her contemptuous tone, frowned, and replied with a tone that seemed a bit sophisticated and impatient. She looked at me seriously for a few seconds, burst into laughter, and stretched out her hand to rub my hair, "I can't tell you the difference with your child, forget it, I'll take care of your business next time, little boss." After that, she turned around and left. I felt insulted. I didn't think I had been visiting the store for more than a day or two, and I hadn't seen anyone. What else can there be that I am embarrassed to say? "Wait a minute." I stopped her, turned around and took out a pack of sanitary napkins from the cardboard box, and also pulled out a black plastic bag. "Is it this? Well, use this to pretend that others can't see it." The aunt seemed to be trembling with fright, "Why do you kid know everything?" Then she walked out the door with a blushing face. I kicked him out and said, "Then do you still want this?" I shook the pad in my hand at her. Auntie walked even more hastily, "No, no, no, why are you chasing me out?" Passers-by grinned and said, "Children are so awesome these days, hahahaha." I looked at her fleeing back and muttered angrily, "I'm wasting a plastic bag." The next day, my friends and I piled sand and went home. When I returned to the store, I saw the strange aunt from yesterday chatting with my mother and holding a pretty little girl. I felt a little guilty. It couldn't be that she made a fool of herself two days ago. She would be taking revenge on me now. The strange thing is that my aunt didn't seem to see me, and she was chatting lively with my mother. I sat on the bench and listened to their chat, and then I realized that they came to Wuhan to visit relatives and were living in the residential building behind us these days. Suddenly my aunt locked her eyes on me, as if she had just discovered that I was back. "Hey, this is your son. He's so handsome." My mother was very happy, pretending to be humble, and called me over and touched the back of my head. "What's so delicate about him? He's very bad, hahaha. He's so delicate just because he looks like me." The aunt also smiled and said, "What's wrong? She looks pretty good." After saying that, she pulled the little girl next to her and said, "Yaya, call me brother." I took a closer look at this little girl. She had braids, a floral skirt, white socks, and little red leather shoes. It is indeed different from our little girls with runny noses and slippers who dare to stand and pee with us. She called me "brother" in a childish voice, and hid behind her aunt, refusing to say anything more. I wanted to touch her hair, but I just came back from sanding and my hands were too dirty. I turned and ran. "Hey, my son is still shy, hahaha." I went to the back and washed my hands and wiped them clean. He ran back and took the little girl's hand to the counter. "Whatever you want to eat, I'll open it for you." The joyful laughter of our parents came from the store. "What's wrong with this? You look like a little grown-up." In the next few days, Auntie often brought Yaya over to play. They chat as adults. I just stole a handful of snacks in my pocket and took Yaya out to eat. "Guess what the flavor of today's lollipop is. If you guess it right, I'll give it to you." "Banana" "Yes, you guessed it right again, here it is." "Why am I always right?" "Because you are awesome" I didn't tell her that I had all the flavors of lollipops with me, so she had no chance of guessing wrong. A few days later, Yaya and I were building a castle with bricks. Auntie walked out of my shop and shouted from a distance: Yaya, let's go back to have lunch. Yaya was a little reluctant to leave, the castle was half full. I said it doesn't matter, we will pile it up next time. Auntie came over and asked me with a smile: Do you like Yaya? I stared at my toes and whispered, I like them. "But we leave the day after tomorrow, what should we do?" I looked at Yaya and then at Auntie, and suddenly I felt like crying, and my throat was so blocked that I couldn't say anything. Auntie squatted down and said to me: Let me tell you a secret. After hearing this, I shuddered and held back my tears. After pushing to the half-finished castle, he ran straight home. I never take a nap, so I lay down until it was time for dinner. I feebly asked my mother, who was dragging me out of bed to eat, to verify the authenticity of what my aunt said. My mother nodded, "Yes, yes, you never knew?" Only then did I burst into tears. "How many snacks did you eat from me? Why didn't you tell me earlier?" I just want to say to that aunt. Why are you dressing your son up like a little girl? ! ! Is there something wrong! ! ! ! ! ! I also gave him a nickname Yaya! ! ! ! ! Is that a nickname for boys? ! ! ! Looking back many years later, I realized that I might have invited revenge from my aunt.
Becoming the richest man in his 60s is actually not scary, but what is scary is that his family fortune is about to be wiped out, but he will be ruined by his unsatisfactory son, and he is also a villain who is so good at licking the dog. I can only say that I can stop the loss right there and start educating my son!
I don't know what to say
Now the protagonist is too smart, and now in these 20 chapters, before his brain hurts, he said that Ye has no brain. I feel that the protagonist has become wise. A company has taken all the funds and directly killed the stock market. If there is no funds to save the market, the company should just suspend the market. If a dangerous person appears in the capital and is so arrogant, it's not too poisonous. Nowadays, no city has a large taxpayer, and this kind of enterprise has special privileges. You wrote it so convincingly. At first I thought the protagonist was a big boss from Jiangsu, Zhejiang and Shanghai, but I didn't expect it to be anything but.
Not bad
This is similar to the book I saw on the female channel before. The male channel actually imitated the female channel, which is ridiculous.
The author! The latest update is pretty quick though. But the quality has dropped a little bit.
I hope that the cool points of future works will not be too single. Also, I hope. The protagonist continues to struggle just as he does now. It is precisely because he struggled like this. The battle with the Son of Destiny. It makes me feel more like us living. In addition, Chen Feifan's character design. Have you ever thought about making the protagonist a little deeper or more complex? Character complexity deepens. A good novel. Either be close to reality. Or too mysterious. Since it is based on reality, there should be setbacks. It's not the most fun to keep winning.















