Trapped for Five Hundred Years at the Beginning

I really don't know what to say. I predict in advance that this book will be published soon. I have to eat and support my family. What a beautiful reason. You don't make money by writing if you like it. If you don't make money by writing if you like, tsk tsk tsk, how sad it is. As an author, whether you are writing for publishing or online Whether the writing is good or not is one thing. Whether it is written carefully is another thing. If you want to support your family, you should not write a book. No matter how little you go to work for a month, it will cost you more than four thousand. You are not the third young master of the Tang family, not Wu Jiu, and certainly not the third uncle of the Southern School. You want to run away before you even start. How can you write good works if you are not calm? Do you remember your first book? Although the writing is not perfect, at least readers can see that it was done with care. Although the results of the second book are not ideal, it is much better than the first one. After the collapse of the third book, I wrote some scattered things. Now the name of the fourth book has been changed, and the updates are not that good. But the fans have always supported you. We have never given up. As an old fan, I have been chasing you all the way from the first book to now. I don't know what to say. I'm giving you a piece of advice, just shut it down if it doesn't work. Make a settlement for yourself and a settlement for the old fans. It's hard for everyone to keep hanging on like this. Your fans 25 Hz,

It's too poisonous. Five hundred years of cultivation for a genius is not as good as eighty years of cultivation for a disciple. Goodbye.

Poisonous, one sentence, several words, several, commas, when I read it, I feel like I can't breathe, I can't anymore, I want to take a deep breath!

This book is okay. Although it is a bit cliche, it is still very good. Come on! Keep at it and your results will be good! Also, I am the "fat cat next door" who left many ancient names in your official account, haha, I hope those names can be used! !

Trash book, as disgusting as a retard!

I saw something wonderful and you said you didn't want to write about it? Forget it, forget it, I would have read the comments section if I had known earlier.

A pig 🐷 would be taller than him in 500 years

Why is this protagonist said to be too weak, a genius that will never appear in ten thousand years? It takes 500 years to reach the third level of the spiritual realm. The few disciples I accepted are already close to the spiritual realm. The setting of the protagonist's strength is really weak.

I didn't want to write a review at first, but the bad point came up for me, so I had to spend some time to respond to the author. . .

There is a poisonous point in this book, that is, the part where the protagonist injures the evil cultivator's apprentice but does not kill him is a bit too holy. I personally feel that it is human nature for the protagonist not to kill his apprentice. After all, the relationship for so many years is like that of father and son, so the protagonist cannot kill the killer and wants to give his apprentice a chance to change his ways. But after all, the protagonist's apprentice is I have been cultivating evil for many years, and my mind has been completely changed as a result. It is impossible to repent so easily. It would be okay if the eldest disciple died. The key is that the eldest disciple is not dead. He may practice evil again. At that time, more people may die than before. Therefore, this is a big poisonous point in this book that is full of the breath of the Holy Mother (personal feeling, please don't criticize🐶)