Your Majesty, the Spectacle is Ruining the Country!

I haven't read the book yet, but seeing the title made my blood boil. Let me play two rounds and then take a look. I, Qin Shihuang, will find the desert and beat the pyramid out even if I die.

Until Chapter 74, the only female character who appeared was a cook with a bucket waist and unicorn arms. Now I wonder if the author does not describe female characters at all.

Now when you read this kind of article, you are no longer just reading a cool article. You are also looking at the author's understanding of society and his scientific thinking. If you feel that your understanding of society is not deep, you should increase your exposure to the protagonist. It is also acceptable to add more dark blue points when he is indecisive. Yes, but your plug-ins are weak, and the description of social forms is very superficial, which makes people look very embarrassed. Of course, this is also my personal one-sided view. Only subscriptions, rewards and the author himself will know. This kind of subject matter is difficult to write. I hope the author can work hard.

No thanks, it seems that the starting point is gone now

Generally speaking, there are not many problems, mainly in the details. For example, the function of the old butler as a tool should be clearly explained at the beginning. He is in charge of the internal affairs of the territory, runs around in the territory, and is very familiar with the territory. In this way, it won't be strange for the protagonist to directly ask the old housekeeper when he asks where the sun is brighter nearby during the salt-baking section (because generally speaking, the local residents should be the ones who know the nearby environment better). Or it doesn't matter if the old butler doesn't understand, just describe the protagonist's psychological activities: Because I am very close to and trust the old butler, I subconsciously ask him first. There is also the place where people are doing shit. It's a bit blunt to directly say that the protagonist used Baidu online to directly use the local method. It is better to say that the protagonist was interested in learning about it before and knew the principles, but he couldn't use the more advanced technology and couldn't remember it, so he used the local method.

According to your description, I can't imagine the appearance and location of this city. I can't form a picture in my mind. Have you ever made a map?

Do you see something? That's right, six identical covers, and I'm still missing one of them before I can fight in the Holy Grail War. The next three are all in harmony. --The above is just a complaint and is not intended to start a fight. -- I also hope that you will pay more attention to the Xia Keyian. This is a great evil in the world. Many Immortals: "Good"

It's not as great as everyone says. I just think it's average. Maybe the writing in the back is very good. It's a pity that I can't even read the front.

The writing is quite good. I can understand the overall idea clearly. Come on, author. Although there are some minor problems, I believe it will get better and better👍.

My writing is pretty good so far, keep up your hard work!