Arknights: This Broken Ship Will Sink Today

When I saw the word "girl", I was completely stunned. Kitty Cat is older than Big Daddy. She is only a few hundred years older than me (bushi

I have only read Chapter 39 so far. I don't dare to call myself a boat expert, so I will just talk about a few major flaws as an ordinary storyteller. (I won't abandon the book for the time being. If it gets better later, I will come back and revise the book review) 1. The biggest poisonous point is the age of Kelsey and other characters. Tallulah was taken away by Koxiche around the year 1076 of the Terra Calendar (see the main plot for details). According to the conversation between Chen and Old Wei, it can be basically seen that Chen was still a child. However, in this time period of this book and even before, Chen is already at the age of a high school student (not to mention Kelsey in this time period of this book is in high school). The Kazdaele Civil War broke out around 1093 in the Terra Calendar (see the Born in the Night plot for details). According to the Babel Tower operation, it can be seen that Kelsey and the doctor have dug out the Rhode Island ship hull and led the Tower of Babel for some time. According to the memories of the Stranger in the Lost World, Kelsey saved the Stranger twenty-two years ago in the "modern" time, that is, around 1075 in the Terra Calendar. At this time, Li Chen Sir and Tarua were not separated yet, but the "high school student" Kelsey had already killed many people in Sargon and even saved the Stranger. And as far as the little stranger's attitude towards Kelsey is concerned, even if Kelsey is underage, it is impossible for her to be a high school student (not to mention impossible). According to the plot of Vincent Manor, Kelsey was fighting a one-on-one defense 13 years ago in the "modern" era, etc. I won't say anything else. . . In short, even if you are not a plot party player, you can tell from the second creation and the like that Kelsey's age is unknown and not young. The most direct evidence is the introduction of the second monthly team of "Puppet and Scarlet Diamond": the oldest is not necessarily the oldest. And this team is the rangers, Kelsey and Pallas. In other words, Kelsey is older than the ranger, and I won't say much about the ranger's age. . . And the author, you told me that Kelsey was still in high school around 1075? Makes me laugh, isn't that when the ranger is still a primary school student? So isn't Sir Chen older than the ranger? It turns out that Chen is the real old woman ( 2. In Chapter 39, Frost Star said, "Ten years ago, Ursus was preparing to expand further outwards." That is, before 1065. According to Mr. Oakaki's theory, the battle between the four emperors took place around 1053, and the new emperor ascended the throne not long after. Then came the period of great turmoil, with conflicts between the old aristocracy and the royalists and the new aristocracy. The new emperor had no time to quell the rebellion, but he still expanded externally? The best example is the Fourth Army of Ursus (see "Remnant Walking" for details), so I won't go into details. Froststar in this chapter also said, "As before, in order to maintain domestic stability, the emperor could not allow ordinary people to work in the mines, so he and the great nobles chose the same strategy as before: they further intensified the persecution of the infected, and from that time on, the infected in Ursus lost their citizenship rights." "My parents did not agree with this opinion. They were considered an alternative among the nobles. Therefore, they were naturally deemed guilty of treason and sent to the mines." First of all, Ursus has always had an exclusionary policy towards infected people. Infected people have never had any citizenship rights, let alone lost them. Secondly, Shuangxing's parents were not nobles but commoners, and they were not convicted but simply lazy on the picket line (see the main plot for details. A family that was supposed to be sent to the mine ran away. The picket team lazily found a house number and copied it, which happened to be Shuangxing's house. There were no infected people in Shuangxing's family at this time, but the picket team sent them to the mine in order to maintain their performance. This is also the most pitiful thing about Shuangxing.) 3. Original text of this chapter "When I was 5 years old, my parents' ore disease became more serious. That month, they did not complete the tasks set by their superiors, so the supervisor whipped them." Carters' voice began to tremble, and Ling Xing could feel that the girl leaning on his shoulder was struggling fiercely inside. "I saw blood and snowflakes falling together. My parents fell down and never got up again." "I was young and couldn't do much work, so my grandmother was forced to take up mining manuscripts. The two of us could barely survive." First, you are sent to the mine and you have to work regardless of age. There is no such thing as grandma being forced to pick up a mining pick after your parents die. Secondly, the cause of death of Shuangxing's parents was not due to failure to complete the work but because of the black lottery, including his grandmother's death. (The black lottery is entertainment in the mine. To put it simply, whoever is drawn will die. See the main story for details) 4. Original text of this chapter "I remember that at that time, my father's tall body stood in front of me, and the people around me were holding spears and various simple weapons." First of all, Big Daddy's guerrillas relied on raids to support their wars, and Froststar's mine was just one of them, not the starting point. If they had only a bunch of crude weapons, they would have been wiped out by the Ursus regular army long ago. Not to mention the shield guard that Big Daddy is most proud of. .

Update quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, oh

I feel like there are still a lot of things that haven't been written yet. It's too hasty to finish it.

Tnnd, I'm a newbie playing with a hammer pigeon, but I can't beat anything, and I'm crying. Do you have any homework to copy?

This is what makes a book interesting! The simple plot is too boring.

You can't bring it into the game to watch, otherwise...

When will the protagonist return to Terra?

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It's obviously embarrassing, but it's so funny hahahahahahahaha