Taking a Battleship to the Moon
by Who Taught Me To Cultivate Immortality?
About This Novel
With a battleship, he came to the moon. Why do I want to travel to a parallel world with the battleship in my game? Is the sun about to have a helium flash? The people of Blue Star are preparing to launch the Loya Ark Project! When Blue Star landed on the moon, they suddenly discovered that there was an alien base on the moon! ! The two cooperated and launched a grand plan to wander the earth! About to head to the Trisolaris Galaxy!
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Official(27)Scraped 8d ago
suggestion
You can write that the Blue Star people are Xuanyuan civilization, unknown tribesmen who disappeared many, many years ago. This way, it will be more convenient to rule. The lost tribesmen include Xuanyuan, Bai R, etc. It will be more convenient to rule if you write it this way.
author
Please don't be an eunuch anymore. If you want to write about battleships, don't write about tens of thousands of battleships. It looks like nothing. And in terms of resources, if you usually play Stellaris, you will have to have tens of thousands of battleships. Repairs are impossible. I'm not against you. I just like it. I gave some suggestions.
There is a big problem with the logic of this book! The character design of the protagonist is also very problematic!
11
Author, I highly recommend you read the comments from book friends. Some of the writing is really poisonous.
It feels a bit like a villain getting his way.
You can't even look down on your own race, damn it.
deduce this place
Even if the deduction is not in line with what you want, you can keep it and give it to them. Isn't it bad to leave it to the people under your command? Why delete it? There is no such thing as useless, it depends on how you use it
Don't be black-skinned, don't be black-skinned, don't be black-skinned, say important things three times
The first few chapters almost put me off, there were so many typos.
A lot of typos and incorrect sentences combined into a preface and a follow-up confused me. It is a test of our readers' pinyin and comprehension abilities. After reading a chapter that I couldn't react to, I had no idea what the chapter was about. So can the author please check himself when uploading chapters? The opening sentence is so profound that it makes no sense. How can anyone continue reading? ? ? ?
good
It's just that the written sentences are not fluent, and when listening to the book, it feels like there is too much nonsense. A lot of it is not on topic.
very good
Say what you like three times, don't want a eunuch, don't want a eunuch, don't want a eunuch
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Community(0)
Official(27)Scraped 8d ago
suggestion
You can write that the Blue Star people are Xuanyuan civilization, unknown tribesmen who disappeared many, many years ago. This way, it will be more convenient to rule. The lost tribesmen include Xuanyuan, Bai R, etc. It will be more convenient to rule if you write it this way.
author
Please don't be an eunuch anymore. If you want to write about battleships, don't write about tens of thousands of battleships. It looks like nothing. And in terms of resources, if you usually play Stellaris, you will have to have tens of thousands of battleships. Repairs are impossible. I'm not against you. I just like it. I gave some suggestions.
There is a big problem with the logic of this book! The character design of the protagonist is also very problematic!
11
Author, I highly recommend you read the comments from book friends. Some of the writing is really poisonous.
It feels a bit like a villain getting his way.
You can't even look down on your own race, damn it.
deduce this place
Even if the deduction is not in line with what you want, you can keep it and give it to them. Isn't it bad to leave it to the people under your command? Why delete it? There is no such thing as useless, it depends on how you use it
Don't be black-skinned, don't be black-skinned, don't be black-skinned, say important things three times
The first few chapters almost put me off, there were so many typos.
A lot of typos and incorrect sentences combined into a preface and a follow-up confused me. It is a test of our readers' pinyin and comprehension abilities. After reading a chapter that I couldn't react to, I had no idea what the chapter was about. So can the author please check himself when uploading chapters? The opening sentence is so profound that it makes no sense. How can anyone continue reading? ? ? ?
good
It's just that the written sentences are not fluent, and when listening to the book, it feels like there is too much nonsense. A lot of it is not on topic.
very good
Say what you like three times, don't want a eunuch, don't want a eunuch, don't want a eunuch
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