Absolute Cycle World
by Little Ivan
About This Novel
Human beings have long experienced the future. People in the future discovered the trajectory of time and performed artificial entropy reduction. After the small-scale entropy reduction was carried out, the world did not allow two opposing laws to be at the same time, which led to the overall reverse flow of time and the world returned to its original state. And how many times are we the product of this?
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A book written by a classmate, come and support me
There are only two chapters at the moment, and I can't see anything about the plot yet. I'm going to make a few suggestions mainly in terms of language, sentence structure, and structure. First, too many buzzwords are used. Since you are writing hard science fiction, you should condense, refine, and purify your language. Second, the insertion of cold knowledge can be carried out separately, and there is no need to repeat it in large paragraphs. Third, the character dialogue must conform to the character setting. The doctor's dialogue is a bit too rambling. Above This is the problem I have discovered so far. Others are fine. I will keep it for now and wait for the plot to advance. PS, be sure to keep up with updates. If you write well at about 10,000 to 50,000 words, editors will come to you to sign a contract. Come on👍👍
Good ideas, promising writer.
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Official(2)Scraped 5d ago
A book written by a classmate, come and support me
There are only two chapters at the moment, and I can't see anything about the plot yet. I'm going to make a few suggestions mainly in terms of language, sentence structure, and structure. First, too many buzzwords are used. Since you are writing hard science fiction, you should condense, refine, and purify your language. Second, the insertion of cold knowledge can be carried out separately, and there is no need to repeat it in large paragraphs. Third, the character dialogue must conform to the character setting. The doctor's dialogue is a bit too rambling. Above This is the problem I have discovered so far. Others are fine. I will keep it for now and wait for the plot to advance. PS, be sure to keep up with updates. If you write well at about 10,000 to 50,000 words, editors will come to you to sign a contract. Come on👍👍
Good ideas, promising writer.
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