Willing to Cherish

It's so well written, with a true description of school days, and the impact of choosing a school can also be seen😹

🙉🙉I am the first person hahahaha

Highlights ① Combining subtle action description with language description, modifying and supplementing the inner psychology of the character's words while introducing micro-movements to further highlight the meticulous "delicate" psychological pattern ② Narration, using flashbacks within the established background framework, Let the author read according to the implicit idea of "guessing and discovering" and read from the perspective of a "nearest bystander" or "witness", which will naturally be full of interest. Such a "link by link" writing technique can firmly capture the reader's mind. Disadvantages: Very few sentences are unclearly segmented, which can easily lead to misunderstandings. Suggestions: Writing comes from life, observation, and experience. The author may as well put down the pen and further the purpose of writing in daily life, and he will find a different world. Hope: Keep up the good work!

Ollie here, Chong Ha, Yi Yang Qianxi's wife

The author's writing is very attractive to me and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Come on, Ollie, there's nothing wrong with it

Keep up the good work, author, thank you Ollie😯