Becoming an Immortal Through Comprehensive Cultivation in Hong Kong

Haha, I gave it to He Min at the beginning. Just look at it. No matter how good the writing is, if you don't accept it, it will be garbage.

First of all, there are a group of male coaches at the beginning. This seems to be a necessary condition for time travellers? The author can write something different instead of following the trend, with an ordinary appearance, okay? Secondly, it also comes with plug-ins, which is really another indispensable advantage for time travellers! Then again, all the relatives have backgrounds and abilities, and the protagonist is born with Taoism! Familiar with the plot again! Oh my god, you might as well cheat the invincible Then, the content is very literate and contains sloppy Mandarin. Could you please read it after writing? I started writing about not taking the initiative or being decisive when it comes to women, and then the first one, He Min, was so good that he couldn't bear to give it to Zhou Xingxing? The second Li Yu said that he was too young to be admitted. Here comes Mai Jiaqi, whose appearance is much worse, but better? It's really cool. I originally thought there would be no heroine, but when I saw Mai sleeping with him later , I couldn't stand it anymore. Regardless of the writing style, emotional description, and personal strength (if you are not sure, ask about the innate Taoist body), there is no hierarchy. There is nothing interesting in these aspects. The author should practice more, I hope he can write a work that can attract people in the future.

Questions about the protagonist's girlfriend Since this is a new book by a newcomer, there are currently very few comments. The few comments were all about why the protagonists didn't accept He Min and Li Yu, and why they were written about them. It seemed that there was no female protagonist, and if He Min wasn't cast, it would be to give away the female protagonist? ? ? ? He Min has basically confirmed his relationship with Zhou Xingxing. If the protagonist doesn't steal other people's girlfriends, he just gives them away? First of all, I said at the beginning that the protagonist had 5 girlfriends at the same time before time traveling. How could he become a saint after time traveling? The protagonist must have a girlfriend, and there are quite a few of them. Secondly, why should female characters who are not accepted be described? Because it has to serve the subsequent plot. For example, I wrote about He Min because of Zhou Xingxing. I definitely wrote more about Zhou Xingxing than about He Min. I wrote Li Yu to lead to the subsequent plot later. If all the women described by the protagonist are to be accepted, then should the protagonist's cousin Chen Zhaodi also be accepted? She has more descriptions than He Min. See one and accept one, then the protagonist is not Neptune but an animal. It's still an animal in heat. The protagonist I want to write may be an emotional Neptune, but he won't be an animal in heat. There are gods and Buddhas in this world, so don't be afraid of retribution for destroying other people's happy marriages! The female character that the protagonist accepts either has a bad ending in the original work, or she has not yet met her boyfriend in the movie when she meets the protagonist. The protagonist does not do anything to ruin other people's happy lives.

I have read a lot of Hong Kong variety novels. Many of the plots in this novel can be seen in other Hong Kong variety novels. I have read the plot of "O Night in Lyon" in other Hong Kong variety novels. I have also seen similar plots in Hong Kong variety novels where you can travel to other worlds.

The author's writing is quite good, but there is too much inner drama. It's not that I can't accept writing with inner drama, but that too much drama affects reading. It's acceptable if some inner drama occasionally occurs

Help Zhou Xingxing chase He Min at the beginning? It's obvious that bad karma can be strengthened quickly, but it's not used. It's too rigid.

This is my first starting point contract book. Strictly speaking, it is the first novel I have written. I am just a newbie. I know that my writing is average, my writing style is not good, and I have many problems. Thank you all for persisting in reading. I will work hard to improve and strive to make a little progress every day. Thanks again to all the pretty boys and girls for your support. T T

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Please be more rigorous in your writing. You are so funny when you wear glasses when fighting. Your eyesight has improved ≠ your eyes are not nearsighted, right? You are really good at writing.