Reborn Forensic Lolita is Going Dark
by Chang'an Immortal In Troubled Times
About This Novel
Yan Xi was originally an orphan adopted from the orphanage by the Yan family's parents, just to provide a mobile blood bank for their daughter Yan Mu. Yan Xi is very grateful to the Yan family's parents for adopting her, but reality is always cruel. Because of a deliberate frame-up by Yan Mu, she severed ties with the Yan family's parents. But that's not the end of it... Yan Mu was kidnapped on her 18th birthday by the so-called kidnappers ordered by Yan Xi. Yan Xi was charged with intentional kidnapping when she was 17 years old. A few years after she was released from prison, Yan Xi was killed... Everything went back to two years later, when Miss Shen Ruan, the eldest daughter of the Shen family, opened her eyes in the hospital bed... (The author's first book needs everyone's love and care, thank you)
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Official(8)Scraped 5d ago
Come on, author, I hope you will get better and better, and your books will become popular.
The novel is pretty good, keep up the good work. Some places can be written in detail. The relationship between Yan Xi and Shen Ruan can be written better. It doesn't need to be too complicated, just keep it simple.
Please update
Good luck to the author, are you still updating? This is really beautiful. Please pay attention to your health. If you have time, can you update it?
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In fact, what you wrote is okay, but I don't know why it feels a bit boring towards the end. Maybe you don't have any good inspiration. Also, I hope you can add some of your own emotions into the book. You know, real books can put emotions in them. I have read many books before, but only a few can make me cry. The front of your book is fine, but I hope you will work harder in the later articles and try to let me read the emotions and tears. If you think I'm nagging, then take my words as shit; if you think I'm wrong, that's up to you but please don't scold me. One more word for you: Come on, don't let everyone down! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This ability is okay, but there are too few character descriptions, expressions, demeanor, actions, etc., Too little, basically just talking, the plot is good, and it is quite humorous to read, but you can try to make the characters more prominent, and it will be better to add more descriptions other than language! Come on
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Come on, big daddy
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
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Official(8)Scraped 5d ago
Come on, author, I hope you will get better and better, and your books will become popular.
The novel is pretty good, keep up the good work. Some places can be written in detail. The relationship between Yan Xi and Shen Ruan can be written better. It doesn't need to be too complicated, just keep it simple.
Please update
Good luck to the author, are you still updating? This is really beautiful. Please pay attention to your health. If you have time, can you update it?
.
In fact, what you wrote is okay, but I don't know why it feels a bit boring towards the end. Maybe you don't have any good inspiration. Also, I hope you can add some of your own emotions into the book. You know, real books can put emotions in them. I have read many books before, but only a few can make me cry. The front of your book is fine, but I hope you will work harder in the later articles and try to let me read the emotions and tears. If you think I'm nagging, then take my words as shit; if you think I'm wrong, that's up to you but please don't scold me. One more word for you: Come on, don't let everyone down! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This ability is okay, but there are too few character descriptions, expressions, demeanor, actions, etc., Too little, basically just talking, the plot is good, and it is quite humorous to read, but you can try to make the characters more prominent, and it will be better to add more descriptions other than language! Come on
Check in
Check in, check in, check in, check in
Come on, big daddy
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
update update
The author will update it soon🐻
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