Time Walker

First, after the protagonist traveled to the Condor Shooting, his inspiration turned out to be to study immortality and overthrow Meng Yuan. What's going on when you travel to a martial arts world and study longevity? Secondly, when the protagonist was four years old, he asked his mother Huang Rong to help him collect orphans to teach martial arts and cultivate his power. He even proposed to spread martial arts all over the world and spread the martial arts in Peach Blossom Island. Huang Rong actually agreed, which was very strange and completely unreasonable. Then the protagonist told Huang Rong that the Nine Yang Scriptures were hidden in the Shaolin Temple, the Six Meridians Divine Sword and the Xiaoyao Sect of the previous dynasty, and he was also planning to steal the Nine Yang Scriptures. Regarding these situations, Huang Rong actually didn't delve into how the protagonist knew about these situations. Instead, she accepted the order and supported the protagonist. Although the author explains that a mother's trust in her son is unlimited, this explanation is still far-fetched. Normally, one should suspect the protagonist of seizing the body. The idea of ​​seizing one's body has been around since ancient times. Li Tieguai, one of the Eight Immortals, is the one who seizes one's body. Faced with the protagonist's near omniscience, it is unreasonable to say that Huang Rong could not think of seizing the body. Even if you don't suspect that you are seizing the body, you should still suspect that it is the reincarnation of an immortal, or it is instigated by others. But in fact, the treatment in the article is as if Huang Rong was controlled by the protagonist using the soul-moving method. She is completely the protagonist's tool. She can do whatever she is told to do, and she can think whatever she wants. Third, few modern people know how to burn glass or make gunpowder. Traveling back to ancient times, if you have a lot of financial resources and manpower, and have an idea, you can still experiment slowly. But you have developed all the black technology at once without explaining how it was done. It feels very strange. Fourth, the protagonist just did some orphan training and captured three states in the first operation. How did you get it? The protagonist said a word and gave an order, and it was won. How many orphans have you raised? What equipment does it come with? What forces are around the three chosen states? There was no explanation at all. And for the first time, in a major operation, the protagonist did not personally direct it, but just issued an order. Could it be that he has already accumulated an army of millions of orphans? This action feels very childish. Fifth, in the area of ​​local governance, the protagonist requires that all children, regardless of gender, be forced to attend school, requires that all soldiers be literate, and requires that all land be forcibly taken back to the protagonist. In short, there is a chapter on various bizarre policies. This one is no longer able to complain. It seems that the protagonist has copied half of what he was ignorant about in modern times and thought it was all good things, and directly copied it to ancient times. It neither considers whether the policy would be acclimatized in ancient times, nor does it prioritize according to the actual situation of its own power development. Basically, this approach cannot withstand the halo of ordinary protagonists in the later stage, and it must be very big. For example, the protagonist can obtain endless modern arms and a large number of absolutely loyal biochemically modified people, so as to forcibly bulldoze the world.

Some of the author's words are actually quite exaggerated. What I want to say is that the protagonists don't consider the people. . . Are you telling me how to conquer the world in a martial arts world? The Condor Scrolls are all about developing forces. I am so drunk on developing forces. How can I not read historical novels when watching Conquest of the World? Do you need to look at this? The total number of characters in the original book is not as many as the "classmates" of the protagonist. I was also drunk and kept talking nonsense. I originally thought it was a unique book, but it turned out to be unique enough. . . Alas, let me express my opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I hope the author's book can be better. . .

Damn, this book is poisonous. I read it all night long. I didn't go to work during the day and was fined 300 yuan.

After reading your book, I realized that we are all "parasites"

To be honest, this is the first time I have seen such a thoughtful book here. At least the author had something he wanted to express and expressed it. Different from those mindless novels, I respect it as literature. Thank you author.

I really can't accept it, because you yourself said that those armies only trained with spears, and you also said that martial arts and technology should be developed together. The reason why other novels are written like this is because of his identity and ancient people. Isn't the technology good? Rifles or something else, whether the gunpowder is black powder or picric acid, granular gunpowder or something, oh, by the way, what type of artillery is it? In ancient times, heavy artillery and line infantry can greatly reduce the frontal impact of cavalry. Nine thousand people are more than enough. How many cannons can there be? Doesn't it increase the difficulty with a modern army? Modern soldiers and even the army of the 19th century are stronger than those of ancient times. The army of the ancient times, let alone the army of the late Song Dynasty. No matter how strong Mongolia is, it is just an ancient army. This way, the casualties are one to two. There are firearms, but they are useless. You have dreams, but you don't know that they can't be built. It's too illusionistic. Now it's okay. In the future, with more people and strength, it is inevitable that some people will have bad intentions. Why study the ancients, but don't forget the roots? Times are changing, everything is changing, from the army to life All aspects of life are progressing, and the protagonist seems to be rebuilding a new society, but everyone is equal, so it is difficult to kill all his subordinates. Since the emergence of farm tools, technology has been born, and martial arts will eventually decline. This is the law of nature. When you are strong, one day the strong will bully the weak, and you cannot change it. After all, I have worked hard for more than 20 years with an ordinary farmer, and I feel that I am superior to him from the bottom of my heart.

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It's beautiful. The author's writing style is impeccable and delicate. He also explains all aspects clearly and considers the readers very much. The characterization of the characters is lifelike, and everything is linked to one another. Although it is not dramatic, there are ups and downs. For some people, this is not a cool book, but for me, this book is even better than a cool book. I can't use gorgeous words to describe every bit of it. I only have two words: beautiful!