Please Make Your Debut

Hahahaha, it's so funny, the author's imagination is incredible. Then I thought I could give Laoshu some tenderness, he was so miserable. Hahahahahahahahaha

Nice! I hope the mushroom house will pass by quickly. The mushroom house made me vomit. To be honest. Mushroom houses are now the scum of the novel world... It makes old bookworms feel sick to their stomachs. Come on update. 👊

I rarely read this kind of book, but this book is very interesting, but a little lacking. I'd like to leave a comment, otherwise I'm afraid I won't find it in the future or forget about it.

I originally gave it a five-star review, but I later deleted it and gave it a three-star review. Although there is no harem in the later chapters, the writing is ambiguous. It can be seen that the author wants to please readers on both sides at the same time. But I think online articles should also have a basic bottom line of value. You said writing a historical article has a logical and emotional harem. Later...

There are so few people, but we don't want eunuchs, come on

It was okay at first, but as soon as I arrived in the big city, he looked like a scoundrel. This was the first thing I felt.

The writing is quite good, I like Brother Shu the most. But why does it feel like things have changed since the Mushroom House? Am I the only one who feels this way?

Just like the title, it was okay at first, but after writing more than 200 chapters, it started to fall apart, like a wretched, greasy old pervert wandering around.

Don't bury Ai Wen, it's annoying to watch, just forget it once or twice, it's in every chapter!

The book is a good book, I dare not say it is fairy grass, at least it starts with food. The character of the protagonist is very likable, and the plot arrangement is also quite interesting. Except for the deformation meter at the beginning (after all, everyone knows what the deformation meter looks like, which will inevitably affect the first impression of the book). Then there are too many non-mainstream words and local accents in the book. In my opinion , the local accent may be because the author wants to highlight the location of the protagonist, or simply wants to show off how good his local dialect is, and then there are non-mainstream texts. I get angry when I mention this. There are so many incomprehensible Martian texts. I dare say that at least 70% of the novels cannot be understood, and even if they understand, they only have a partial understanding. The use of Martian text is probably because the author wants to highlight the era of the protagonist, but to be honest, it is completely unnecessary. This thing can be done on the name, or on the age. Really, Martian text, there is really no need