Treasures from All Heavens

The protagonist has no temper at all and is led by others the whole time. Everything the protagonist gives can be said to be priceless and can change a person's destiny. The protagonist's system is also a licking dog, giving things by licking his face. The things the protagonist gives can be said to be treasures of the plane. I don't know what to say about the author.

So rubbish, so cowardly? Have you never seen a woman?

The whole story is about Naruto. Naruto is so awesome that he could run rampant throughout history. No one would read it if it wasn't finished.

The crooked nut at the beginning, the flower fairy. It should be Nanny Rong.

This is software, it's the kind that's always on call. He was picked up and taken away while he was sleeping. Once Lu Dantou identified a reliable person, he sent him over and took him over to ask for good things. I guess it was Zhou Yu who was willing to fight and accept, so he felt that he had made a profit.

It's too poisonous. At least give something to others, and the other people's strength will be added to you. It's for nothing. I really think the villains like Snake and Shield are stupid and won't arrest you for research.

So disgusting, so retarded. Too poisonous

I think the protagonist is quite miserable. If you can't complete the task, you will be punished. If you complete the task, there are no good things.

It's really easy for you to break down like this. What you write is about cultivating immortals, not casual articles. First, the mage's holy land is Kama Taj, not Kama Taj. Also, there is a woman in each world, which is too much. In the first world, it doesn't matter if everyone is acting. In the second world, you use his body to follow his cause and effect. In the third world, it's okay if you treat her as a goddess. In the fourth world, you helped her and she likes you after some events, which can be said. But in the fifth world, it's too much. If you keep going like this, you probably won't have to recruit a few women from each world to write harem stories. According to your outline, your final strength must be at least the Hunyuan level. You have just passed the mortal level to the immortal level.

This book is really rubbish. From the setting to the writing to the plot, it's all rubbish. Don't drop it. I'm even trying to increase the score and delete the comments.