Survival: Where is Qiran?

Name: Survival: Where is Qiran?
Author: You Mingyou

by You Mingyou

ongoing Xuanhuan Isekai Male Lead

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66Kwords22chapters

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Ch. 22 — 《墨影凝鹊》

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One second ago, I was celebrating my daughter's sixth birthday. The sun was shining brightly in the amusement park and my wife was smiling gently. The next second, the bloody sky opened its giant eyes, and a strange smile filled the world. I watched with my own eyes as my daughter in my arms and my wife holding my hand turned into two warm red mists in my palms and disappeared without a trace. An inhuman voice announces that we have become players in a "game of survival," thrown into three separate desperate situations. I must live. In this strange place where the rules are broken and monsters may lurk under every shadow, I use my remaining rationality to measure the abyss and solve the puzzle. Because I know that Mu Ran and Qi Qi must be waiting for me somewhere in the corner. And I swear, no matter how many areas I have to cross or how many cruel truths I have to uncover, I will definitely bring them back to me.

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Qi Yi'an1mo ago

I haven't read much, so I'll just comment.

[A family opinion, just a personal opinion] 1. There is no market for the first-person perspective at the moment. If the author Jun is writing, it would be better to use the third-person perspective! 2. For fragmented reading on mobile phones, try to break up paragraphs, and the paragraphs in each chapter should be short and numerous. The author opened the reading software and tried to read it himself. Some paragraphs have more than ten lines, which is very tiring to read. 3. There are still some problems with the plot setting, which is taken for granted and cannot arouse the readers' emotions! 4. The character has no memory points! 5. Keep working hard, maybe my opinion is wrong, the author can just take a look!

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