Martial Arts Begins with Orion

In fact, there is no big problem with the elderly protagonist, but the plot line written by the author is not! This book is only attractive at the beginning with the extra points of survival and collecting pets, but the plot after entering the town is very average! The author's writing gives the impression that the protagonist is leading a group of old brothers to join a club in the town. Is this attractive? If you have such an awesome plug-in, shouldn't you just try to upgrade it first? Then kill the enemy, collect their wealth to buy medicinal materials to continue upgrading, and then the strength is almost the same. After arranging livelihood for a few old brothers, it is time to leave Novice Village. But what are you writing? Can the protagonist's plug-in add something to the old brothers? Even if the relationship is particularly good, it has no cultivation value! And this is not about cultivating immortality! Later, there was a long hunting plot. Not to mention that the protagonist continued to suffer because there was no backstage. This plot was also unattractive! The plug-ins are also written in increasingly vague terms, always saying that they are not far from one point or very close to one point, and there is no sense of immersion at all. At the beginning, if you eat soil and bark, you can generate a little bit in a month. Later, if you eat meat, you can generate a few bits in half a month. After that, if you eat medicinal materials and monsters, there is no standard for measuring it. Then after upgrading the martial arts master, it became even more chaotic. Accumulating points became slower and the effect of points was strengthened. It was so chaotic! Add some popular novels, if nothing else, just read those relatively popular novels. The system points must be clear to the readers, so that they can feel immersed and anticipated. If you add some vague plug-ins, there will basically be nothing that won't hit the street, unless your plot writing is particularly good! But the author, the plot you write is generally unattractive, and you add some plug-ins and write without a sense of substitution. It is difficult to achieve good results! In online novels, the sense of plug-in substitution is strong enough (such as the "get out of here" novels), which can make readers ignore the bad plot or even the poisonous points. Or maybe the plot is well written (such as Da Feng's watchman), which can make readers ignore the sense of substitution of plug-ins.

As mentioned earlier, Du Er occasionally helped the protagonist when he returned to the village a few years ago. However, when the protagonist traveled back in time, he starved to death. Later, when they arrived in the town, loyal friends began to appear, and there was also the confidante who was waiting for the protagonist. It would be okay to say that he didn't know that the protagonist returned to the village with all his injuries, but later he learned about the situation of the protagonist's return to the village from Du Er, and then he didn't visit the protagonist until he died of illness and starvation. Is this called a confidante?

Absolutely great, very good, very well written

Not to mention that the protagonist is an old man, but he is also a benevolent and righteous lady.

It is wonderful and beautiful. Among the novels about hunters, you have written the most exciting novels. The hunter's hunting is vivid, and the hunting battles are also very exciting. The character descriptions are very distinctive, and many characters have the shadow of a hero! It's so easy to read in one go, I strongly recommend everyone to read it, speed up the update and it's not enough~

Shi,,,,,,,,,,,, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

One person and one dog are enough. To accept so many pets and add points to them is to suppress the realm and be a failure. The plot is also average.

Very good but updates are too slow

In the past, those who turned into spirits were called monsters and those who transformed into demons, but now it's the other way around. There are also many words in the wrong order that appear openly in the novel. Is it intentional to impress people or is it a common mistake?

Please be careful when subscribing. This book seems like a eunuch. I have read it a lot and I think it is well written and the plot is arranged very smoothly. I don't know why the author is a eunuch later. It's a pity.