Since the Heavens Let Bullets Fly,

A 20-year-old bookworm left a message. The author's writing is really unparalleled. He who watched the film first will become a new person after reading it. Each copy of the story is well written. The emotional drama is a bit pretentious, and there is always a sense of disobedience like "I'm so good, you come up and do it yourself". I always thought that the author of the emotional drama in the world was good, so I gave "Human World" a try. But the flaws are not concealed. If you can challenge a wise protagonist that many authors dare not write, that would be awesome❌. I believe that any author wants to write a wise protagonist. However, he does not have enough experience, a low level of structure, and a lack of knowledge. In the end, he loses the protagonist. It is written as a mindless pervert who bites into the copy like a mad dog. Newbies enjoy it, but old bookworms find it embarrassing. Looking at the world is like eating melon seeds. Occasionally, a handful of melon seeds may be hollow or moldy, but they can still be eaten. But a handful of melon seeds and half a bedbug would be hard to swallow. The biggest problem for you, the author, is that you always want to write a complete online article, but you really don't need it. You can end it anywhere, and you don't have to draw a complete circle in the whole book. This book will read about you to be a new person. This book adjusts the system twice to set the anchor and pull the reins for the power system that is running all the way. , I really couldn't control it anymore, so I started the ancient conspiracy, the Void Zerg, I reluctantly drew this circle, and the end of the knot is really like watching the Wesley series written by Ni Kuang. If you can't fill the hole, you will talk about aliens, and the sky will collapse behind you. Do you always feel that if you can't finish it, it's because the power system has failed? In fact, it is not the case. It is impossible for the power system to jump. It is just that the author wants more and wants to write more, but it can never meet the needs of readers. Many authors in the world only dare to write urban dramas and period novels, and do not even dare to go low-level, for fear of jumping. There are also some authors who are very smart. No matter how earth-shattering the copy is, in reality they should act like a little fool, not causing trouble, not being pretentious, not pretending to be a slap in the face, having an ordinary love affair, and just treating the real world as the anchor and safe haven of the film and television world. In this way, even if the power system jumps again, there will be no flowers. It would be more perfect if the author could change the pace of writing, so that the film and television world is a little faster and the real world is a little slower. Okay, here are some simple opinions. If you don't listen, you will treat it as nonsense. I haven't organized the language well. I will say it wherever I think. Finally, I wish the author will become a god soon. I really like you.

There are too many people on this track where Zhutian Liu fights and kills, and it is too difficult to get angry. You have to write an article to show off your IQ, such as traveling to Ming Dynasty 1566 when Shen Yishi turned over. If you look at the Ming Dynasty Imperial Master, it is very popular, but in fact the writing style is just like that.

I know, I paid all my monthly tickets. He's actually a eunuch

The book is good. It follows the previous ones and maintains a consistent level. No matter what kind of story it is, it can easily draw people into it. I sincerely recommend it to someone who has been reading for 20 years.

Bad ending? ? ? ? Didn't you just start writing?

I hope that when I write about the city, I won't write about martial arts and immortality. After writing martial arts and cultivating immortals, many books have deteriorated. Every now and then in the urban literature, Qinggong internal energy acupuncture and other things started. Extremely brainless

The first half of the author's last book was really exciting, but unfortunately it fell apart at the end. It's such a pity. I hope this Instinct can control the rhythm well.

The author uses mission settings to explain all the poison, which is too low and there is no need to read it.

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