Devouring Becomes a Legend

The author is so handsome. Can you update hundreds of times a day

It's only the first chapter and it's about a woman. I've never seen it before, right? It's only called a novel if there's a woman accompanying the protagonist.

It's so bad. It's such a childish writing style. How can it get such a high score? The author must have deleted a lot of bad reviews.

One star. The author has almost deleted the low reviews.

First of all, you haven't even explained it clearly. If your qualifications are so poor, you can't go to the mall to buy something for growth? Going out to kill monsters and fights was also brushed aside. As for the heroine, it is clear that she likes the protagonist, but there is no emotional drama. After entering the training camp, he insisted on giving the heroine the label of a cold goddess (anyway, the emotional description did not indicate that the protagonist liked the heroine at all. I guessed that as soon as the heroine confessed to her, the protagonist immediately attached it. After reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore) The protagonist's own training method has no general direction. Can all the junior warriors in the elite training camp be as powerful as the senior warriors? Are all of them spiritual masters? The original novel is not as awesome as you. The purpose of gold fingers is also very little. If you get high-level items at such a low level, you obviously don't want to write too much In general, Goldfinger has too little applicability, too much foreshadowing of emotional scenes, and the description of fights is just a brushstroke.

Nanny article. There is obviously a system in place. Destined to be strong in the future. She even went to work as a nanny for the protagonist. I was really convinced.

It's not broken. It's very well written. Please come out and continue writing. He'll send you pictures.

I was immediately torn. Why did many of the books I read recently suddenly stop writing?

On Earth, someone who is about the same age as Luo Feng is so talented and funny. It's like you don't want to create an original character like this. I feel like the author wants the female protagonist to keep up with the male protagonist through her talent.

It looks good. It would be even better if Qin Xue was killed.