Monster Foodie

QQ Reading really likes the orphans in the game. I can only do this with Samsung Brothers.

First of all, the development of the book, the outline of the book is cooking, right? Then you can write less about your extraordinary factors, there is no need to write so much. If you write too much, it will become complicated and fail to highlight what you want to write. The second is the plot. The protagonist is a magic chef, right? Shouldn't his focus be to gain popularity first? How could he turn around and study monster dishes when his girlfriend's father provoked him? And they are sold directly after researching it? Shouldn't you try it yourself first and then check to see if it's poisonous? As a person who is so famous in the food world, he wouldn't know this, right? About the protagonist himself. As soon as he was defenseless, as the corpse of a monster he had never seen before, he took a few bites without fear. Are you sure it's not poisonous? Not corrosive? No virus? This is untrue. Of course, it's just an imaginary statement. Just pretend I didn't say it. The pace of this book is too fast, and the protagonist's cooking skills are of no use except for researching new dishes. Does the protagonist only know two dishes? Wow, there's nothing more to say, and I won't go into some of the remaining issues. Well, come on💪

Looks good, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster

Not bad, pretty good-looking. . . Come on. . . Keep writing. . .

It's super pretty, I prefer to watch this kind of thing! ! ! Come on, author, I'll save it for now and I'll enjoy reading it later. There is an author who updates a hundred chapters from time to time. The author also needs to learn

Orphan at the beginning, accompanied by a beautiful woman, is not a question of whether the review is good or not, but whether you can write it. I lost my appetite in the first three chapters, and after finishing it, I lost my appetite. It is not attractive at all. In fact, I feel that this kind of food article is better if it is written by one person, with a beautiful boss, and And I have experienced death once. It's awkward to think about it. Overall, the plot is too bad. There is basically no description of the mysterious world and monsters. And your introduction is very well written and so awesome, but there is still a boss on it, and I have seen her die. Sorry, it's awkward. I even feel a little nauseous. Although I just read the beginning, don't tell me what you want to write next. What I'm saying now is wrong, or I'm trolling you. The description of the food is quite good, but about the monster corpse, is it disgusting? It's a humanoid creature, although Although it is said that it has changed, think about it, it is too weird and disgusting. We readers should have a sense of immersion when reading books. If you want to write a good book, then you should treat yourself as a reader and read it yourself, or you can look at your work from different angles. Come on, take your time.

Ku-chan, stop being so short and weak, it would be best if you can update ten chapters in a day (Devil's Whisper)

The homework is quite imaginative, keep up the good work

Come on>:-<

I always feel that his writing is quite good. Maybe it's because I'm a foodie, right? (๑＞ڡ＜)☆Overall, I feel pretty good