The First Disciple on the List Cannot Be Offended
About This Novel
Qin Hemiao couldn't go out due to a leg injury, so she passed the time by being an NPC in the game. However, she didn't expect that after playing the game, her husband was also found, but she didn't know whether she lost or gained.
What Readers Think
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Official(15)Scraped 20d ago
Neutral rating
The heroine's character is different from the current mainstream. She is not overbearing, indifferent or crazy. This description is very realistic. In addition to being strong and strong, her character is like a relatively sensible and steady little girl. This would be good for a TV series Other than that, there are no flaws. Although the heroine's handling of interpersonal relationships and dealing with scumbags are not straightforward enough, it can still be watched. Also, the relationship between the heroine and the hero was a bit abrupt before, but the relationship between them later became very sweet. However, this book is unfinished. The heroine has not yet met the hero's family, and the game map has not yet been unfolded. However, this book is free and not many people read it. There is nothing the author can do if he gives up, but he still hopes that the author will continue writing. Overall worth a look
Isn't this heroine's image too different? It's too awkward to say that he is strong but not strong, and to say that he is weak is not weak either.
I don't really like the male protagonist's character
To be honest, I don't really like the male protagonist's character. The more I watch it, the more frustrated I feel. . . .
See Chapter 41
First of all, the writing is okay. Secondly, the character design. The heroine is a bit of a nymphomaniac. I personally recommend that characters like nymphomaniacs who prefer to play supporting roles. For example, in stories about the boss, the boss is usually very powerful. He has one or several good brothers who make jokes or have romantic relationships, which plays a role in setting off the atmosphere. If the male and female protagonists are partial to each other, it will easily affect the perception of the novel. Finally, there is the plot, which is a bit frustrating. Regarding the video of the First Guild, the heroine could have sent out their "threat letter", or used her status as a mentor to obtain the battle records from the background. And it's really aggrieved for the heroine to hold it in like this.
🤔🤔🤔
Are you a boy or a girl?🤪🥳👀
ᕙ(⇀‸↼‵‵)ᕗ
This book is so beautiful, why is there no one? I can't get enough~🤔🤔
It's super pretty. Can you post more?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~
It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it ~ please update more
I started watching it today. Let me tell you how I feel.
At the beginning of the game, it is assumed that the heroine is a capable person (the kind who has mastered ancient martial arts and mental skills), and her family background is actually quite good. At least I think children who grow up in this kind of family are more confident in general things. If you are a tough and capable person, you should show it in your behavior (but I don't think the heroine has much confidence) I quite like her peaceful attitude. Regarding her relationship with Gu, it makes me feel that her growing up environment is strange. Her family background is quite good, but she is actually relatively confident. She is not good at expressing herself, and watching the people around her, she will not be rejected. How did she grow up? The description in the game feels submissive. She must have a secret crush on the male protagonist. She is very timid in appearance, which makes me think that in today's society, aren't everyone quite brave? I still haven't figured out whether I like him or not. But he was too timid to say anything, which made me feel a bit inconsistent. Also, doesn't she have a part-time job as a tutor? At the beginning, she wrote twice about switching to go to class, and then she did tasks for pet hatching, but she didn't work part-time, and maybe she didn't describe it. But the feeling has changed. I thought it was about writing a big boss into the game. It's a leisurely game played by the novice boss. She also loved homes. Maybe the game hasn't progressed yet and it hasn't been written yet. But we have just started the game now. When we were in our teens and twenties, we developed the marriage system, and the master-apprentice mission requires a couple suit. How do you feel that the direction has shifted? ? ?
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
It's amazing. Is this the end? ? ? ?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(15)Scraped 20d ago
Neutral rating
The heroine's character is different from the current mainstream. She is not overbearing, indifferent or crazy. This description is very realistic. In addition to being strong and strong, her character is like a relatively sensible and steady little girl. This would be good for a TV series Other than that, there are no flaws. Although the heroine's handling of interpersonal relationships and dealing with scumbags are not straightforward enough, it can still be watched. Also, the relationship between the heroine and the hero was a bit abrupt before, but the relationship between them later became very sweet. However, this book is unfinished. The heroine has not yet met the hero's family, and the game map has not yet been unfolded. However, this book is free and not many people read it. There is nothing the author can do if he gives up, but he still hopes that the author will continue writing. Overall worth a look
Isn't this heroine's image too different? It's too awkward to say that he is strong but not strong, and to say that he is weak is not weak either.
I don't really like the male protagonist's character
To be honest, I don't really like the male protagonist's character. The more I watch it, the more frustrated I feel. . . .
See Chapter 41
First of all, the writing is okay. Secondly, the character design. The heroine is a bit of a nymphomaniac. I personally recommend that characters like nymphomaniacs who prefer to play supporting roles. For example, in stories about the boss, the boss is usually very powerful. He has one or several good brothers who make jokes or have romantic relationships, which plays a role in setting off the atmosphere. If the male and female protagonists are partial to each other, it will easily affect the perception of the novel. Finally, there is the plot, which is a bit frustrating. Regarding the video of the First Guild, the heroine could have sent out their "threat letter", or used her status as a mentor to obtain the battle records from the background. And it's really aggrieved for the heroine to hold it in like this.
🤔🤔🤔
Are you a boy or a girl?🤪🥳👀
ᕙ(⇀‸↼‵‵)ᕗ
This book is so beautiful, why is there no one? I can't get enough~🤔🤔
It's super pretty. Can you post more?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~
It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it ~ please update more
I started watching it today. Let me tell you how I feel.
At the beginning of the game, it is assumed that the heroine is a capable person (the kind who has mastered ancient martial arts and mental skills), and her family background is actually quite good. At least I think children who grow up in this kind of family are more confident in general things. If you are a tough and capable person, you should show it in your behavior (but I don't think the heroine has much confidence) I quite like her peaceful attitude. Regarding her relationship with Gu, it makes me feel that her growing up environment is strange. Her family background is quite good, but she is actually relatively confident. She is not good at expressing herself, and watching the people around her, she will not be rejected. How did she grow up? The description in the game feels submissive. She must have a secret crush on the male protagonist. She is very timid in appearance, which makes me think that in today's society, aren't everyone quite brave? I still haven't figured out whether I like him or not. But he was too timid to say anything, which made me feel a bit inconsistent. Also, doesn't she have a part-time job as a tutor? At the beginning, she wrote twice about switching to go to class, and then she did tasks for pet hatching, but she didn't work part-time, and maybe she didn't describe it. But the feeling has changed. I thought it was about writing a big boss into the game. It's a leisurely game played by the novice boss. She also loved homes. Maybe the game hasn't progressed yet and it hasn't been written yet. But we have just started the game now. When we were in our teens and twenties, we developed the marriage system, and the master-apprentice mission requires a couple suit. How do you feel that the direction has shifted? ? ?
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
It's amazing. Is this the end? ? ? ?
