Earth Ol: I Am a Closed Beta Player

To be honest, it is not a poisonous weed. I feel that the writing is a bit off, and there are serious logical flaws. In the beginning, the story about life was pretty good. Later, when I saw the scene after the appearance of the Double Dragon dungeon, the protagonist seemed to be obsessed with the dungeon. Everything took precedence over the dungeon, and the forced concealment of his identity was baffling. At the beginning, I said that the protagonist has been living in poverty for two months without documents. I can understand it. Maybe he had inner fluctuations when he first arrived in the new world and didn't think too much about it. In fact, I feel that the protagonist went directly to the public security bureau to explain some situations. It would be fine if he didn't talk about time travel. He didn't talk about ID cards and bank cards. At least he would settle you down first. After all, it is still a people-oriented environment, so I won't go into details. Why did he hold back so much that he had his identity information, go to save his benefactor and beat a ghost to death and then forcefully conceal it, lie to others that the fish had escaped, and ask others not to tell anyone about him? I don't understand. The fish monster is not so scary as to be supernatural, so what's wrong with killing one on the shore? On the contrary, the timid style is a bit annoying. It is nonsense to say that the protagonist is thoughtful and has reasonable plans. As long as the protagonist is attentive, he will know that two people have seen his actions and he will definitely not be able to hide it. Why don't I say a word and I really won't say it. The protagonist also believes that they won't say it. This style makes it even more guilty. The girl also knows that the protagonist is a strange person with no identity. To be honest, there are a lot of flaws, I can't even mention them. In fact, most of the writings I have seen so far are okay. Occasionally, there are a few writings that are not in line with the world's opinions, but I feel that the writings are very real, and a normal person should be like this. However, there are still some logical flaws that cannot be seen directly. It may be that the writing is not good enough to fool them. In terms of writing style, the life scenes at the beginning are quite good. After the system is established, it becomes more game-oriented. The protagonist seems to regard the world as a game and does not carefully consider every step. The player's mentality is just a joke, such as killing by showing the health bar. I can't accept this style of painting all the time, so it is better to write more realistically. I didn't read too much after that. I briefly browsed the ones that focused on copywriting, fantasy power, etc. I didn't like it so much, so I stopped reading. Okay, that's it .

It's just that there are not many people watching. I'm almost finished. The author will update soon (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

I am the first, hey, support, come on, no more eunuchs

Isn't this well written and no one reads it?

The writing is quite good, with new themes and new ideas! ጿኈጿኈዽጿ. ዽጿኈዽጿኈ. ኈዽጿኈዽጿ.

Task description: Because the waiter's girlfriend from his hometown suddenly became pregnant, he had to go home to take care of her. The owner of Fatty BBQ Restaurant was very worried about this, so they thought of you who recommended yourself yesterday. They felt that you were quite diligent, mainly because the price was cheap, so they decided to give it a try with you temporarily. Good for sudden pregnancy

Is this a eunuch? Why didn't you see the end?

Is he a sheep or a eunuch?

Come on, don't be a eunuch, it looks pretty cool.

Everyone understands, this title is quite good.