Los Angeles Detective

Authors sometimes make common sense errors. Since we are describing the United States, we should know more about the common sense of this place. Although I have not been to that place, I still have the opportunity to know some things with the Internet. Most of the information I know comes from the real American up owners of station b. Now point out a few points I discovered. 1. The first is to fight against terrorism without wearing body armor. The protagonist was too reckless and the person in charge at the scene also had problems. There is usually a standard procedure for this kind of action. It's impossible to let you mess around, otherwise if something goes wrong and you write a report, the person in charge's political career will be affected. This depiction is found in Generation Kill . Moreover, it seems that the protagonist and his colleagues in the police station never took the initiative to wear body armor. They only put it on every time they were about to have a gunfight, and they often didn't wear it. This is not reasonable. There is a video of the American police on station b. The police officers on duty all wore body armor during the shootout. SWAT also wore carrying gear with ballistic plates. The only time I didn't wear it was when someone got a speeding ticket. 2. When the killer fires his pistol at the protagonist at close range, it is impossible to miss a single shot. Usually, at this time, he will aim at the torso to empty the magazine. According to the settings of the bullet avoidance card at the beginning, it is obviously a mistake here. If the protagonist wears a bulletproof vest, it will be easier to explain. Even a soft bulletproof vest can block 9mm.45Acp bullets (there will be flesh wounds and possible internal bleeding). Moreover, bulletproof vests can also be worn under clothes, and disguised police officers usually wear them underneath. From here, the bullet-avoiding card becomes a bullet-proof card, and AK fires non-stop misses from behind. Even a Griffin T-Doll will have to be shot a few times! [Emot=default,54/] In fact, according to the settings of Escape from Tarkov (a hardcore game close to reality), if you are fully armed and wear a helmet, bulletproof plates, painkillers, hemostatics, bandages, injections, and surgical kits, you will not die easily. In reality, your hands and feet may be maimed or hit beyond the chest cavity that cannot be blocked by the bulletproof plates. But don't worry if you have a bullet avoidance card, this is a "bullet avoidance" card. 3. The common sense of shotguns is completely different from that in the game. In reality, shotguns are long and heavy, have only about 7 rounds of ammunition, and have large recoil. If it is a pump action, if the slide is not pulled to the end, there will be a retraction failure. Counting the reloading time, the actual rate of fire is about the same as that of a revolver. Even the accuracy of semi-automatic ammunition capacity is not as good as that of short rifles and submachine guns with 30-round standard magazines, and because the distance through walls is about the same as that of hollow-point pistol bullets and soft-point rifle bullets fired from short rifles, it is not suitable for home defense and indoor warfare. In fact, long shotguns are generally used to fire non-lethal bullets and are replaced with a reduced-throttle barrel or a rifled barrel for sniping (yes, sniping! [Emot=default,52/]) when hunting. Powder bombs are generally used when opening wooden doors. When used against targets larger than deer (such as alligators and bears), a 12-gauge shotgun will most likely not be able to knock them down with one shot. If you use it to hit a thick crocodile, it may take several shots. Before that, you may have been bitten to death by a ferocious crocodile. It is a better choice to use a standard barrel or long barrel rifle to fire steel-core armor-piercing bullets such as M855 to hit areas prone to bleeding, such as the chest. When this type of high-speed rifle bullet hits a nerve-dense area, it will cause a painful sensation like electric shock paralysis and shock the target. For example: if you hit a deer in the neck, the deer will fall down directly, as if it was a one-hit kill, but in fact the deer is not dead at this time, it just bleeds to death before waking up. Of course, you need to take more shots against large targets, but it is safer than a shotgun, especially an assault rifle that can fire continuously. This is a good book, at least for now I think it has potential. If the author is willing to polish it carefully, it can be a wonderful novel, so I hope to keep improving, otherwise it may become as boring as other Qidian books in a short time.

1. Give up the business war, it's boring to watch. Although I don't write much now, I still feel like it's watery. You can completely position this book as a modern adventure, just like Uncharted, Tomb Raider and L. A. Noir. Adding too many things that deviate from the positioning will make you confused. Unless you plan to engage in terrorist attacks and manipulate stocks like GTA5, then give up. 2. The (former?) Girlfriend feels like a passerby and has no plot at all. Except for the case at the beginning, the subsequent plot is completely useless. This is a very typical character image. Not only the girlfriend, but also the father look more like the uncle next door or a worker. In contrast, colleagues at the police station were more impressed, which was also the result of the intensive case-handling plot in the early stage. Generally, when an author writes a character, he will set up the character's personality, identity, and appearance in detail. It doesn't need to be written in the story, but the author's own psychology must have a specific character image and not be confused. Just like Zhang Beihai, Liu didn't describe much of the plot at the beginning, but when you look at it later, you will find that the previous description is just a blur. This is because Liu knows very well what kind of person Zhang Beihai is and how he will act. For example, the eldest lady can be set as a Laura-like character. The treasure hunt is not for superficial reasons, but has a stronger personal will in it. It doesn't have to be written directly, but there should be some subtle foreshadowing.

The most disgusting thing about this book is that it's all about being a family man, especially the fat little brother, who will be a hindrance. The author doesn't know what he's thinking. The protagonist is obviously a robber, and it's disgusting to play with family ties. He's not a real family member, but when it comes to daily life, he has to rely on others. Do you have any brains?

Are there no lawyers in the country? You are challenging China's laws and regulations. People who denigrate the Chinese police. Don't compare a country with drugs, guns and discrimination to China's laws!

Luke was originally a criminal police officer in China. He has been traveling through time for a month. He felt like he wanted to dream. In this world, he was still a policeman, but their styles were completely different, which made him feel passive.

The writing is average, the plot is old-fashioned, and it's pretty watery. A bigger case requires so many chapters that I can't read it.

Both the setting and the plot are good, and it's a rare good book that appeals to my taste in the starting point pile. But I also want to complain about some flaws: 1. The system settings were good at first, but later the card drawing was forcibly deleted for the sake of the plot. This is not reasonable. After all, you are the author and you can continue to use this setting to create new cards. If you want to redeem the Bullet Avoidance Card and Precision Card, you can directly redeem it with a lottery opportunity. The integral is meaningless, and it also requires the author to consider numerical issues, which can be said to be unnecessary. 2. The money system was deleted, which can be said to be a failure. Although it is legal to own a gun under American law, there are many restrictions. For example, it cannot be fully automatic, and silencers cannot be purchased in some areas. Recently, I have heard that gun-banning parties are demanding a ban on the use of 30-round standard magazines. The quality of parts and complete guns produced by various manufacturers varies, some magazines jam, and the American version of ak is of poor quality. There are also arms embargoes on China, Russia and some countries, including ammunition. In other words, it was difficult to buy Soviet-made weapons and ammunition. Having an online store can save you a lot of trouble, and you can also modify your guns like Escape from Tarkov. If your car is drained of gas in the wild, or you are stranded on an uninhabited island at sea, you can still buy supplies and transportation. 3. It can be said that the police plot is no longer interesting. The subsequent plots may be more focused on treasure hunting and detectives, which means that new maps will be opened. It is better to save money in the system, and use credit cards for daily expenses. If you are worried about the depreciation of the US dollar, you can exchange it for gold in the system. You need to exchange the money directly for cash, and then trade in cash. Although the tax authorities in some countries are very powerful, it is difficult to detect the cash you have not deposited in the bank. Otherwise, why would there be bank robbers in the United States? Now all the protagonist's money is in the bank. If the protagonist is wanted in the future, it can be said that he will be at a loss. Don't say it's impossible. With the protagonist's reckless behavior, it's very possible to kill someone with white gloves or work with him when handling a case. Some big guys have conflicts of interest. Although there are people with masks and some friends, it is not safe. The higher-ups may treat the protagonist as an abandoned son, and friends may betray him in case of betrayal. It can only be laid out more, but with the author's writing skills (of course I am better at it) it may be overturned, and the protagonist is not a resourceful person.

Are there any more? Does anyone have any good books to recommend? ! !

Luke can't be cowardly if he wants to hang out here. Now there's a case coming and he needs to start investigating. When Luke listened to the case, because of the previous criminal investigation, he now made analysis while listening.

It's hard to follow this book, can you hurry up with the new one? Stop being a eunuch!