
Red Mansion Reading Man
by Shang Di
About This Novel
The protagonists of the imperial examination essays in Red Mansions are children from peasant families, who tend to live in daily life. It focuses on the protagonist's self-struggle and saves Sister Lin through a curve. Ps: It's not a single female protagonist, it's not a harem story. PS: The protagonist is not a distant relative of the Jia family, and has nothing to do with Jia Shi Wang Xue. Although it is called Red Mansion, it is just a character borrowed from Red Mansion, and it appears late. Please note before reading.
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I have also read the latest chapter of this book, which is a bit ill-advised. 1. It is inappropriate for the author to use the wisdom of the people to appease the people. Opening the people's wisdom can only appease the people in a short period of time, but its subsequent impact is great. The root cause of the people's agitation has not been solved, but the contradiction has only been temporarily alleviated. 2. The author's expansion of people's wisdom is not a new event in ancient times. Although the ancients did not put forward this point of view, their actual actions have proven that they have been opening up people's wisdom. At that time, it was limited by the development of the times and the insufficient productivity of the times. 3. For the ancient Chinese, studying was to become an official, but there are only so many official positions. Increasing official positions will result in redundant officials, which will not only increase the national financial expenditure, but also cause responsibilities to be unable to be assigned to specific individuals. 4. Before the industrial revolution, production was not high. The number of full-time students that a village could support was limited, and this process lasted for more than ten or twenty years. This was a heavy pressure on the people and would increase the burden on the people. 5. Before the tax law is reformed, the country can only receive so much tax revenue, which has to go through different levels of government, and even less goes to the court. After deducting other government allowed expenditures, official salaries and other expenditures, there is generally not much money left. Large-scale subsidies cannot be provided. Without subsidies, we must broaden people's wisdom and increase people's expenditures. Isn't this exploiting the people's surplus value? 6. Expanding people's wisdom will, to a certain extent, divide the existing cake. There are already so many resources and everyone has them. Now if we open them widely, the interests of the gentry will be harmed, and this may definitely cause the political situation to be turbulent and give opportunities for foreign hostile forces to take advantage of. 7. If the people do not have enough land, they will not be able to afford to leave their jobs to study. There are some economic problems, and land distribution is the foundation of the stubborn empire. Without it, it will be difficult to promote the expansion of people's wisdom. So much first.
The writing style is sometimes smooth and sometimes obscure; the historical foundation is not solid and takes things for granted; it can score 7 points
In Red Mansions, it is novel, but in historical literature, it is cliché. It depends on which perspective you use to view it. The rhythm of the narrative is steady in the early stage, but drags on in the middle and late stages, lacking conflict and climax. The writing style is sometimes good and sometimes bad. Sometimes it is clear and delicate. Sometimes after reading it several times, I still don't understand what he is talking about. The characters, Chen Heng's image is three-dimensional, and Lin Daiyu's character is also innovative, but Xiang Ling and others seriously diluted it in the later period. As for the plot, it takes things for granted in terms of appeasing the refugees and the Qiupu Street problem, saying "I think it's okay, then that's okay" The biggest shortcoming is that the historical knowledge is not good, the description of the imperial examination is distorted, and future products are mixed in, such as the invention of rickshaws and bicycles, which cannot be made without a certain industrial foundation. In general, it scores more than 8 points in the early stage and less than 7 points in the middle and late stages. It is poisonous and has pitfalls, but it can be seen.
I read three or four chapters to complain about it. The fifth generation of the Lin family princes received another life because of the favor of the Supreme Emperor. Why did Lin Ruhai send Sister Lin away? 1 He is the censor of Yangzhou Salt Patrol. Do you know why his wife died? Why did his youngest son die? If you tamper with the salt merchants' cake, you'll tamper with the cake of the people behind the salt merchants. 2 In ancient times, women who did not have a mistress or female elder in the family taught them that it would be difficult to get married in the future, and they would be gossiped about. 3 Why do you say that Lin Ruhai's family is not good? After Lin Ruhai's death, Lian Er brought millions of family wealth from Yangzhou to the Jia family. If the noble family has a lot of background, will their family situation be poor?
It's definitely not enough to save Sister Lin. You must at least save Sister Xue. If possible, Sister Keqing, and even Li Wan and the young wife can also save.
Everything was fine before the case, but not so good after the case. One is that the author does not know much about ancient imperial examination matters, the other is that the author's ancient poetry skills are too poor, and the third is that he does not understand the ancient political model above the village level, so he can only take it for granted. Because I didn't know much about the imperial examinations, I wrote fake imperial examination papers and had no sense of immersion. Because the author's skills in ancient poetry are so poor and his sentences are not coherent, the character of the official in the article also falls apart and the image cannot be created. Just like how Cao Xueqin's poems can be written well, he can create strange women such as Daiyu Xiangling. If Cao Xueqin does not have enough ancient poetry skills, then Dream of Red Mansions can only be regarded as a purely worldly novel. On this point, the author needs to think more, read more ancient poems and articles, and develop a sense of language. The Three Idiots of Thieves did a slightly better job in this regard. Although some places seem a bit far-fetched, they are not dramatic. Because the author does not understand the political model above the village level, it is conceivable that after entering the Dream of Red Mansions part, the writing must be extremely poor. By then, it will be a pity that the beauty of the first twenty chapters will be lost, so the book will be abandoned.
I saw Yinglian in the middle of the show, she was so awesome and disgusting
If you are not a harem, then you are a harem. Three wives and four concubines are not really three wives, but one wife and multiple concubines. Moreover, if anyone dares to mess around with three wives and four concubines, it is beyond the rules. I would like to ask who takes precedence in the backyard, and whether the descendants will be able to live in harmony. After all, each has a legitimate mother. Real male videos always feel that everyone can live in harmony. It is so funny that the emperor's harem is in chaos. How can we live in harmony if we have competing interests? If there is a master who suppresses it, after Jia Daishan dies, can you ensure that future generations will not think about it? Everyone has an opinion on the equal division, but brothers may not. What about a wife, and what about the wife clan pushing it?
This book is a pity. Before entering Beijing, it should have been the best Red Mansions fanfic. However, the rhythm after entering Beijing can be said to be a mess, and there is a lack of conflict in the book. I didn't even recognize who was the villain. The more you go to the end, the more bland it feels. If the author wants to write similar articles later. It is recommended that it be helpful to study the history of Wang Anshi or Zhang Juzheng. What also makes me very unhappy in the book is that the author created a good image of Xue Baoqin, but did not control the plot well. If possible, I hope the author will write another Red Mansion fanfic. I hope the author will make progress in his next work, and I will continue to follow you.
The writing is superb
The writing is really great, but I feel like the protagonist is a bit too upright and kind. What if I don't get screwed to death if I become an official in the future? And he is also dragged down by his own family. The plot of the second uncle's imprisonment is really dangerous. It is entirely possible to drag the protagonist into it. And if the protagonist has any money, he will give it all to his family. I think it is better to keep some for himself. After all, there is no money to study. It does not mean that you can't take care of your family, but there must be a limit... Endless giving will make people push their limits. The protagonist has already paid back the 100 taels of study money given to him by his family before.
I watched it for free and gave it a five-point support. Normally it would be about a four-point rating.
Red Mansions, but it doesn't say much about the Jia family and the Jia family, and there is no Grand View Garden to attract the Orioles. It is essentially a story about the growth of childhood sweethearts and Lin Daiyu, but suddenly there is a fragrance in the middle, which overwhelms Lin Daiyu and directly becomes the second wife. This should be purely a matter of the author's personal preference.
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I have also read the latest chapter of this book, which is a bit ill-advised. 1. It is inappropriate for the author to use the wisdom of the people to appease the people. Opening the people's wisdom can only appease the people in a short period of time, but its subsequent impact is great. The root cause of the people's agitation has not been solved, but the contradiction has only been temporarily alleviated. 2. The author's expansion of people's wisdom is not a new event in ancient times. Although the ancients did not put forward this point of view, their actual actions have proven that they have been opening up people's wisdom. At that time, it was limited by the development of the times and the insufficient productivity of the times. 3. For the ancient Chinese, studying was to become an official, but there are only so many official positions. Increasing official positions will result in redundant officials, which will not only increase the national financial expenditure, but also cause responsibilities to be unable to be assigned to specific individuals. 4. Before the industrial revolution, production was not high. The number of full-time students that a village could support was limited, and this process lasted for more than ten or twenty years. This was a heavy pressure on the people and would increase the burden on the people. 5. Before the tax law is reformed, the country can only receive so much tax revenue, which has to go through different levels of government, and even less goes to the court. After deducting other government allowed expenditures, official salaries and other expenditures, there is generally not much money left. Large-scale subsidies cannot be provided. Without subsidies, we must broaden people's wisdom and increase people's expenditures. Isn't this exploiting the people's surplus value? 6. Expanding people's wisdom will, to a certain extent, divide the existing cake. There are already so many resources and everyone has them. Now if we open them widely, the interests of the gentry will be harmed, and this may definitely cause the political situation to be turbulent and give opportunities for foreign hostile forces to take advantage of. 7. If the people do not have enough land, they will not be able to afford to leave their jobs to study. There are some economic problems, and land distribution is the foundation of the stubborn empire. Without it, it will be difficult to promote the expansion of people's wisdom. So much first.
The writing style is sometimes smooth and sometimes obscure; the historical foundation is not solid and takes things for granted; it can score 7 points
In Red Mansions, it is novel, but in historical literature, it is cliché. It depends on which perspective you use to view it. The rhythm of the narrative is steady in the early stage, but drags on in the middle and late stages, lacking conflict and climax. The writing style is sometimes good and sometimes bad. Sometimes it is clear and delicate. Sometimes after reading it several times, I still don't understand what he is talking about. The characters, Chen Heng's image is three-dimensional, and Lin Daiyu's character is also innovative, but Xiang Ling and others seriously diluted it in the later period. As for the plot, it takes things for granted in terms of appeasing the refugees and the Qiupu Street problem, saying "I think it's okay, then that's okay" The biggest shortcoming is that the historical knowledge is not good, the description of the imperial examination is distorted, and future products are mixed in, such as the invention of rickshaws and bicycles, which cannot be made without a certain industrial foundation. In general, it scores more than 8 points in the early stage and less than 7 points in the middle and late stages. It is poisonous and has pitfalls, but it can be seen.
I read three or four chapters to complain about it. The fifth generation of the Lin family princes received another life because of the favor of the Supreme Emperor. Why did Lin Ruhai send Sister Lin away? 1 He is the censor of Yangzhou Salt Patrol. Do you know why his wife died? Why did his youngest son die? If you tamper with the salt merchants' cake, you'll tamper with the cake of the people behind the salt merchants. 2 In ancient times, women who did not have a mistress or female elder in the family taught them that it would be difficult to get married in the future, and they would be gossiped about. 3 Why do you say that Lin Ruhai's family is not good? After Lin Ruhai's death, Lian Er brought millions of family wealth from Yangzhou to the Jia family. If the noble family has a lot of background, will their family situation be poor?
It's definitely not enough to save Sister Lin. You must at least save Sister Xue. If possible, Sister Keqing, and even Li Wan and the young wife can also save.
Everything was fine before the case, but not so good after the case. One is that the author does not know much about ancient imperial examination matters, the other is that the author's ancient poetry skills are too poor, and the third is that he does not understand the ancient political model above the village level, so he can only take it for granted. Because I didn't know much about the imperial examinations, I wrote fake imperial examination papers and had no sense of immersion. Because the author's skills in ancient poetry are so poor and his sentences are not coherent, the character of the official in the article also falls apart and the image cannot be created. Just like how Cao Xueqin's poems can be written well, he can create strange women such as Daiyu Xiangling. If Cao Xueqin does not have enough ancient poetry skills, then Dream of Red Mansions can only be regarded as a purely worldly novel. On this point, the author needs to think more, read more ancient poems and articles, and develop a sense of language. The Three Idiots of Thieves did a slightly better job in this regard. Although some places seem a bit far-fetched, they are not dramatic. Because the author does not understand the political model above the village level, it is conceivable that after entering the Dream of Red Mansions part, the writing must be extremely poor. By then, it will be a pity that the beauty of the first twenty chapters will be lost, so the book will be abandoned.
I saw Yinglian in the middle of the show, she was so awesome and disgusting
If you are not a harem, then you are a harem. Three wives and four concubines are not really three wives, but one wife and multiple concubines. Moreover, if anyone dares to mess around with three wives and four concubines, it is beyond the rules. I would like to ask who takes precedence in the backyard, and whether the descendants will be able to live in harmony. After all, each has a legitimate mother. Real male videos always feel that everyone can live in harmony. It is so funny that the emperor's harem is in chaos. How can we live in harmony if we have competing interests? If there is a master who suppresses it, after Jia Daishan dies, can you ensure that future generations will not think about it? Everyone has an opinion on the equal division, but brothers may not. What about a wife, and what about the wife clan pushing it?
This book is a pity. Before entering Beijing, it should have been the best Red Mansions fanfic. However, the rhythm after entering Beijing can be said to be a mess, and there is a lack of conflict in the book. I didn't even recognize who was the villain. The more you go to the end, the more bland it feels. If the author wants to write similar articles later. It is recommended that it be helpful to study the history of Wang Anshi or Zhang Juzheng. What also makes me very unhappy in the book is that the author created a good image of Xue Baoqin, but did not control the plot well. If possible, I hope the author will write another Red Mansion fanfic. I hope the author will make progress in his next work, and I will continue to follow you.
The writing is superb
The writing is really great, but I feel like the protagonist is a bit too upright and kind. What if I don't get screwed to death if I become an official in the future? And he is also dragged down by his own family. The plot of the second uncle's imprisonment is really dangerous. It is entirely possible to drag the protagonist into it. And if the protagonist has any money, he will give it all to his family. I think it is better to keep some for himself. After all, there is no money to study. It does not mean that you can't take care of your family, but there must be a limit... Endless giving will make people push their limits. The protagonist has already paid back the 100 taels of study money given to him by his family before.
I watched it for free and gave it a five-point support. Normally it would be about a four-point rating.
Red Mansions, but it doesn't say much about the Jia family and the Jia family, and there is no Grand View Garden to attract the Orioles. It is essentially a story about the growth of childhood sweethearts and Lin Daiyu, but suddenly there is a fragrance in the middle, which overwhelms Lin Daiyu and directly becomes the second wife. This should be purely a matter of the author's personal preference.
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A fanfic of "Dream of Red Mansions". There are too many writings of this type, from various angles, all the same. But this book is different. It has a unique approach. It starts from Er Gouzi in an unknown mountain village and slowly integrates into the corner of the Red Mansion. The writing style and plot are all top-notch. Highly recommended.




Grass jelly It is another imperial examination essay, but the strange thing is that it is covered by the Red Mansion. Judging from the opening of just a few dozen chapters, if it can be written more than a thousand chapters, it will definitely be the most important work in the imperial examination essay and the Red Mansion essay this year. Personally, I am very interested in Red Mansions fanfiction, but I have basically not finished reading it. The current Red Mansions novels are very awkward. There is no new ideas in the garden dramas, and the routines are extremely serious. The political affairs are too childish. I really want to laugh when I look at them. I can't write about military affairs. You know, you don't have the ability (laughing). The few readers who want to transcend the framework of Red Mansions don't buy it, and they don't really transcend it. Come on, and when writing about the Jia family, I also like to cheat. If the hook is too big, it will look dazzling. The whole novel is made very vain. It is not uncommon for the Red Mansions to be written about teenagers who are responsible for the military affairs of important ministers. I like it very much for book friends who like the refreshing style of writing. I don't like it very much for someone like me who is barely a reasonable party. I can't adapt to it, so basically no Red Mansions fans have finished it. Since it is not on the shelves yet, I don't know what the style will be in the future, whether there will be major plot collapse, eunuch issues, etc., So Xiancao can only be regarded as temporary. In addition, I think this book's imperial examination essays are better than those of Red Mansions fans. Similar "The Prime Minister of a Poor Family" "Rule the World" "Wenkui of Ming Dynasty" "The Rise of the Humble Family" Red Mansion Category "The Romance of the Bastard in the Red Mansion" "Struggle in the Red Mansion" I will only recommend two works by fans who first read Red Mansions a few years ago. I won't recommend the rest. The basic framework cannot be written in them with new ideas.




Red Mansions imperial examination essay, multiple female protagonists, looking forward to the follow-up




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