Hear the Voice of the Soul

It uses [... Wow...] To attract attention at the beginning, putting people in a state of high tension and concern. However, it slows down later on and does not fill in the plot while the iron is hot. It is not even until Chapter 16 that any clues can be seen. It feels that the plot unfolds too slowly. The writing style is delicate, perhaps because it is too delicate and there are too many adjectives. I only took a quick look at the adjectives used when the male protagonist appeared, and I couldn't stand it anymore, which hindered the pleasure of reading. As for the characterization of the male protagonist, the combination of the ice cube face and the poisonous snake is the best, but the bitchiness is really... It would be better if the way he talks is more mysterious, right? Regarding the biggest problem with the article, I think it is the segmentation. For example: "Yes, I grew up xxxxxx" The person smiled even more. I think this sentence does not need to be entered after the sentence is broken, just follow the dialogue directly. Each sentence is separated, and it is easy to get confused and unclear who is who. Especially when there are several people talking, it is definitely easy to read (this is very important) Comprehensive evaluation: The subject matter is great, the plot is very engaging, and it is the kind of article that gets more interesting the more you chew on it. The introduction of the copy could be made clearer. For example, the heroine can see ghosts, which should be more attractive to readers. The main problem with the article itself is the problem of paragraphing and description. There are too many descriptions of the heart and expressions in this article, so I think it would be better to add some story description. Finally, I have to mention the author's writing style. It is all high-end and has a good grasp of the heroine's psychology. You can tell at a glance that the writing is very serious. I must give it a thumbs up!

The heroine is big-hearted and "stupid". She woke up due to an accident and found that she could hear the voice of the soul, which tortured her for two years and affected her to the point where she could not even hold a normal job. In order to avoid contact with ordinary people, she devoted herself to writing online. By chance, she discovered that as long as she touched his hand (commonly known as the humanoid ghost slayer), he could block the sounds that were disturbing her. There are too many chapters, which is understandable because of the website. Since I have an obsessive-compulsive disorder, I found time to finish it intermittently. I have only read one other book by the author (currently pursuing a book...). This should be the first or second book written by the author. I feel that the writing style is a bit immature and unfamiliar. At the beginning of each chapter, a large paragraph from the end of the prelude is repeated. It is very depressing to read. As a female man, I still prefer novels about strong women, like Xin Xin, who often slaps her in the face, which makes me feel comfortable. The Little White Rabbit novel makes me feel aggrieved. --Gu Yihan by Tang Yumo --Hear the voice of the soul

How long will it take for my book to stop being locked up in a dark room , and when will it be released?

Wait until the flowers are almost gone! But, I don't want to give up! The book written by Yunnu is so exciting and enjoyable! I just want to know, when will it come back? !

The heroine here is the Tang Yumo from The Secret Lover, right? Song Junhua, the heroine's good friend in another movie, is Gong Jue's mother in "The Chief Husband is Too Mensao"? So they are all related?

I have a weak question, is there any scary plot in this book? I am relatively timid. . .

As a wife and mother, it's so difficult for me

This fairy has finished reading (and fucking) Wenwen again. [Emot=default,07/]

The purest fairy is still here waiting for you! [Emot=default,07/]

The touching part is the part where Charles is still making arrangements for Yu Mo's safety after being shot. The tragic situation of Gu Yiming, the bad guy, should be written at the end of the novel. It would not be happy if it is not tortured.