Koi Practice Makes Perfect

When I first started reading this book, I thought wow, the heroine's game career is so interesting and so interesting! ! ! The plot of fighting monsters is also good, but it doesn't feel as exciting as the beginning. It feels like the female protagonist is constantly fighting monsters and monsters. There is also an emotional plot about the male and female protagonists. I think it is a bit strange. The male protagonist is full of rotten peach blossoms, although the male protagonist and They don't matter, but it's annoying to keep making troubles. What's more important is that the bad peach blossoms are making trouble. The heroine is jealous and angry and wants to fight back. The hero comes to stop her and says, I will handle it. Damn it, that Luofeng went to the heroine for a 1v1 and even got a bunch of people to watch. The heroine was angry. I was so angry that I wanted to kill Luo Feng. I didn't agree to suspend the game. I was so happy that I finally had to slap him in the face. But the male protagonist went online and had a private chat, and the female protagonist gave up. Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh, I really want to see the female protagonist retaliate and scold her. There was also the loudspeaker incident. The female protagonist obviously Ming also wanted to talk back, but the male protagonist stopped him again. I really, really wanted to see the female protagonist talk back😊😊😊 I hope the author will make this book better and better. I also hope that the female protagonist can interact more with the gang members. Thanks to the author, this book will get better and better.

I liked it very much at first, but then I didn't like it very much, and then I became more disgusted. It mainly started when the heroine brought the hero to her second brother and second sister-in-law. His second sister-in-law was not in the same lineup as the heroine, so why should he get it? It was also a hostile lineup, and he was not qualified to win it. Moreover, I felt that the hero was very brainless at that time and was not worried about attracting wolves into the house. Even if the girl is good, can you guarantee that others will not infer it from her words?

The subject matter of this book is very good. At the beginning, the writing was pretty good, and I really wanted to keep reading. But later on, the relationship between the male and female protagonists felt like the supporting characters, especially the male protagonist who had a lot of bullshit, which made Taohua very annoying. The main reason was that the female protagonist was very weak, and it was okay only once or twice, which is understandable. I saw more than 600 pictures and I didn't know whether to continue chasing them... When I saw this picture, it was the male protagonist's family. When Mr. Li was seeking blessings for the two sisters, in that situation, the male protagonist actually didn't stand up or refute. He didn't have money, power or influence. He kept telling the heroine that she didn't need to be afraid and that he would solve the problem, but he never formally rebutted her. It's really tiring to watch. I feel so speechless😓

Damn, the chapters you posted recently are all out of order. Can you correct them when you have time? Crab!

It's better to just let your gang leader know that she's back. "She" definitely refers to the flowers reflecting the poplars, and Qingqing obviously scorns this approach.

Have you updated it? I haven't read it for almost a month, and it's still like this. If you can write, write well. If you can't, don't put it on the shelves to deceive readers. What is this? There are so many chapters. It's a pity not to read it. It's annoying to read it.

Damn, when you have time, can you revise the content starting from Chapter 1195? The contents of the previous and next chapters look very confusing. Thanks!

This book can be read to pass the time during a book shortage, and the content is okay. There are advantages and obvious disadvantages. First of all, the author often changes chapters to prevent theft, but he doesn't know when he will change them back; Secondly, the main plot is not very obvious, there is a lot of text content, and the plot is repetitive; Next, this article should be regarded as a heroine-centered article. The male protagonist is not easy to evaluate, and the priority is not prioritized. It seems that it is just to have a role that can highlight the different characteristics of the female protagonist; Then, the heroine's koi halo is too heavy, and sometimes people don't want to watch it anymore. Finally, the heroine's role should be designed to keep readers entertained to the end, but other characters bring too many troubles, making the game unable to be completely independent. PS: I hope the author can consider these issues and make persistent efforts. PPS: If possible, could the author please post a separate pinned post about the time limit for anti-theft of the chapter? PPPS: Rating 4 is totally a habit of giving high ratings. This book cannot be included in my book list.

From liking this book to getting bored, from the early stage to the later stage, the heroine almost always responds to everyone's name, and there is no trace of the male protagonist in the later stage, so the male protagonist is only responsible for cleaning up troubles, and the supporting characters are higher than him. The heroine is like dough, anyone can pinch it, and has no temper. An honest person will get angry after being annoyed for a long time. This is not popular at all, but he just said it will be forgotten. I can only say that the female protagonist is not like the female protagonist, and the male protagonist is more transparent. I don't give low marks. I know that writing a book is not easy.

When are you going to change it back? I don't want to see it keep doing this.