Douluo Peerless: Seize Tianmeng and Refine it Instantly!
by Yu Meng
About This Novel
[Huo Yuhao's rebirth and exciting article] [Tu Baihu Mansion] [Kill Tang Dog] [Don't join the Tang Sect] Huo Yuhao woke up in the biting cold wind and huddled in the drafty hut of Baihu Mansion. He was ten years old again. Mother is still here! "This time, I won't do it!" He grabbed the tail of Tianmeng Ice Silkworm. "Last time I lost my soul ring to my grandma's house, I want to be my fault!" Grab it and refine it instantly! "Huo Yuhao, you white-eyed wolf! I am your first soul ring!" ... "Kneel down." Huo Yuhao's voice was cold. Soul Xiaobai pushed Dai Hao to the ground. "Apologise to my mother!" Dai Hao roared: "I am your father!" "Father?" Huo Yuhao smiled with a knife hidden in his face. "Why didn't you think about this identity when you allowed your servants to beat and scold my mother and son?" Dai Hao collapsed and kowtowed: "Yun'er, I was wrong! I was wrong!" Huo Yuhao looked coldly: "Apologizing is useful, why do you need fists?" ... From the sky, Tang San's dog howled: "My daughter Tang Wutong, come back with me." "Old dog Tang! Look clearly, her name is Wang Dong'er! She is not a chess piece at your mercy, let alone Tang Wutong!" Shenyin was furious: "A mere mortal soul dares to rebel against God?" "So what if I go against God?!" "In the previous life, you erased her memory and changed her name. In this life -" "If you want to touch her, break me first! Otherwise, I will overthrow your divine realm!" Wang Donger grabbed his hand: "Although I don't know what you are talking about, I think you are right! My name is Wang Donger!" Huo Yuhao lowered his head, his bloody smile hiding tenderness: "Yes, you will always be Wang Dong'er." "My eternal Dong'er..."
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Official(23)Scraped 2d ago
A harem is okay, but don't take in girls without thinking.
Since you are focusing on a reborn Huo, don't engage in the kind of plot where your friend's wife can be easily bullied. There are not so many beauties in the original work (Ma Xiaotao, Zhang Lexuan, Ye Guyi, Nan Qiuqiu...). Don't keep staring at Jiang Nannan and Xiao Xiao in your team. Rabbits don't want to eat grass on the edge of their nests. Don't worry about how crazy Teacher Datang's balance is, but he did arrange a progressive love line for each pair. The love can be seen in the original work. Rebirth Huo has also experienced it with them. It's too weird for you to ignore these two. Also, your hostility towards Xu Sanshi is a bit inexplicable. In the original work, after Qiu'er accompanied Lao Huo to the Yuanyang Pot, even Beibei was lowered and scolded Lao Huo. After that, Xu Sanshi stood firmly on Lao Huo's side. I suggest you consider your handling of Xu Sanshi. There is also Zhou Yi. I remember I made a comment before. I can accept your interpretation of Zhou, but many people think it is poisonous. The reborn Huo must not break out with Teacher Zhou. The best way is to simplify and downplay Zhou's plot as much as possible, only let her show her face where necessary, and don't describe it too much, just copy the description in the original work.
He was reborn as a lonely boy and went back to his old ways. The difference is that he changed from an innocent boy to a seasoned man who can also tease women.
After being reborn as a god, his personality remains the same as in his previous life
The reborn Huo Yuhao has become a god, and there is one in front of him. Are the memories, knowledge, and soul guidance skills from his previous life gone? Don't find a place where he can quickly become stronger and run to Shrek. 666
Urging for updates, urging for updates. Come on, the author.
0.0.1 Yuan to read the full text, you can see the quality. Rebirth of waste
Why is rebirth similar to the original work?
Regarding the heroine, I think it is necessary to say something. I suggest that Wang Donger, Wang Qiuer, Xiao Xiao, Gu Yuena, Meng Hongchen, Snow Emperor, and Xiao Xiao in the original work are too wasteful to give to He Caitou.
Isn't your book about eunuchs?
Single heroine? Or multiple girls? I'll tell you later, I'll change it to 5 stars later.
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Official(23)Scraped 2d ago
A harem is okay, but don't take in girls without thinking.
Since you are focusing on a reborn Huo, don't engage in the kind of plot where your friend's wife can be easily bullied. There are not so many beauties in the original work (Ma Xiaotao, Zhang Lexuan, Ye Guyi, Nan Qiuqiu...). Don't keep staring at Jiang Nannan and Xiao Xiao in your team. Rabbits don't want to eat grass on the edge of their nests. Don't worry about how crazy Teacher Datang's balance is, but he did arrange a progressive love line for each pair. The love can be seen in the original work. Rebirth Huo has also experienced it with them. It's too weird for you to ignore these two. Also, your hostility towards Xu Sanshi is a bit inexplicable. In the original work, after Qiu'er accompanied Lao Huo to the Yuanyang Pot, even Beibei was lowered and scolded Lao Huo. After that, Xu Sanshi stood firmly on Lao Huo's side. I suggest you consider your handling of Xu Sanshi. There is also Zhou Yi. I remember I made a comment before. I can accept your interpretation of Zhou, but many people think it is poisonous. The reborn Huo must not break out with Teacher Zhou. The best way is to simplify and downplay Zhou's plot as much as possible, only let her show her face where necessary, and don't describe it too much, just copy the description in the original work.
He was reborn as a lonely boy and went back to his old ways. The difference is that he changed from an innocent boy to a seasoned man who can also tease women.
After being reborn as a god, his personality remains the same as in his previous life
The reborn Huo Yuhao has become a god, and there is one in front of him. Are the memories, knowledge, and soul guidance skills from his previous life gone? Don't find a place where he can quickly become stronger and run to Shrek. 666
Urging for updates, urging for updates. Come on, the author.
0.0.1 Yuan to read the full text, you can see the quality. Rebirth of waste
Why is rebirth similar to the original work?
Regarding the heroine, I think it is necessary to say something. I suggest that Wang Donger, Wang Qiuer, Xiao Xiao, Gu Yuena, Meng Hongchen, Snow Emperor, and Xiao Xiao in the original work are too wasteful to give to He Caitou.
Isn't your book about eunuchs?
Single heroine? Or multiple girls? I'll tell you later, I'll change it to 5 stars later.
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