Douluo: Wuhun Renhuang Banner, Let's Go Inside and Say It

Coming from Douyin, I was so excited that I felt like I was about to cry. If the author can't write the emotional drama well, don't force yourself. Don't ruin the novel because of the emotional drama. Come on! I downloaded this QQ reading specifically because of you.

I have never authorized any hat storytellers, and even before you reviewers came here, I didn't know there was a blogger who updated at the same time as me. I can clearly say that he was moving illegally. If he updates the latest chapter more than ten or twenty times, I actually don't bother to care, but you are just disgusting. You will carry as much as I update. The person who tweeted also instigated the people who watched the video to come here and kidnap me morally, telling me to leave it alone. Why should I allow him to move it? He also said in the video that I warned him. How did I warn him? I didn't even know this guy existed until you guys told me.

I feel that the plot written by the author is quite enjoyable, but the person who intercepted Ah Yin did not consider his own safety. For example, if the protagonist intercepted Ah Yin, would he be retaliated against? , For another example, when you come to the waterfall, will there be a barrier no lower than that of the Soul Emperor blocking it? , Another example is whether Tang Hao will notice if he has absorbed a hundred thousand year soul bone. In the plot? If I remember correctly, Tang Hao added a layer of soul power seal to the soul bone. And Tang Hao is not a fool, not to mention there is a hundred thousand year old soul bone at that waterfall, he will definitely arrange a soul power barrier no less than that of the Soul Emperor. And in the plot, if Tang Hao didn't love Ah Yin, then he would at least put a soul power seal on the 100,000-year-old soul bone. And if Tang Hao really loved Ah Yin in the plot, he would also have placed a soul barrier in front of the waterfall to prevent other soul beasts from disturbing him. But the protagonist is a bit better here, he has no sense of precaution at all. And you must know that these hundred thousand year soul bones are rare products. Moreover, you must know that the protagonist has no system and no background. He cuts off Hu Lanyinhuang in such a grand manner. It is just that he has set a time bomb on himself. You know, Tang Hao has the soul ring of the Blue Silver Emperor on his body, and although the soul of the Blue Silver Emperor is in the soul bone and the seed, maybe there is also the soul of the Blue Silver Emperor on the soul ring. Tang Hao locates the protagonist through the induction of the soul ring. And the protagonist will definitely have a lot of contact with Tang San. After all, in order to torture Tang San, he must come into contact with Shrek, and the protagonist has a hundred thousand year soul bone. Isn't this just a time bomb for himself? Moreover, the protagonist currently has no background at all. Chun Chun is looking for death.

Well enough. Just watched it for so long. There is something wrong with the male protagonist's mentality. And the title of the book is The Holy Son of Wuhundian. I watched over 30 episodes of this. First of all, I didn't want to enter the Wuhun Palace. The second thing is that there are multiple female protagonists. Not interested in Xiao Wu. When will the other heroines get together? There are actually multiple female protagonists and I didn't see the male protagonist going to collect a harem. Rongrong and the others are at Shrank Academy. Don't want to cut off the beard? Or what the situation is. I have read a lot of Douluo Tongwen. You've watched 30 episodes of this book and can't argue with the title or introduction. The male protagonist has no intention of competing for hegemony. I still hope the author can revise it sooner.

Actually, I don't know what's going on. I planned to start V in Chapter 26, otherwise I would have set it up long ago if there were so many people yesterday.

If you Yanzu have any ideas, please share them below. If they can be connected with the plot, you can adopt them as appropriate. I am a newbie, if you feel that the writing is unreasonable, you can point it out and I will modify it later.

It was okay before chapter seven, but it was outrageous in chapter seven. He trusted those Wuhundian people more than his mother-sang. He said whatever he asked, and exposed all his abilities. It was just a novel. Otherwise, if his brain was divided into eight sections, he would think that they did this because they were kind to him.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

I came here from Douyin and haven't read it yet, but the writing style on Douyin is quite attractive. I saw that the author's word count is not many, and I also read the comments and found that overall it should be very good. I have read a lot of Douluo, Doupo and others, and I think this book will be good enough in the future. As a reader, I will give you my impressions of other works in the past! ! ! 1. If this is your first time as an author, you must make an outline. At least you must complete the outlines of 1.2.3.4...10 Volumes. The outline of each volume should be as complete as possible to complete the various plot stages, storyboards, climaxes, foreshadowing, cool points, when to highlight, and the foreshadowing of emotional lines (considering encounters, character descriptions, environment portrayals, current character emotions, etc.). A good work must have an outline. 99% Of works do not have an outline. Pinji collapsed in the later period, and Carvin was even more common. The most difficult thing about writing was not how to develop the plot, but how to develop the plot, but it was difficult to describe the demeanor, actual logic, and order of the characters' appearances in the current scene. For example: The two looked at each other for a long time, holding back the tears but didn't know how to speak - (looking at each other with bright eyes, but speechless and choked), it's over between us - (last night's stars have passed, and the green mountains in my eyes are fading away). A good way of writing will allow readers to get very big fantasies in their senses and thoughts, and it can also allow the author to express the depth of the current environment in a simple, powerful and cultural way (such as fighting scenes, Hongda background description, and the description of the heroine on the emotional line). Why are many fan fictions said to be... Shuishu, Xiaobaiwen, etc., Is because most fan fiction is written in vernacular, and because most authors have poor writing skills, they have to write two sentences to write something that can be summarized in one sentence, but in the end they find that the sentence cannot express the effect they want. This situation is reflected in emotional scenes, fighting scenes, and war scenes. 2. Characterization: This is very important. Many fan authors make mistakes and lose fans by writing a large number of characters but no plot, or they have a plot but it is watery. In short, in one sentence, important characters need foreshadowing, characterization, environmental depiction, and background narrative (for example: the arbitrary and eternal wilderness). , The ruthless emperor who has been reincarnated for eternity just waiting for your return, the graceful and luxurious Medusa, etc.), You will find that a character who can be loved and remembered vividly must be one who can burst out the spark of love through the environment, background, character portrayal, and character emotion without changing the original character (such as: a cold girl) Why is Medusa Wang so popular? Because even if she falls in love with Xiao Yan, she is still the queen and still goes her own way, but she will more or less consider Xiao Yan's feelings in the process, instead of relying on the protagonist's halo to lick the protagonist when she sees him. She loves one, accepts one, which is just a stallion novel) So a A successful character must be in line with reality and have his own independent thinking, rather than standing in the protagonist's world and revolving around the protagonist's world. Each important character must have his own data line, just like in reality, everyone has his own destiny trajectory and does not live around anyone. This is very important. If this cannot be overcome, no matter what type of book you write, it will only be a failure. 3. Emotional line: I have to say here that fan fiction should not consider whether there is a harem or not, whether there is a female protagonist, or whether there is only a female protagonist. First of all, from the reader's point of view, it must be difficult to reconcile, so you read the fanfic. Secondly, what the author needs to do is to solve the problem of fanfics that are difficult to reconcile. The key point here is "difficult to reconcile". Difficult to reconcile does not necessarily mean love. Secondly, don't randomly break up CPs for no reason. The protagonist can open a harem, but don't open a harem without thinking, because you don't have so much space to describe the plot for the character. For example: If you accept 10 or even 20 women, do you need to describe them? If you don't describe it, you will be told that you just accept it and don't use it. What's the difference between you and a scumbag? It's better not to accept it. Then if you don't accept the heroine, it will appear again. There will be no emotional drama, and it will become more and more boring. Especially in fan fiction, the protagonist has traveled through time and is still a single? What does it look like? Looking for abuse? Therefore, there must be a female protagonist, and secondly, not too many. A maximum of about 3 is enough for you to write. You can review all the great fantasy novels. With such a big macro background, the protagonist only accepts a few women, not just 3-4, so why do fanfics have to have dozens of them. He is the female protagonist. There is a protagonist because she is also a character in half of the book. If you don't have a male protagonist in 10 chapters, you will be scolded. The same is true for female protagonists. Therefore, the solution to the difficult problem is to decide the route that the protagonist will take. Which three or two female protagonists should be included? Finally, according to the route, each It is through contact, chance, dispute, confrontation or assistance that you can have the opportunity to fall in love only after you meet and make friends and develop friendship. Instead of thinking that you liked her very much before time travel in your previous life before you have met her in person, and that you wish you could push her to the ground and rub her when you meet her, you must be practical, close to reality, and logical. In reality, when we look at a photo, it looks different from the person we are, let alone traveling through a virtual world, right? The last thing is not to tear down the cpc for no reason, especially the Tang San Rabbit pair. This is the main line. If you destroy the main line, it will be difficult for you to solve the problems of the branch lines. People like Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue can solve the problems without accepting them and become confidants, benefactors, comrades, comrades, and communities of interests. They can solve them without having feelings. After the question, spend less space describing it, and describe so many women's nymphomaniac fantasy dramas about the protagonist, especially the kind that is so handsome, the protagonist's aura attracts, and is so stupid that you feel speechless when you look at it. Secondly, the protagonist must be decisive and decisive in his feelings for the other party, and don't fish for her. We are in the 21st century, not like the 80s and 90s. We should focus more on the essence of each stage, instead of dragging out the plot and dragging out the emotions. In the end, the readers feel that the protagonist is a useless person who just grinds off the trash. The protagonist in the author's works is the reader himself. You must understand this. No one who reads a book wants to be a trashy, grindy, low IQ, and crooked god of war. , I hope that I can be a person with a story who has had a hard journey but is rewarded, who should be ruthless but not merciless, who should shock the world and never be a wretched old man, who should never tolerate a slap in the face, (along the way, go round and round, come back to the story of one person, or the story of you always accompanying me along the way) story, story, story, tell the important things three times. 4. The last point is specific to the plot of Douluo. Many Douluo fans only write about the academy battles, especially focusing on the Elite Conference. Once this node is written, a lot of homework will not be written. In fact, what I want to say is that Douluo 1 is divided into 4 parts, 1 is the development period, which is the growth period + academy period + early battle + layout period (foreshadowing), 2. Quickly reach the national elite battle chapter + layout to assist the Wuhun Palace war or Sly The battlefield of the Ke War (referred to as the battlefield) is divided into many aspects such as interests, future situation, etc. It is also the point where the protagonist officially comes to oppose Tang San. 3. The layout of the God War Chapter, where heroes rise together, thousands of races stand, gods compete for hegemony, chaos in the world, who is in charge! ? Rising from ruin and reviving from destruction, the author should think about how to write the fights of these macro-level moves. 4. The final chapter of the War of Gods, where should the protagonist go, whether there are any memories in the world, and what is the end of God? Should he embark on the road of no return, fight that day, kill the ancestor, break this prison cage, or disappear in the long river of fate and become the blood food of reincarnation. Finally, I hope the author will persevere. Writing is not easy, and creating is even harder, but nothing in the world is easy. If you write, you must keep updating 2 times and write well. Don't let down the fans who follow you. I look forward to the author's vigorous efforts to write more exciting stories! ! ! Prosperous cultural fortunes

Many readers of Yanzu think the cover is ugly, mainly because I can't find a suitable picture. You can't use the AI ​​pictures of Douluo women. If you have any recommendations, you can post them for me to take a look at. If they look good, use them.