Douluo: Deceived Poseidon Jiukao, Tang San Broke the Defense!
About This Novel
"The fourth test of the Destruction God Test, triggering the Poseidon God Test, has been completed..." "The 9th test of the God of Destruction Test, the position of Shattered Sea God, has been achieved..." ... Carefully travel through the world of Douluo and awaken your twin martial spirits: Blue Silver Overlord Spear, Killer Whale Evil Demon Ax, Because the evil and domineering killer whale Demon Ax Wuhun was valued by the Holy Spirit Religion, he was established as the Holy Son. And because the Blue Silver Overlord Spear Spirit was valued by the God of Destruction, he was used as a secret weapon to plot against Tang San, and went to defraud the Poseidon God. Therefore, Zhou Xie joined the Tang Clan and became the leader of the Tang Clan with the help of the Blue Silver Overlord Spear Spirit, which attracted Tang San to grant him the Poseidon Divine Test. Joined Shrek again and became the Son of God of Poseidon Pavilion. Together with Xuanzi, the Supreme Elder of the Holy Spirit Sect, he framed Shrek. Is it mediocre to dare not cause trouble? On the first day of school, he killed mediocre teacher Zhou Yi on the spot. On the shore of Poseidon Lake, Ma Xiaotao's arm was blown away with one shot, and his martial soul was swallowed up, causing the evil fire phoenix to fall into a grass chicken. Yan Shaozhe angrily questioned the crime, showed the power of the sea god, and forced him to kneel down. Zhou Zhou said: "Poseidon Pavilion? Bright Holy Dragon Mu Lao? You are just a slave of my Tang family? The successor of Poseidon is here, why don't you kneel down!"
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Official(33)Scraped 3d ago
It's so fun. In fact, destruction itself is like expanding the divine realm. Tang San wants to take control of the world.
After Buddha of the Tang Dynasty, Thousand Buddhas, and Xu Buddha, another Buddha was born, and he felt a little physically unwell.
Darkness is regarded as inhumanity + killing people randomly, and they don't understand the core of the subject matter at all.
It is not a dark fanfic at all, but an illogical venting of violence + low-level emotional output. The protagonist has neither the revenge motivation nor the basic behavioral logic that dark themes should have, and the whole process is like a headless psychosis. The core of true dark literature is the struggle of human nature in extreme circumstances. For example, the protagonist's survival breaks through the bottom line due to revenge, but there is struggle, cost, and logic. Your kind of darkness is darkness for the sake of darkness. To equate darkness with sociopathy completely misrepresents the core of the genre. Testing the power of skills and killing an innocent classmate with one shot is the most typical senseless violence. There is no motive for revenge (the classmate did not offend him), no pressure for survival (not forced to protect himself), and even no interest appeal (killing the classmate will not do him any good). It is purely a murder plot arranged by the author to pretend to be dark. In essence, it is no different from killing someone with a psychosis. The first few chapters I wrote have neither the depth of dark themes nor the logic of refreshing writing, leaving only disgusting psychotic performances.
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The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is so poor😐😐😐 It's all for nothing
First of all, as the author said at the beginning of the first chapter, I am not against dark writing, nor do I bring it into Shrek's perspective. I look at it with a fair reader's mentality. I can only say that the antagonist scene is too idiotic. I thought it was quite interesting at the beginning, but this kind of brainless writing method became unbearable as the chapters went on. The author's antagonist scene is like two idiots having a conversation. You kneel down and the other person says yes. If it doesn't sound good, this work will end sooner or later in a discontinued or unfinished way.
Worth reading, but the chapters are a bit short
This looks good, but the update speed is too slow. The update speed is not as fast as what I can see.
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Official(33)Scraped 3d ago
It's so fun. In fact, destruction itself is like expanding the divine realm. Tang San wants to take control of the world.
After Buddha of the Tang Dynasty, Thousand Buddhas, and Xu Buddha, another Buddha was born, and he felt a little physically unwell.
Darkness is regarded as inhumanity + killing people randomly, and they don't understand the core of the subject matter at all.
It is not a dark fanfic at all, but an illogical venting of violence + low-level emotional output. The protagonist has neither the revenge motivation nor the basic behavioral logic that dark themes should have, and the whole process is like a headless psychosis. The core of true dark literature is the struggle of human nature in extreme circumstances. For example, the protagonist's survival breaks through the bottom line due to revenge, but there is struggle, cost, and logic. Your kind of darkness is darkness for the sake of darkness. To equate darkness with sociopathy completely misrepresents the core of the genre. Testing the power of skills and killing an innocent classmate with one shot is the most typical senseless violence. There is no motive for revenge (the classmate did not offend him), no pressure for survival (not forced to protect himself), and even no interest appeal (killing the classmate will not do him any good). It is purely a murder plot arranged by the author to pretend to be dark. In essence, it is no different from killing someone with a psychosis. The first few chapters I wrote have neither the depth of dark themes nor the logic of refreshing writing, leaving only disgusting psychotic performances.
Suggestions (the author will read them often)
If you have any suggestions, you can post them here and discuss the plot together.
Update speed is too slow update update update update
The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is so poor😐😐😐 It's all for nothing
First of all, as the author said at the beginning of the first chapter, I am not against dark writing, nor do I bring it into Shrek's perspective. I look at it with a fair reader's mentality. I can only say that the antagonist scene is too idiotic. I thought it was quite interesting at the beginning, but this kind of brainless writing method became unbearable as the chapters went on. The author's antagonist scene is like two idiots having a conversation. You kneel down and the other person says yes. If it doesn't sound good, this work will end sooner or later in a discontinued or unfinished way.
Worth reading, but the chapters are a bit short
This looks good, but the update speed is too slow. The update speed is not as fast as what I can see.
Update update update update update update
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