Douluo's Ice Demon Yuhao

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The protagonist is disgusting to death, a thousand times worse than the original Huo Yuhao!

This is really unreasonable if we have to kill Tang San, the final boss behind the scenes.

Everyone who has read Douluo Dalu knows the legendary life of Huo Yuhao, but if the legendary "Huo Gua" turned into a salted fish boy, how would the story develop?

Well, how should I put it, the protagonist's worldview is too outrageous. It's a bit ridiculous to come to a world where the jungle is strong and still want peace in the world. There are also characters whose genders have been changed, which is acceptable, but the main character has a big problem. In the early stage, it always followed the main line of the original work. From the beginning of the belly-tightening Ice King, it started to become darker. I don't understand why it was written like this. If you want to follow the dark series, you can re-write a main line yourself. It is not suitable to follow the dark style of the original work, and the overall effect of the novel is not good. I am trying my best. (In fact, if you want to have a good income, you can actually adopt the original plot like other Douluo or Dou Po and recruit girls or single girls, which will make it easier to achieve results)

This is the ugliest fanfic I've ever seen. I won't tell you anything about the main character. You guys will feel uncomfortable just reading it.

The protagonist wants to destroy the Holy Spirit Cult. Is there a problem? You must know that there is no absolute light and no absolute darkness. You want to create a perfect world, but it's impossible. It's a bit too natural and idealistic to awaken the evil spirit, and then be pulled over by the Holy Spirit Cult and become an evil soul master. You can completely change the way to guide the Holy Spirit Cult and change the Holy Spirit Cult instead of blindly killing and killing. This approach is no different from Tangshan, ah, you are some evil soul beasts, and blah blah blah, so I want to kill you. Now Huo Yuhao kills people from the Holy Spirit Cult, and there is no difference. Even the membership account devours souls, which makes him look even more evil.

A modern man travels into fantasy. I want to change the world. I want to create a world without soul beasts. I want everyone to be at peace. Let's not talk about whether this idea is right or not. How can you destroy all the soul beasts by yourself? Don't you need manpower? Why do those people want to destroy soul beasts with you? What if there are no soul beasts and soul masters? Development, other people come to the world of cultivating immortals with you just because of your small favors, and they come to the world of cultivating immortals with you and say, the people who cultivate immortals are too powerful and do too much harm to the civilians. I want to suck away all the spiritual energy, everyone should stop cultivating immortals, civilians are easier to control. There are still people who support this concept, pure idiots

There is Dong Hao's handwritten book "The Abnormally Dancing Lepidoptera" on station b. I recommend everyone to read it and talk about my views on Wang Dong's character. When writing about Dou Er, Wang Dong must be a character that cannot be avoided. This character is much more difficult to deal with than imagined, because in the original work, she is a very separated person. This book will undoubtedly be anti-Tang Dynasty, so how to deal with the relationship with Wang Dong will be very difficult. What do we criticize about the original work? It was Tang San who controlled Wang Dong, obliterated her personality, and turned her into his own puppet and a tool to kidnap Huo Yuhao. Some people might say, isn't it as simple as writing a fanfic to make up for regrets and prevent Wang Dong from becoming Tang Wutong? However, what should we rely on to maintain Wang Dong's personality? She will eventually regain her memory, and will be caught between the protagonist and Tang San, facing a painful choice. Some people may say that as long as he is stronger than Tang San and defeats Tang San, Wang Dong's personality can be preserved. But in my opinion, Wang Dong is still a puppet, but he has just changed from Tang San's puppet to the protagonist's puppet. Her pride and spirit are never worth mentioning. Does anyone have any inspiration?

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