
Douluo Dragon King: Spirit of the Stars
by Total Traces
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Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Knowing clearly that Tang San was not easy to get along with, he still ran up to Tang Wulin and jumped around, convinced.
It looks good. Stop writing typos. Also, my reading is a bit confusing. The awakened martial spirit is the star gun. Why is the second martial spirit also the star gun? Remember to write well and clearly. I don't know if others can understand it. I don't understand it and it feels a bit confusing.
The top martial soul only has level 5 soul power? I really dare to write
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Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
Knowing clearly that Tang San was not easy to get along with, he still ran up to Tang Wulin and jumped around, convinced.
It looks good. Stop writing typos. Also, my reading is a bit confusing. The awakened martial spirit is the star gun. Why is the second martial spirit also the star gun? Remember to write well and clearly. I don't know if others can understand it. I don't understand it and it feels a bit confusing.
The top martial soul only has level 5 soul power? I really dare to write









