The Girl with Noble Traces
by Lazy Cancer Patients Should Not Rush
About This Novel
"No!" A girl screamed, and then a warm current flowed down her face. "No... Don't... Cry, I will be hurt... And... Mo Ying... I... Love you!" Said the man in the girl's arms. "Because you love me, I order you not to die!" The girl said to the man in her arms. (Finale plot)
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Official(17)Scraped 3d ago
Well... I'm not scolding you, but I really can't stand Mary Sue, and what about me, Lord Gilgamesh and Lord Qila? How could an original heroine get the Wheel of Judgment belonging to Lord Gilgamesh? Also, the character creation is not good, she is worse than me. Qi Ling is not a person who can talk like that. Even if it is to save Yin Chen, you did not explain clearly where Mo Ying came from. It feels like she came out of thin air, and the talent of Wang Jue's apostle should be the same. Generally, Wang Jue finds the apostle and gives the seal. It is impossible for two apostles to jump out of thin air. Writing a text that applies other people's settings cannot be like this. Change other people's settings to be full of loopholes. Another bug is that Qi Ling and Yin Chen don't look alike... I suggest the author make some changes. I'm really not scolding you. It's not easy to write it out.
OK, but buggy Only the apostles can enter the Soul Tomb, not the king! I seriously doubt that you have seen the traces of the king!
Bad streets
It's out of Jueji's style, and the characters are poorly developed.
stupid
Creation requires consideration of many factors. Firstly, is it fun to make up things? The character's demeanor, personality, facial expressions, language, movements... Don't you think it's very "artificial"? You can't grasp these. Still writing a book? You see for yourself. Don't do this again - the rhythm of death. More words does not mean that the book is good!!!
Author, please don't stop updating!
I really like reading books like Jue Ji. Last time I bought a 3cm thick Jue Ji in the supermarket. The content inside is similar to this. When I watched it before, I always thought Yin Chen was a woman, but it turned out to be a man. The 'he' Yin Chen mentioned should be his apprentice.
Overall, the difference is too big.
The author will update soon, and don't abandon the article.
Why hasn't the author updated it yet?
I wonder if the author has read Jueji carefully?
1. In Jueji, the talent of the king and the apostle are the same (unless he is an eroder). 2. The Horcrux will not change hands (unless he has a talent similar to Yin Chen). 3. Qi Ling's Horcrux is definitely not simple (it is said to be Feng Yuan Deyin's strongest Horcrux, Feng Jin).
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Official(17)Scraped 3d ago
Well... I'm not scolding you, but I really can't stand Mary Sue, and what about me, Lord Gilgamesh and Lord Qila? How could an original heroine get the Wheel of Judgment belonging to Lord Gilgamesh? Also, the character creation is not good, she is worse than me. Qi Ling is not a person who can talk like that. Even if it is to save Yin Chen, you did not explain clearly where Mo Ying came from. It feels like she came out of thin air, and the talent of Wang Jue's apostle should be the same. Generally, Wang Jue finds the apostle and gives the seal. It is impossible for two apostles to jump out of thin air. Writing a text that applies other people's settings cannot be like this. Change other people's settings to be full of loopholes. Another bug is that Qi Ling and Yin Chen don't look alike... I suggest the author make some changes. I'm really not scolding you. It's not easy to write it out.
OK, but buggy Only the apostles can enter the Soul Tomb, not the king! I seriously doubt that you have seen the traces of the king!
Bad streets
It's out of Jueji's style, and the characters are poorly developed.
stupid
Creation requires consideration of many factors. Firstly, is it fun to make up things? The character's demeanor, personality, facial expressions, language, movements... Don't you think it's very "artificial"? You can't grasp these. Still writing a book? You see for yourself. Don't do this again - the rhythm of death. More words does not mean that the book is good!!!
Author, please don't stop updating!
I really like reading books like Jue Ji. Last time I bought a 3cm thick Jue Ji in the supermarket. The content inside is similar to this. When I watched it before, I always thought Yin Chen was a woman, but it turned out to be a man. The 'he' Yin Chen mentioned should be his apprentice.
Overall, the difference is too big.
The author will update soon, and don't abandon the article.
Why hasn't the author updated it yet?
I wonder if the author has read Jueji carefully?
1. In Jueji, the talent of the king and the apostle are the same (unless he is an eroder). 2. The Horcrux will not change hands (unless he has a talent similar to Yin Chen). 3. Qi Ling's Horcrux is definitely not simple (it is said to be Feng Yuan Deyin's strongest Horcrux, Feng Jin).
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