
Genius Son's Money-obsessed Pretty Star Mother
by Yaoyaojin
About This Novel
He is a ruthless and ruthless CEO. And she is the reborn Huntress One. Accompanying her was a yellow-faced woman, who also found out that she had taken the title of a concubine. Fortunately, I lost the baby in my belly and gained a lovely five-year-old son in vain. With rebirth, Leyou's life has undergone earth-shaking changes. Not only did he gain space, but he also unexpectedly cultivated his true nature, becoming a poor man and able to make decisions. Become a star, earn a family fortune, bet on stones, start a company, have sex with threesomes, and have an affair with a handsome guy. Cute baby: My dad is in trouble, someone is offering to seduce my mom, and they are also offering a high price to hire my mom to make restricted movies. Cool ex-husband: Come here, buy the other party's company, and find some ugly people to counter him. Cute baby: My dad is bad, and my grandma wants to take my mom on a blind date. Moreover, he is a rich, handsome man. I heard that he is still a childhood sweetheart. Cool ex-husband: What, you can be as handsome as me. Childhood sweethearts don't matter, I'm still your mommy's man. Tomorrow my dad will drag your mom to testify. Cute baby: Dad, you have said this many times, but mom doesn't seem to be happy. It's all because my father didn't know what he was doing before, so he drove my mother away and bullied her. If my mother doesn't want you, I will run away from home and find my stepfather with my mother. Of course, if dad can give me 100,000 yuan, I can consider it and help dad talk it over in front of mom. Looking at his son who was obsessed with money, his eyes were glowing blue, the corners of Ku's ex-husband's mouth twitched in silence.
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(131)Scraped 16d ago
Does the author know why your book is not a hit?
You have to know that what you are writing is about cultivating immortality, and don't turn away from the heroine who is so useless. Just like the paragraph you wrote in the middle, where several men are robbing a woman. This topic is a very hot one. It is written in this article that it is not advisable to turn back, but your ending is written like this. No reader likes to see this. If you write this article as an NP article, more people will like to read it, whether in reality or not? In novels, the strong is respected. This is a hard truth. How can such a powerful backstage for cultivating immortals be written as such a coward for you? Since you have feelings, it doesn't matter whether he loves you or not. They all took it away, but it happened to hurt those few people who were so infatuated with this heroine. The people in the male protagonist's family are simply top-notch, and the peach blossoms are really bad. If the female protagonist were stronger, wouldn't you look down on me? Then I will accept them all. I was devoted to you at the beginning, but you don't want me. Then we will let your son have the incomplete me.
Last night my husband suddenly told me that he likes three people, and I was shocked...
When I was sleeping last night, my husband suddenly told me that he wanted a baby and said he liked the feeling of a family of three. We have been married for more than two years and have never had a baby. However, my husband is still very good to me and always praises me for looking like an 18-year-old girl. In fact, I used to have a bad husband. Fortunately, I met the public account [Xiangruzi]. I did a test for the husband there and understood my husband's quality, so the husband was safe. I am well raised, thanks to [Xiang Ruzi] who helped me, otherwise I would not be as beautiful as I am now. Thank you very much.
Rewrite, change the male protagonist
The male protagonist is enough. When the female protagonist is down, he kicks her away. When the female protagonist is beautiful, she shamelessly follows her. Even though they are divorced, they still call Leyou's parents "Mom and Dad". It's so fucking shameless. Let's not talk about the white lotus and green tea bitch in the book. I asked for the male protagonist to be changed. Even if he is such a scumbag, the female protagonist is better than him.
I think the male protagonist is not a mysophobia but a facial control. Is this also a male protagonist? I'm speechless. I'm not as good as Wen Zhengyu.
The content of the story is okay. The heroine's parents are really stupid and filial. They think that those best relatives want whatever they want, and they do one thing after another. The heroine of this book is really troublesome, and the male protagonist is not strong enough to give the heroine a shoulder to protect her from the wind and rain! It doesn't look good!
I was confused all the way through Chapter 314
(●-●) There are many flaws, but I feel powerless to complain... All the writings written by the best relatives have turned into farming articles. The space for cultivating immortals has not been fully utilized. Moreover, even after cultivating immortals, it still gives me the feeling that the heroine is very weak. Are you sure she was a killer in her previous life? And first of all... The male protagonist, who had no strong love rival, could still be so scumbag to the female protagonist before~ It scared the baby to death... ............ Come on, author!
It's boring to watch, the male protagonist is a scumbag, and the female protagonist is still with him.
Very nice,,,,
The story is quite good, but the author is too lazy, omitting many details, and many details are too simple.
The male protagonist is so weak that I can't stand it anymore
Rating
Community(0)
Official(131)Scraped 16d ago
Does the author know why your book is not a hit?
You have to know that what you are writing is about cultivating immortality, and don't turn away from the heroine who is so useless. Just like the paragraph you wrote in the middle, where several men are robbing a woman. This topic is a very hot one. It is written in this article that it is not advisable to turn back, but your ending is written like this. No reader likes to see this. If you write this article as an NP article, more people will like to read it, whether in reality or not? In novels, the strong is respected. This is a hard truth. How can such a powerful backstage for cultivating immortals be written as such a coward for you? Since you have feelings, it doesn't matter whether he loves you or not. They all took it away, but it happened to hurt those few people who were so infatuated with this heroine. The people in the male protagonist's family are simply top-notch, and the peach blossoms are really bad. If the female protagonist were stronger, wouldn't you look down on me? Then I will accept them all. I was devoted to you at the beginning, but you don't want me. Then we will let your son have the incomplete me.
Last night my husband suddenly told me that he likes three people, and I was shocked...
When I was sleeping last night, my husband suddenly told me that he wanted a baby and said he liked the feeling of a family of three. We have been married for more than two years and have never had a baby. However, my husband is still very good to me and always praises me for looking like an 18-year-old girl. In fact, I used to have a bad husband. Fortunately, I met the public account [Xiangruzi]. I did a test for the husband there and understood my husband's quality, so the husband was safe. I am well raised, thanks to [Xiang Ruzi] who helped me, otherwise I would not be as beautiful as I am now. Thank you very much.
Rewrite, change the male protagonist
The male protagonist is enough. When the female protagonist is down, he kicks her away. When the female protagonist is beautiful, she shamelessly follows her. Even though they are divorced, they still call Leyou's parents "Mom and Dad". It's so fucking shameless. Let's not talk about the white lotus and green tea bitch in the book. I asked for the male protagonist to be changed. Even if he is such a scumbag, the female protagonist is better than him.
I think the male protagonist is not a mysophobia but a facial control. Is this also a male protagonist? I'm speechless. I'm not as good as Wen Zhengyu.
The content of the story is okay. The heroine's parents are really stupid and filial. They think that those best relatives want whatever they want, and they do one thing after another. The heroine of this book is really troublesome, and the male protagonist is not strong enough to give the heroine a shoulder to protect her from the wind and rain! It doesn't look good!
I was confused all the way through Chapter 314
(●-●) There are many flaws, but I feel powerless to complain... All the writings written by the best relatives have turned into farming articles. The space for cultivating immortals has not been fully utilized. Moreover, even after cultivating immortals, it still gives me the feeling that the heroine is very weak. Are you sure she was a killer in her previous life? And first of all... The male protagonist, who had no strong love rival, could still be so scumbag to the female protagonist before~ It scared the baby to death... ............ Come on, author!
It's boring to watch, the male protagonist is a scumbag, and the female protagonist is still with him.
Very nice,,,,
The story is quite good, but the author is too lazy, omitting many details, and many details are too simple.
The male protagonist is so weak that I can't stand it anymore









