Kunlun Emperor

Give up, give up! You're still in the world, you already have the memory of two lives. One was an immortal immortal emperor, the other was a demon old monster that has lived for ten thousand years, and both are old monsters that have lived for ten thousand years. Why do you still need to experience the world? Still tempering your state of mind? Nonsense. If your sect has the resources, just pile them up and that's it, but you don't want them, you have to join the world. If you want any resources, your sect will have to ask for them, or you will get all kinds of troubles if you join the world. I'm still taking revenge. The cucumbers and vegetables are already cold by the time you rise! I'm not saying, author, if you don't know how to write from a high starting point, don't write like this. You have to be reborn as a powerful sect boss in the mortal world, and then you have to go out and ask for it yourself if your cultivation level is gone and you don't want the sect. It means that there are no sect backing resources and no cultivation. In the final analysis, this is not the same starting point and the same road as the direct rebirth of a useless boy from a small family. After talking for a long time, we still end up with the same destination. But the logic of the good-for-nothing boy from a small family makes sense (there was nothing in the first place), but you started out asking for something and ended up not wanting it, which is unbearable. It's good to have a novel starting idea, but this sharp turn has really not been reversed. The logical problem of having cultivation resources but not using them is really unbearable.

I have read several of your novels: I want to express my generosity. It has the unique passion of fantasy, and the concept of the world is also magnificent. The opening chapter is indeed eye-catching. For me, I don't care about the writing. The plot is too clichéd and the plot development is too bad. Most of the characters appear, but the personalities of the characters cannot be highlighted. Furthermore, the plot is cliche and long-winded, with no actual connotation. Most of the character settings feel too brainless, and the behavior does not match the characteristics of the characters. For example, do beggars and emperors talk the same? (The character behaves inappropriately and is prone to making jokes) Around Chapter 30, the princess can be eccentric, but the eldest princess is even less likely to be like this. As the princess of a country, her appearance also represents the royal family. How would she behave like this? As a princess, aren't you proud? (Lack of comparison, no distinction between superior and inferior) People have beauty and ugliness, so there are comparisons. It seems that the author lacks comparison in the article. Most of the characters are similar, and the personality of the characters cannot be highlighted. There are too few villains. Note: If the person is particularly close to the male protagonist, it is generally not a passerby, so there is no need to write more about cannon fodder. (The plot is too bland) Moreover, in a fantasy world where martial arts is respected, there are naturally conspiracies and explosions. Life and death hang on a thread. Everyone is seeking immortality, so naturally they are not good people. Understand. (Long-winded) The biggest problem with this novel is that it is long-winded, without much substance and with too many flowery words. Just to make up the word count. (Explicit writing style) There are too many explicit places in the description of women, and some places are simply innocuous. And it's completely unnecessary. (Male protagonist environment) Generally, it should be written around the male protagonist. The male protagonist is the main line of the story, and everything should be based on the male protagonist. It's not just about other people, it's also important to describe the environment. Only then will the atmosphere be noisy and the reader's impression deepened. Looking at the whole book, the main problems are: first, the writing is wordy, second, the plot routine, third, the character setting and behavior are inappropriate, fourth, there is a lack of connotation and theme, and fifth, the characters are too explicit and repeated. 6. I felt that the chapters were too fast and there was too little essence.

Is this the end? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Here comes another eunuch

Are you a eunuch? Why do you need ten words?

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If you don't like Nangong Ruxue, this role is dispensable. Pig's feet also taught her the top skills in the fairy world.

This book is updated too slowly. Can it be updated more?

It's another eunuch movie. This is really annoying. I have to think about it later...

It would be embarrassing to be a eunuch. The author has a lot of inspiration from Zhetian, a perfect world! I am also a perfect powder. I can't stand the holy ruins