Douluo: Huo Yuhao Returns to Douluo 1 and Becomes the Protagonist

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I've read more than 20 chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. 1. Dai Hao traveled thousands of miles and left his army behind to come back to watch the awakening of a concubine's martial spirit? ? ? In the original work, he didn't even know he had this son. 2. Tang San, Titled Douluo's father Tang Hao, Holy Soul Village, 100,000-year-old soul beast Xiao Wu, if you put these several conditions together, you still can't guess Tang San's identity, you're too stupid 3. You've only known Xiao Wu for a few days, but you're ready to sacrifice your life for her? ? ? (Step over my body first) 4. He advertises everywhere that he is innately full of soul power, but Yu Xiaogang doesn't come to bother him and treats others as fools. 5. I don't understand why I have to go to the far north to absorb soul bones. I don't have to waste several months coming back and forth. 6. A soul saint and two soul emperors hunted a 70,000-year-old ice jade scorpion with ice blasting in the far north? ? ? 7. The Ice Emperor is afraid that the soul bone with the Ice Explosion Technique will be absorbed by one of these three soul masters, which will cause trouble, but doesn't this thing have to have the ultimate ice to absorb it? It was the Ice Emperor who said it himself. 8. The protagonist's character is both virginal and weak, which is annoying

Huo Yuhao is a fool, weak and incompetent and has no position.

The thing that Huo Yuhao pulls out of the middle is worse than even Tang San and is only worthy of being used as a dog trainer.

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After taking a look, if the front style is similar to the back style. Personally, I feel that the author's overall narrative rhythm is similar to that of "Douluo 2: I traveled through time and became Huo Yuhao's biological sister". Although I can't put it into words, the overall plot makes me feel uncomfortable watching it. Personally, I feel that unlike many books, the author's book has few minor problems, but the major ones are very serious. The author's rationality is handled well, but there is a problem with the emphasis on the plot. It may be that the author followed the original work too much and focused on rationality, and no long-term original characters appeared, which makes people curious. There is also a disconnect that I don't know how to describe. It is difficult for readers to understand the feeling of the protagonist crossing from one victory to another. In short, it doesn't give readers a strong desire to read it. But there is no need to change it, because the front is already long enough. Those who continue to watch it show that they are adaptable to this style, and it is possible that even those who have already watched it will be persuaded to quit.

After reading the first chapter, I am sure this book is a piece of cake💩

It smells like Douluo fandom in the early years.

The author has something good, and the writing style is above average. It is a very good work, but I feel that the pace is a bit fast in some parts. The addition of Da Ming and Er Ming is a bit inexplicable. At present, it seems that there are too many female protagonists.

It's rare to see this kind of book nowadays. Although I haven't finished reading it, I can tell that it is a good book among fan fiction. If the author was four or five years ago, you would definitely be very happy to read it.