My Painting Style Was Wrong at the Beginning of Fairy Sword World

The first chapter was good, Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 were pretty good, but why did it suddenly change in the later part? I'm trying to be pretentious, I understand the pretense. That novel didn't pretend, but this one was written... It's awkward. Did someone change it? The first chapter was really good, but suddenly everything changed.

Chapter 4: Absolutely awesome. It's better to change it. It's so wise.

At present, Chapter 18 is still writing about the situation of the protagonist in the world of the Fairy Sword game. The protagonist is considered invincible. He is just learning some swordsmanship and then building the Excalibur to play PK with Chonglou. So far, I personally feel that it is okay. Most of the chapters are about how he met Chonglou before. The only uncomfortable part is that the protagonist touched the other party without knowing that the other party is a woman. There is nothing wrong with liking a beauty. It mainly expresses that the protagonist cannot control himself. He couldn't help it after hugging the other party. However, the uncomfortable time was very short.

I can't recover. The protagonist is the comic sentinel. All his abilities, such as modifying reality, manipulating molecules, and resurrecting life, will be slowly awakened in the future.

Forcibly pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, and also being afraid of using his own power. I'm also working on the plot at the same time

QQ825647183 Can you tell me about the plot and give me suggestions?

It's best not to wear clothes but wear the soul of the blonde angels or superheroes from the original DC comics or villains who will become good, such as Archangel Michael's angels, Black Canary, Supergirl Kara, and Harley Quinn! ! ! It can also be set as DC's Supreme God's experiment and created a system to find the world in the infinite void space, giving you the opportunity to be reborn from the outside reality to the DC-affiliated reality layer world. You have always been a real angel in this life! ! ! There are almost no DC comics, anime, games, or American dramas and novels about being reborn or time-traveling into DC Comics superheroes and then traveling across the world to help people with tragic endings! ! ! Also, the protagonists in most novels always use Han names, which is disgusting and poisonous! ! ! There are also plots where the protagonist goes around saying that he is a time traveler from the Han ethnic group, which is another very disgusting and poisonous plot! ! !

This is one of the few articles that includes Fairy Sword. I still want to support it. I just hope that the author can write Fairy Sword 3457 before 5, so that it will be very comfortable to read.

The protagonist is useless, and the ceiling of combat power is written as a diaosi who has traveled through the world for several years without even a few taels of silver. Borrowing a path and explaining a few chapters of the problem are still just another path for mortals to read. What's the point?

The introduction is well written, and the content... Is hard to describe in one sentence.