Tongtian Shenzhen

The description of details is too poor. When the protagonist gets up from the coffin, he should write down the environment of the tomb and all the items that should be used. Are the people outside the tomb worshiping? Didn't write it either. How many people? Anyone? I didn't write it either, which made me a little confused. In addition, I can't write books but can only read them. Don't say anything about me if you can write it or something like that!

Is there a young lady with QQ

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My father's surname is Chu, my mother's surname is Liu, and my previous life's surname was Shen. Then you were called Xiao Qiyue.

Why didn't the protagonist say anything about his rebirth at the beginning? Or maybe he gave a little bit about it. Besides, he didn't say anything about his cultivation realm. He just talked about the Heavenly Gate or something like that. Who knows what the heck you are doing?

Anyway, it's so messed up that I can't understand it. . . . .

As an old bookworm, I would like to say that first of all, the realm is unclear. What kind of Nine Meridians, what kind of grand slam? It's too funny to watch. Just apply the public's levels. For example, for warriors, use martial arts as the level. Warrior, martial artist, great martial artist, martial king, martial emperor, martial emperor, martial saint, martial god, and so on. If you want to write oriental fantasy novels. You can level up by physically forging your Qi. The first is physical training, then acquired, innate, Baodan, you can also use acquired, innate, and then separate the mortal world, build foundation, golden elixir, Yuanying, transform into gods, etc. You don't follow the path of your predecessors, you insist on getting a cultivation level yourself, and you end up with nothing, so you don't understand.

The cover of your novel uses the original painting of a game! Don't be harsh, because this original painting was painted by me! But use it if you like it. I'm free, but I still despise this kind of borrowingism.

I was attracted by the title of the book, but the article had no clear logic and made me confused.

The author, are you talking too much or talking nonsense? You don't write the central idea and theme of the novel. In order to increase the number of words to make dirty money, the nonsense description is written as an elementary school essay. I am speechless. I can only read pirated books in the future to avoid being cheated. It is not worth the money. I hope the author will think deeply!