The Starting Reward is Xiao Li's Flying Knife

I can't tell the protagonist apart anymore. The whole story is full of intrigues and the protagonist's strength doesn't matter at all. The whole story is about human nature and sophistication. It's quite speechless to watch. There are so many powers and they all work on their own. The protagonist is like a mouse wandering around. Sometimes he's smart and sometimes he's stupid. When he's stupid, there's a sentence to make him reasonable. As for the martial arts, it was all given as needed and boring. It seemed like there were ups and downs but it was as stable as nothing happened. There were so many foreshadowings and it was so tiring to watch. The protagonist really felt like there was no need to exist.

This is the first book I was able to get a contract signed for. The previous two books were not signed, so I stopped writing. This book is guaranteed to be completed, and will never be eclipsed. It is a new writer, and I hope you will support me a lot.

In the past, many readers said that I used too many "ya" words in the characters' language, but now they have been corrected. As for other flaws, I am also trying my best to correct them. Since this is the first novel I have signed a contract for, I promise again that I will complete it. If I choose to be a casual eunuch because my grades are not good, I will never have the experience of writing more than a million words, so I will stick to it no matter what.

The martial arts rewarded by the system are not set well here. If you want to increase the realm, you should set it so that you can only increase the realm by drawing internal strength. As a result, you draw Xiao Li's flying knife and iron cloth shirt to increase the realm. Later, you draw the top internal strength such as Chunyang Wuji Kung Fu. Instead, you didn't add realm, and when you drew the Six Meridians Divine Sword later, you didn't add realm. I'd like to ask if Tiebushan and Xiao Li's Flying Knife can add realms, why can't Pure Yang Wuji and Six Meridians Divine Sword later? This setting is inconsistent.

It's really bad. They keep poisoning. At that time, any small family dared to kill six families, and it was still a silver arrester. He couldn't be blamed for treason and punished the nine families. He had no brains at all.

At the beginning, I suddenly reached the fourth rank. Then, I didn't write down the rank of other people. Anyway, they were all higher than me.

The protagonist's mental state is very serious. All the outrageous operations and plots in the beginning make people feel uncomfortable. The time-travel setting usually makes the pig's feet more mature mentally. But here it seems that he injured his head during time-travel, and his body turned into a 16-year-old, and his IQ turned into a 6-year-old!

There are too many loopholes. In the original work, Xiao Li's flying knife was included in the weapon spectrum. Li Xunhuan is nothing without the flying knives (when fighting Li Xunhuan, the enemy needs to confirm whether Li Xunhuan has flying knives, as evidenced by the number of flying knives. The enemy will never confirm whether there are stones or other hidden weapons around Li Xunhuan). The protagonist used stones to throw hidden weapons twice, and it is estimated that this will happen countless times in the future. Second, the presence of stones twice was unreasonable, especially the second time in the prison car.

So far, it's pretty good. At least you don't know the ending after reading the beginning. This is very important for a bookworm of more than 20 years. The writing style is also good. It's an excellent work, but some memories are a little teary. It is recommended to mark them with dotted lines.

I see no one has commented yet, so I'll give it a try