Build a World

If you were simply writing about online game upgrades, your writing would be quite good, but as the author, you are writing about the main god construction stream, and you should write more about the perspective of the protagonist.

Is Zhang Cheng the protagonist? Or what? They are all writing about Zhang Cheng, but I can't understand it.

I thought it was a construction flow, and the introduction was also a construction flow, but I didn't expect it to be an online game. The protagonist does not do construction, but lets the elves do it. I play the game by myself. It feels very awkward. It's like the protagonist threw 100 yuan on the ground. When a group of people went up to pick it up, the protagonist picked up the money immediately. The worst thing is. Every day when I go online, I watch the protagonist and his two gay friends keep killing monsters. If you want to ask what else besides killing monsters, it is to look at the attributes of the equipment. There is no interaction between players or on the Internet. The protagonist is always either spawning monsters or on the way to spawn more monsters. The construction in the front is pretty good, but the back part is not to my liking and I can't read it.

Author, you can refer to the Glory game in "Full-time Master". You can build your own equipment, BOSS can drop skill books, and the setting is more difficult, etc...

I was hooked within the first five chapters. Not only the plot was addictive, but the punctuation was also addictive. Are you worthy of us readers who endure the plot?

I worked hard in the early stage, and the protagonist didn't appear much. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I said goodbye.

I have read a lot of novels of this type, but I don't really like the protagonist to join the player group. I prefer the protagonist to be a behind-the-scenes boss. It's better, I personally think!

Updates are so slow

This book feels very familiar, as if it has appeared before, but then disappeared for some unknown reason. Even the content is very similar.

NO.1: Punctuation marks NO.2: The protagonist's appearance time is too short NO.3: Once the protagonist's game world goes too far, not to mention the world consciousness, the planet consciousness alone can discover it. If the planet consciousness discovers it, doesn't it tell the world consciousness? Then the protagonist may be bombarded! Click!