Martial Arts Begins with the Immortal Golden Body
About This Novel
Liumenmen, Jinyiwei, Dongxichang, and Shenhou Mansion want Dayong Chao to coerce both inside and outside. Shaolin Wudang, East-West Demon Sect and other good and evil martial arts forces are stirring up the situation and trying to control one side. When the martial arts worlds of Jin, Gu, Wen, Liang and Huang intersect, what changes will happen? Magic secrets, weapons and blades, anecdotes, this is a wonderful and treacherous world of martial arts. Let's see how the time traveler Yun Tianya is proud of the world! (No worries or embarrassment, please feel free to read)
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Official(22)Scraped 26d ago
Isn't there too much worldview?
This is not an urban plot. The integration of different movies and TV shows will not be too messy. Martial arts is mainly about upgrading. If your world view has too many, the martial arts system will collapse. You can't just write low-level martial arts when the protagonist is weak, and high-level martial arts when he is strong. It's not a time-travel. All the high-level martial arts in the early stage have to face the wall and think about it?
Write well
The desert is too long to write about, and there are also zombies, evil spirits, conspiracies and other things that appear in the martial arts world. I don't like it.
Coming from Suzhou, the protagonists are a bit rubbish. They don't kill people, but they see women forced to do so and work as nannies for others. . . .
No heroine, running accounts
The author has repeatedly emphasized that there is no female protagonist, so those who want to see studs can leave. I kept catching up and the plot was very messy and the writing was mediocre. The story has no heart at all. If you remove the golden finger, you will find that you have no impression of the book at all. The characterization skills are not enough, so it is considered a passable Baishui novel.
Small summary
There have been a lot of comments recently, which is very gratifying. Although the words of book friends are sometimes fierce, they stop at the novel itself. In the end, it is the starting point. The quality of book friends is high. Thank you all for your advice, I humbly accept it. This book has many shortcomings, mainly focusing on the comparison of the strength of the original characters in various series, the description of female characters, and the gap between the original books and the film and television images. I admit my shortcomings, and I dare not say that my novels are free of poisonous points, as I did at the beginning. Now we can only keep improving. Thank you for your support!
The Immortal Golden Body is a Kung Fu on the same level as the three-point return of vitality.
The Immortal Golden Body is a Kung Fu that is on the same level as the Three-Point Returning Vitality. The Phoenix God Kick, the Heavenly Double Fist, and the Cloud Dispelling Palm must be integrated into one to form the Three-Point Return to the Vitality. Can you tell me that the Phoenix God Kick is on the same level as the Immortal Golden Body?
After reading the introduction and then reading the comments, I was not in the mood to open it at all.
What kind of person can be given 1 star by so many people?
Bei Ming Sheng Gong is a big poison. Anyway, I was persuaded to give up by this point.
The protagonist is a nosy tough guy...
Everyone is a land deity and then a celestial being
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Community(0)
Official(22)Scraped 26d ago
Isn't there too much worldview?
This is not an urban plot. The integration of different movies and TV shows will not be too messy. Martial arts is mainly about upgrading. If your world view has too many, the martial arts system will collapse. You can't just write low-level martial arts when the protagonist is weak, and high-level martial arts when he is strong. It's not a time-travel. All the high-level martial arts in the early stage have to face the wall and think about it?
Write well
The desert is too long to write about, and there are also zombies, evil spirits, conspiracies and other things that appear in the martial arts world. I don't like it.
Coming from Suzhou, the protagonists are a bit rubbish. They don't kill people, but they see women forced to do so and work as nannies for others. . . .
No heroine, running accounts
The author has repeatedly emphasized that there is no female protagonist, so those who want to see studs can leave. I kept catching up and the plot was very messy and the writing was mediocre. The story has no heart at all. If you remove the golden finger, you will find that you have no impression of the book at all. The characterization skills are not enough, so it is considered a passable Baishui novel.
Small summary
There have been a lot of comments recently, which is very gratifying. Although the words of book friends are sometimes fierce, they stop at the novel itself. In the end, it is the starting point. The quality of book friends is high. Thank you all for your advice, I humbly accept it. This book has many shortcomings, mainly focusing on the comparison of the strength of the original characters in various series, the description of female characters, and the gap between the original books and the film and television images. I admit my shortcomings, and I dare not say that my novels are free of poisonous points, as I did at the beginning. Now we can only keep improving. Thank you for your support!
The Immortal Golden Body is a Kung Fu on the same level as the three-point return of vitality.
The Immortal Golden Body is a Kung Fu that is on the same level as the Three-Point Returning Vitality. The Phoenix God Kick, the Heavenly Double Fist, and the Cloud Dispelling Palm must be integrated into one to form the Three-Point Return to the Vitality. Can you tell me that the Phoenix God Kick is on the same level as the Immortal Golden Body?
After reading the introduction and then reading the comments, I was not in the mood to open it at all.
What kind of person can be given 1 star by so many people?
Bei Ming Sheng Gong is a big poison. Anyway, I was persuaded to give up by this point.
The protagonist is a nosy tough guy...
Everyone is a land deity and then a celestial being
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